打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one brief reason and one specific example. Avoid repetition ("right now" twice) and fix tense/grammar (e.g., "I was good at handwriting"; "I won").

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for work. For example, I type daily emails and can edit documents quickly. However, I was good at handwriting in high school and even won several school competitions, which shows I still value neat writing.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence then add a specific detail with correct grammar and linking word. Say which device you mainly use and when you use others. Fix omissions ("when I am away from work") and use a linking phrase like "however" or "but" correctly.

範例: I mainly type on a desktop at work because I send about 10 to 15 emails each day. However, when I am away from work I usually use my smartphone to reply to messages and check emails.

建議: Provide a concise time reference and one clear supporting detail with correct tense and word order. Use linking words if adding extra information. Correct phrases like "when I was a child" and "in eighth grade", and use past tense: "taught."

範例: I learned to type when I was a child, in eighth grade, when my computer teacher taught us proper typing techniques. She showed us efficient methods that helped me increase my speed and accuracy.

建議: Answer directly then give one or two specific strategies. Avoid repetition and correct grammar ("when I started"; "emails to my friends"). Mention measurable practice or tools (typing tutors, timed tests) to sound more precise.

範例: I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day; I write work emails and text friends to build speed. I also use online typing tutors and do timed tests to track my progress and focus on accuracy.

× I prefer typing right now in this modern world, typing is so important right now so I prefer typing.

✓ I prefer typing at the moment because, in this modern world, typing is very important.

This sentence repeats 'right now' and uses simple present appropriately; streamline phrasing and avoid repetition. Use 'at the moment' or 'now' once and place commas to separate clauses. Grammar problem type ID:6

× But when I was in high school, I also good at handwriting as I also win the handwriting competition in my school many times.

✓ But when I was in high school, I was also good at handwriting and I won the handwriting competition at my school many times.

The sentence mixes present tense verbs ('good' as adjective missing 'was', 'win' present) with past time marker 'when I was in high school.' Use past tense 'was' for state and 'won' for repeated past events. Also change 'in my school' to 'at my school.' Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, I type every single day about 10 to 15 emails at my work, so desktop mostly.

✓ Yes, I type every single day, sending about 10 to 15 emails at work, so I mostly use a desktop.

Original lacks subject for 'desktop mostly' and has awkward word order. Add subject 'I' and verb 'use' to agree with subject. Also 'at my work' is better as 'at work.' Grammar problem type ID:27

× But when I away from the work I use my smartphone.

✓ But when I am away from work, I use my smartphone.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for present simple continuous state; 'away from work' is the correct prepositional phrase. Add comma after introductory clause. Grammar problem type ID:6

× When I was child and when I am 8th standard, my computer teacher teach us how to type and what are the most efficient way and faster way to type on a keyboard.

✓ When I was a child and in eighth grade, my computer teacher taught us how to type and what the most efficient and fastest ways to type on a keyboard were.

Multiple tense and article errors: use 'was a child' and past tense 'taught' to match past time. '8th standard' should be 'eighth grade' or '8th grade'; include plural 'ways' and correct adjective order 'most efficient and fastest.' For embedded question reorder to 'what ... were.' Grammar problem type ID:5

× I improve my typing by doing it regularly on the phone and I think it's the only way to improve the typing to do it again and again.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my phone, and I think repetition is the only way to improve.

Use 'practice' rather than vague 'doing it'; 'on the phone' better as 'on my phone.' Avoid redundancy 'to do it again and again' by using 'repetition.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× When I start doing the typing it I just do every single day, just writing emails to my friend and also text messages.

✓ When I started practicing typing, I did it every single day by writing emails to my friends and sending text messages.

Tense mismatch and awkward structure: use past tense 'started' and 'did.' Remove extraneous 'it' and use parallel gerunds 'writing' and 'sending.' Use plural 'friends' for generality. Clarify actions and sequence. Grammar problem type ID:26