打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and eliminate repetitions; start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct small grammar mistakes (e.g., "type on my phone or laptop"), and avoid phrases like "that's hard to say" which weaken your response.

範例: I prefer typing for everyday tasks, although I enjoy handwriting for notes. For example, handwriting helps me remember ideas better, but I usually type on my phone or laptop because it is faster and easier to edit.

建議: Use a clear topic sentence ("I use my laptop every day"), correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Use linking words (e.g., "during weekdays" and "at weekends") and give one specific example of activities you do. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I use my laptop every day. During weekdays I do homework and write essays on it, and at weekends I usually browse the web or chat with friends on WeChat.

建議: Begin directly with the answer ("I learned to type in grade 3"), use correct past tense and avoid filler phrases. Add one specific detail about the learning method using a linking word ("for example" or "we practiced by").

範例: I learned to type in grade 3. In computer class our teacher showed us the correct finger placement, and we practiced typing exercises on the school computers every week.

建議: Give a clear method-focused answer and use correct grammar. Start with a topic sentence ("I improve my typing by practicing regularly"), then add one or two specific practices and use linking words ("for example", "also"). Avoid fillers like "just just" and aim for concise sentences.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I type essays for school and chat with friends on my laptop, and I also do online typing exercises to build speed and accuracy.

× I like the feeling of writing a paper with a pen.

✓ I like the feeling of writing on paper with a pen.

Use 'writing on paper' rather than 'writing a paper' when referring to the physical act of writing on paper. 'Writing a paper' usually means composing an essay or report. Use 'on' to indicate the surface being written on.

× The sounds make me feel really relaxed.

✓ The sound makes me feel really relaxed.

Use singular 'sound' or 'the sound' when referring to the general auditory effect; 'sounds' is not wrong but 'the sound' is more natural here. Ensure article agreement: 'the sound' refers to the characteristic sound of writing.

× Well, typing is much more convenient so I always type in in my phone or laptop in my daily life.

✓ Well, typing is much more convenient, so I always type on my phone or laptop in my daily life.

Use 'on' for devices ('type on my phone'). Remove duplicate word 'in'. Add a comma before 'so' linking independent clauses. 'On my phone or laptop' is correct prepositional usage.

× I tap in my laptop every day.

✓ I type on my laptop every day.

Use 'type on' for using a keyboard on a device. 'Tap' can be used for touchscreens, but 'type' matches the context; 'on' is the correct preposition for devices.

× On weekday I use my laptop to do my homework and on weekend I always tapping on my laptop to search or search something or chatting with each other using WeChat.

✓ On weekdays I use my laptop to do my homework, and on weekends I am always tapping on my laptop to search for things or chat with friends using WeChat.

Use plural 'weekdays' and 'weekends' for habitual actions. Correct verb forms: 'I am always tapping' or 'I always tap' and 'to search for things' (include 'for') and 'chat with friends' is natural. Adjust conjunctions and punctuation for clarity.

× Let me think about it. I learn to type on a keyboard in grade 3.

✓ Let me think about it. I learned to type on a keyboard in third grade.

Use past tense 'learned' for a past action and 'third grade' is the natural phrasing in English. 'Learn' is present tense and does not match 'when' context.

× During my computer class, my teacher taught the whole class how to type and we do some practice on our school computer computers.

✓ During my computer class, my teacher taught the whole class how to type, and we did some practice on our school computers.

Use past tense 'did' to match 'taught'. Remove duplicate word 'computers' and use plural 'school computers' for multiple machines. Add comma before 'and' linking clauses.

× I improve my typing skill just just do more.

✓ I improve my typing skills just by practicing more.

Use plural 'skills' or 'skill' consistently; better: 'typing skills'. Remove duplicated 'just'. Use 'by practicing more' to show the method of improvement.

× Yeah I can. I type for my school work such as essay and I type to chatting with each other and my typing skill become more and more faster.

✓ Yes, I can. I type for my schoolwork, such as essays, and I type to chat with others, and my typing skills have become faster and faster.

Use 'schoolwork' as one word, plural 'essays' for examples, and 'to chat' (not 'to chatting'). Use 'others' rather than 'each other' (which implies mutual action between two people). Use present perfect 'have become' for change over time and 'faster and faster' for comparative repetition. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'skills have become'.