旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak more clearly and organize your answer: start with a direct topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons or examples, and avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use appropriate verb forms and countable/uncountable nouns (e.g., “views” vs “a view”). Keep answers to no more than five sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing new landscapes. For example, I like watching countryside fields and small villages pass by, which makes the journey relaxing. Because I rarely see these places at home, those views always lift my mood.

建議: Give a concise, grammatically correct response with clear reasons and an example of when and why you take photos. Use correct verb tenses and possessive forms, and avoid fragmented sentences. Mention how you share photos if relevant, using linking words such as “so” or “and”.

範例: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery when I travel by car because I want to remember interesting views I haven't seen before. For instance, I usually photograph colourful landscapes or historic buildings and later upload the best pictures to Instagram to share with my friends and family.

建議: Answer directly, then give two clear, specific reasons using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like “sports feast play.” Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “however”) and provide a brief example or comparison to support your preference.

範例: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy relaxing on the beach and sunbathing. Hiking to mountain peaks is difficult for me, and I find beach activities such as swimming or playing volleyball more enjoyable and less tiring.

× Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery because they have a really perfect views when I don't see before and it's makes me more happy.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery because it has really perfect views I haven't seen before, and it makes me happier.

The sentence has plural/singular mismatches and other issues. 'They' refers incorrectly to 'the scenery' which is singular, so use 'it'. 'a really perfect views' mixes singular article with plural noun; change to 'really perfect views' or 'a really perfect view' depending on meaning. 'when I don't see before' is incorrect tense and structure; use 'I haven't seen before' (present perfect) to indicate prior lack of experience. 'it's makes me more happy' combines 'it's' and 'makes' incorrectly; use 'it makes me happier.' Suggestions: ensure pronouns agree with their nouns, match articles to noun number, use present perfect for experiences up to now, and use comparative adjective 'happier.'

× I always take photo for scenery outside when I traveling by car because it's really perfect views when I don't see before them and my gallery have a lot of photo of my travel.

✓ I always take photos of the scenery outside when I'm traveling by car because the views are really perfect and I haven't seen them before, and my gallery has a lot of photos from my travels.

Errors include incorrect verb form and noun number. 'take photo' should be plural 'take photos' or 'take a photo.' 'when I traveling' needs auxiliary verb: use 'when I'm traveling' or 'when I travel.' 'it's really perfect views' mixes singular contraction with plural noun; use 'the views are really perfect.' 'when I don't see before them' is ungrammatical; use 'I haven't seen them before.' 'my gallery have' disagrees in number; 'gallery' is singular so use 'has.' Also pluralize 'photo' to 'photos' and 'travel' to 'travels' or 'my trip' depending on intended meaning. Suggestions: use correct -ing form with auxiliary, match pluralization and subject-verb agreement, and use present perfect for prior experiences.

× When I travel and I post it's Instagram or sense and my friends or parents.

✓ When I travel I post them on Instagram or SNS for my friends and parents.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'post it's Instagram or sense' is incorrect. Use 'post them on Instagram' and 'SNS' (social networking sites) if intended; 'sense' is incorrect. Also 'for my friends or parents' is clearer than 'and my friends or parents.' Suggestions: use 'on' with platforms, correct platform name, and ensure the object ('them') refers to photos.

× I prefer sea more than mountains because you can just lie on the beach and sunbathe and if you go to mountains, you.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because you can just lie on the beach and sunbathe, whereas if you go to the mountains you can't.

Quantifier and comparative phrasing errors: 'prefer sea more than mountains' is awkward; use 'prefer the sea to the mountains.' Missing completion after 'you' left clause incomplete; clarify contrast with 'whereas' or 'but' and complete idea, e.g., 'you can't' or describe the difference. Also use articles 'the sea' and 'the mountains.' Suggestions: use 'prefer A to B' structure and complete comparative clauses.

× For me it's really hard to get up to peak of mountains and they don't have a sports feast play.

✓ For me it's really hard to get up to the peaks of mountains, and there aren't many sports events to enjoy there.

Multiple issues: 'get up to peak of mountains' needs articles and pluralization: 'get up to the peaks of mountains' or 'reach the mountain peaks.' 'they don't have a sports feast play' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'there aren't many sports events' or 'there are no sports festivals.' Also pronoun 'they' ambiguous; better 'there' existential construction. Suggestions: use correct articles with 'peak/peaks,' choose appropriate vocabulary like 'events' or 'festivals,' and use 'there are/aren't' for existence statements.