打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly state your preference first, then give one or two clear, specific reasons. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "your handwriting" is incorrect here; say "handwriting" or "writing by hand"). Use linking words like "because" and "also" correctly, and correct phrases such as "typing faster" and "easy to edit mistakes."

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is messy and typing is easier for others to read. Also, typing is faster for tasks like emails and assignments, and it makes correcting mistakes simple.

建議: Answer directly (desktop or laptop) and give a brief reason. Fix grammar (remove extra words like "the the", use "use a desktop" not "use the desktop writing type"). Use a clear linking word like "so" or "because" to explain the situation. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

範例: I mainly type on a desktop now because my laptop broke about a year ago. Since then I have been using an external keyboard connected to my desktop computer.

建議: Give a specific time or period (e.g., "when I was at school" or "in my teens") and a concise explanation. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases ("not so heavy tasks"). Use linking words like "because" to explain why you don't practice much. Keep to 2–3 sentences and correct vocabulary ("typing skills" not "skills to drive").

範例: I learned to type when I was at school, around age 12, and I improved it gradually through class assignments. However, because I only use typing for simple daily tasks, I haven't practiced advanced typing skills.

建議: Start with a short direct answer (e.g., "I don't actively improve it") and then give specific reasons and examples. If you do any small practices (even informal), mention them (e.g., using shortcuts, touch-typing apps). Use clearer vocabulary ("typing" not "writing" when referring to keyboard skills) and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: I don't actively work on improving my typing because I only use it for emails and short assignments. Occasionally I use keyboard shortcuts and online typing exercises to speed up, but I haven't taken formal training because my current level is sufficient.

× Your handwriting.

✓ Your handwriting is neater.

The student's reply 'Your handwriting.' is unclear and uses incorrect pronoun reference and sentence fragment (no verb). This should be a complete sentence referring to the examiner's handwriting or their own. Use a verb to form a complete sentence and choose the correct pronoun (your vs my) depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: decide whether you mean 'your' or 'my' and include a verb (is/looks/is neater).

× I don't have a very neat handwriting, so I prefer typing because it's so much easier for others to read what I write.

✓ I don't have very neat handwriting, so I prefer typing because it's much easier for others to read what I write.

Use uncountable noun 'handwriting' without the article 'a', and remove redundant 'so' before 'much'. Use 'much easier' rather than 'so much easier' for smoother formal speech. Also 'very neat handwriting' is correct but omit 'a'.

× I also find it typing faster, especially for emails and assignment.

✓ I also find typing faster, especially for emails and assignments.

After 'find' use the gerund directly ('find typing faster'), not 'find it typing'. Also 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match context or use 'an assignment' if singular. Ensure noun agreement.

× And it's simply to edit mistakes and it's a simple to edit mistakes.

✓ And it's simple to edit mistakes.

The phrase repeats and misuses 'simply' and 'simple to edit'. Use one clear form: 'simple to edit mistakes' or better 'easy to edit mistakes'. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

× About a year ago my laptop got broken so I had to use on a separate keyboard for typing.

✓ About a year ago my laptop broke, so I had to use a separate keyboard for typing.

Use active simple past 'my laptop broke' rather than passive 'got broken' for natural phrasing. Remove the extra preposition 'on' before 'a separate keyboard'.

× So yeah, I no longer use the the laptop typing anymore, so I use the desktop writing type.

✓ So yeah, I no longer use the laptop for typing anymore, so I use the desktop instead.

Remove duplicate 'the the'. Use 'use the laptop for typing' and 'use the desktop instead' for clarity. 'desktop writing type' is unnatural; 'desktop' suffices. Also 'anymore' is fine but can be omitted for conciseness.

× I didn't specify a time to learn how to write on a keyboard because it's mostly not so heavy tasks on writing.

✓ I can't specify when I learned to type on a keyboard because I mostly do simple writing tasks.

Use present ability 'can't specify' or 'I don't remember when' instead of 'didn't specify'. Use 'learned to type' rather than 'learn how to write on a keyboard'. 'not so heavy tasks on writing' is awkward; use 'simple writing tasks'. Maintain tense consistency.

× Like I'm not trying to try to write a book or something where I need to, umm, have a skills.

✓ I'm not trying to write a book or anything that would require advanced skills.

Remove filler 'try to try' and use 'write a book' directly. 'have a skills' is incorrect: use 'advanced skills' without an article. Rephrase for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× The skills to drive faster.

✓ The skills to type faster.

'Drive faster' is incorrect in this context; the intended verb is 'type'. Use 'type faster' to refer to keyboard speed.

× So I don't need to be very good at it. I just use.

✓ So I don't need to be very good at it; I just use it for simple tasks.

'I just use.' is a sentence fragment missing the object. Complete the sentence by specifying what is used ('it' meaning typing or keyboard) and for what purpose.

× I don't have the need to improve my writing because as I've said, it's mostly about simple tasks like writing emails, editing articles.

✓ I don't feel the need to improve my typing because, as I said, it's mostly for simple tasks like writing emails and editing articles.

Use 'feel the need' or 'need to' rather than 'have the need' for natural speech. Distinguish 'writing' (general) from 'typing' (skill). Use parallel structure 'writing emails and editing articles' and replace 'I've said' with 'I said' for conversational past reference.

× So it's not about heavy professional typing professions, it's more about simple tasks every day, so I don't need to improve it much.

✓ So it's not about heavy professional typing; it's more about simple everyday tasks, so I don't need to improve it much.

'professional typing professions' is redundant and awkward; use 'professional typing'. 'simple tasks every day' is better as 'simple everyday tasks'. Use a semicolon or full stop to separate clauses for clarity.