旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dasar dan kejelasan kalimat. Jawaban harus dimulai dengan kalimat topik langsung (mis. "Yes, I often look out...") kemudian tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung yang spesifik. Hindari kata-kata tidak jelas atau pengulangan. Latihan fokus pada penggunaan present simple, kosakata yang tepat (e.g. "view", "landscape", "people") dan pemisahan ide dengan tanda baca.

範例: Yes, I often look out of the car window when I travel. I enjoy watching people, houses and trees pass by because it helps me relax, and I sometimes spot interesting birds along the road.

建議: Perjelas maksud dan gunakan struktur penuh: topik + penjelasan + contoh. Hindari pengucapan yang tidak jelas (uh) dan kata yang salah (mis. "bed" seharusnya "beach" atau "bedroom"). Gunakan linking words sederhana seperti "especially" dan sertakan alasan mengapa Anda memotret.

範例: Yes, I often take photos through the car window, especially of sunsets. I take them because the colours are beautiful and they remind me of the places I visit.

建議: Perbaiki kelancaran dan kosakata: mulai dengan jawaban langsung ("I prefer the sea") lalu jelaskan alasan dengan detail spesifik dan satu contoh singkat. Perbaiki tata bahasa (plural/singular, article penggunaan) dan susun kalimat lengkap tidak terpotong. Berikan alasan yang jelas dan gunakan kata penghubung seperti "because" dan "for example".

範例: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel relaxed and I enjoy listening to the sound of the waves. For example, I often get up early to photograph the sunrise on the beach because of the calm atmosphere and soft light.

× I like to do we know at the scenery when traveling by car coast car is many people can drive car and I can see the clothes, the scenery and the beautiful birds I enjoy to see.

✓ I like to look at the scenery when traveling by car because many people can drive cars and I can see the clouds, the scenery and the beautiful birds I enjoy seeing.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'do we know at' is incorrect; use the verb 'look at'. 'coast' should be 'because'. 'car is many people can drive car' is ungrammatical — clarify as 'many people can drive cars'. 'clothes' is wrong word; correct to 'clouds'. 'I enjoy to see' should be 'I enjoy seeing'. Also ensure plural 'cars' for general reference and use consistent verbs. Suggestion: simplify sentences into clear clauses and use correct verbs (look at, enjoy + -ing). Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yeah, I like take photo of the scenery outside the car window, specially the scenery of sunset, a beautiful bed and uh, I think Carl.

✓ Yeah, I like taking photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially the scenery at sunset, a beautiful beach, and, uh, I think, cars.

Missing -ing after 'like': 'like take' should be 'like taking'. 'photo' should be plural 'photos' if general. 'specially' -> 'especially'. 'scenery of sunset' -> 'scenery at sunset'. 'bed' likely misheard for 'beach' so correct to 'beach'. The fragment 'I think Carl' is unclear; likely meant 'cars'. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing', pluralize when general, and choose appropriate nouns. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I prefer to see because the sea makes us feel relaxed, we can hear wave birds and we can enjoy sunset and also sunrise.

✓ I prefer the sea because it makes us feel relaxed; we can hear the waves and birds, and we can enjoy the sunset and sunrise.

Awkward phrasing: 'prefer to see' should be 'prefer the sea' when comparing. 'we can hear wave birds' needs articles and plural nouns: 'waves and birds'. Add pronoun 'it' for the sea. Use commas and conjunctions for clarity. Suggestion: say 'I prefer the sea because it makes me/us feel relaxed; we can hear the waves and birds and enjoy the sunrise and sunset.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× For example, I like taking a photo of sea in a.

✓ For example, I like taking photos of the sea.

Incomplete and article errors: 'a photo of sea in a.' is incomplete and missing article 'the' before 'sea'. Use plural 'photos' for general habit. Suggestion: complete the sentence and include definite article 'the' when referring to the sea in general. Grammar problem type ID:8