打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response more natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "used to handwriting" → "used to handwriting" is incorrect; say "I used to write by hand"). Use correct verb forms ("useful for typing" → "useful to type" or "useful for typing").

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient in modern life. For example, as a university student I often need to submit assignments online and type notes during lectures, so typing saves me time and keeps my work organized.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence (desktop or laptop), then give one specific reason. Remove filler words and correct grammar ("online student" → "an online student"; "type on my laptop every day"; avoid repeating words).

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I'm an online student. I use it for attending lectures, writing essays and communicating with classmates, so the laptop is essential for my daily study routine.

建議: Give a concise answer with an approximate time and a brief specific detail. Use past tense correctly and avoid hesitations. Replace vague phrases like "I don't remember the time" with "I can't remember exactly when" and correct verb forms ("started learning to type").

範例: I can't remember the exact time, but I started learning to type when I was in primary school. My grandfather gave me my first laptop then, and I practiced typing while doing homework and chatting with friends.

建議: Respond with a clear topic sentence about whether you practice deliberately, then give one or two specific examples of activities that help. Avoid contradictions ("I don't do it" then "I do it daily"). Use correct phrases ("write essays"; "research").

範例: I don't practice with formal exercises, but I improve my typing naturally through daily use. For instance, I chat with friends, research topics online and type essays for university, which helps me become faster and more accurate.

× I really prefer typing and I think it's more convenient in modern in the modern society.

✓ I really prefer typing and I think it's more convenient in modern society.

The phrase 'in the modern in the modern society' repeats words and uses an unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'modern society'. Remove the duplicate and the extra 'in' to make the sentence natural: 'in modern society'. Use: 'in modern society' not 'in the modern in the modern society'.

× And of course I used to handwriting when I went to the school, but right now I'm a student in Ukrainian university, so I found it really useful to typing.

✓ And of course I used to handwrite when I went to school, but right now I'm a student at a Ukrainian university, so I find typing really useful.

Multiple issues: 'used to handwriting' is incorrect—use the verb 'handwrite' or 'write by hand' after 'used to'. 'the school' should be 'school' in general. 'Ukrainian university' requires the preposition 'at' and an article 'a'. 'I found it really useful' mixes past and present; since he is currently a student, use present 'I find'. Also 'to typing' should be the base verb 'typing' without 'to'. Improve by correcting verb forms, prepositions, and tense consistency.

× Yes, definitely. As I mentioned before, since I'm online student in Ukrainian university I need to type in in my laptop like every day and I do a lot of my homework and laptop.

✓ Yes, definitely. As I mentioned before, since I'm an online student at a Ukrainian university I need to type on my laptop almost every day and I do a lot of my homework on it.

Errors: missing article 'an' before 'online student', missing preposition 'at' before 'a Ukrainian university', wrong preposition 'in in my laptop' (duplicate 'in' and wrong choice—use 'on my laptop'), awkward 'like every day' better as 'almost every day' or 'every day', and 'do a lot of my homework and laptop' is incorrect—homework is done 'on it' (the laptop). Fix articles, prepositions, and phrasing.

× I don't remember the time when I can say that I really learned how I need to typing, but uh, when I only went to school, my grandfather gave my first laptop and since that time maybe I started teaching how I need to type on the keyboard.

✓ I don't remember the exact time when I can say that I really learned how to type, but when I was in primary school, my grandfather gave me my first laptop and since that time I started learning how to type on the keyboard.

Problems: 'when I can say' is awkward—use 'when I can say that' or better 'I don't remember the exact time when I really learned how to type'. 'I need to typing' is incorrect; use 'how to type'. 'when I only went to school' is unnatural—use 'when I was in school' or specify level. 'gave my first laptop' needs object 'gave me my first laptop'. 'maybe I started teaching' is wrong—should be 'I started learning' (not teaching). Correct verb forms and pronouns and clarify timing.

× I don't do it at all right now and I think I have a good skill for typing.

✓ I don't practice it much right now and I think I have good typing skills.

'I don't do it at all right now' is literal but unnatural; 'practice it much' is clearer. 'a good skill for typing' is incorrect collocation—use 'good typing skills' or 'a good skill at typing'. Adjust noun form and article usage.

× Of course I do it like every day on a daily basis when I chat, chatting with my friends or when I research or write essay an an essay to university.

✓ Of course I do it almost every day when I chat with my friends, when I research, or when I write essays for university.

Redundancy: 'like every day on a daily basis' is repetitive; use one phrase such as 'almost every day'. 'I chat, chatting with my friends' duplicates—use 'when I chat with my friends'. 'when I research or write essay an an essay to university' has errors: use 'research' or 'do research', 'write essays for university' (plural or 'an essay' with article) and remove duplicate 'an'. Fix gerund and noun phrases and word order.