旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one brief reason or example. Reduce fillers (uh) and correct tense and verb forms.

範例: Yes, I sometimes look out of the window when I travel, but I usually sleep on longer journeys because I find it tiring. For example, on my commute home after work I often close my eyes and rest rather than watch the scenery.

建議: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and add a short specific example or frequency expression. Avoid repetition and vague phrases like 'most of all the time.'

範例: Sometimes I do take photos from the car window, but only occasionally — maybe once or twice a month when I see something unusual, such as a colourful sunset or a field of flowers.

建議: Answer directly with a clear preference and provide specific reasons using correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid awkward phrases like 'too much good.'

範例: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful views, and the scenery looks amazing in photos. For example, when I hike in the mountains I often take many pictures of the valleys and sunrise because they look very beautiful on my phone.

× Oh yeah, sometimes, but more of the time I just getting, uh, sleep.

✓ Oh yeah, sometimes, but most of the time I just get, uh, some sleep.

The error is using the present participle 'getting' where the simple present 'get' is required. This is a Verb + -ing form problem (ID 8). Use the simple verb 'get' to match the habitual action described. Also replace 'more of the time' with the idiomatic 'most of the time' and add 'some' before 'sleep' for natural phrasing.

× Sometimes, yeah, yeah, probably like couple of times, but not most of all the time.

✓ Sometimes, yeah, probably a couple of times, but not most of the time.

This is a quantifier problem (ID 14). 'Couple of times' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct: 'a couple of times.' 'Not most of all the time' is redundant and unidiomatic; use 'not most of the time.' Remove the extra 'yeah' for fluency.

× Uh, both of sometimes I just prefer mountains because it's look too much good and scenery I just capture from my phone is too much beautiful.

✓ Uh, sometimes I prefer the mountains because they look much better, and the scenery I capture on my phone is very beautiful.

This sentence contains several errors: incorrect pronoun usage ('it's' referring to mountains should be plural 'they') which is a pronoun issue (ID 12); incorrect adjective/adverb choice and order ('too much good' is ungrammatical) which relates to Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13); and preposition/verb phrase issues ('capture from my phone' should be 'capture on my phone'). Corrections: use 'sometimes' instead of 'both of sometimes,' use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'mountains,' replace 'too much good' with 'much better' for comparative sense, and use 'on my phone' for capturing photos. Combine clauses for clarity.