旅行— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on clear pronunciation, correct grammar, and concise structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct the past/present tense and pronoun errors, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail to support your point. Use a linking phrase if you add an extra sentence.

範例: Yes, I do. I often look out of the window when I travel by car because the passing scenery helps me relax. For example, I enjoy watching tree-lined roads and small villages go by, which makes long journeys feel shorter.

建議: This answer is clear but a bit repetitive. Use varied vocabulary and give a specific example describing what you photograph and why. Keep it to one or two sentences and add a linking word for coherence.

範例: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because I want to remember striking landscapes. For example, I usually photograph dramatic sunsets over fields or unusual roadside architecture to share with friends.

建議: Avoid repetition and grammar mistakes. Begin with a clear preference sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Use correct verb forms and a linking word to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer the sea because the sound of waves and the open horizon help me relax. For example, walking along the coastline and listening to the waves makes me feel calm and refreshed.

× Yes I do when char when I traveled by card I like to look out the window at the scenery and their beautiful then beautiful views make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I do. When I travel by car, I like to look out the window at the scenery because the beautiful views make me feel relaxed.

Multiple issues: incorrect words ('char','card','their'), run-on sentence, tense inconsistency. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestions: use correct vocabulary ('car'), separate ideas into sentences or use conjunctions, maintain present simple for habitual actions ('I travel','I like'), and use 'because' to link cause and effect. Also replace 'their' with 'the' or restructure to 'the beautiful views'.

× Yes I do. I like to take photos outside the car window. For example, when I travel by car, I like to capture some stunning views outside the window.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking photos out of the car window. For example, when I travel by car, I like to capture stunning views outside the window.

Using 'like to take' is acceptable, but 'like taking' is more natural when describing hobbies; this is a verb + -ing form preference (ID 8). Also 'out of the car window' is a more natural prepositional phrase than 'outside the car window'. Suggestion: use 'like taking' for habitual actions and prefer 'out of' for capturing views through the window.

× Well, I prefer the sea because because seeing the sea viewed help me relax.

✓ Well, I prefer the sea because seeing the sea helps me relax.

There is a repeated word ('because because'), an awkward phrase ('seeing the sea viewed'), and a subject-verb agreement error with 'help' instead of 'helps'. This fits sentence structure errors (ID 26) and subject-verb agreement (ID 27). Suggestions: remove repetition, use 'seeing the sea' as a noun phrase, and match the verb to the singular subject: 'seeing the sea helps'.

× For example, when I go around the coastline, I feel I can enjoy the peaceful moment.

✓ For example, when I go along the coastline, I feel I can enjoy peaceful moments.

Minor preposition and noun number issues: 'go around the coastline' is odd for traveling by the coast; 'along the coastline' is more natural, and 'the peaceful moment' should be plural 'peaceful moments' for general experience. This is a present tense/contextual usage issue (ID 6) and incorrect use of quantifiers/nouns (ID 14). Suggestions: use 'along' for movement following the coast and use plural for habitual or general experiences ('peaceful moments').