打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitations and repetition, correct grammar (e.g. "when I write"), and make the answer more concise and structured: give topic sentence, one clear reason with a brief example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

範例: I prefer handwriting. I find that when I write notes or diary entries by hand, they feel more personal and emotional because the physical act of writing helps me remember details better. For example, after a long day I write a short diary entry by hand and it feels more meaningful than typing.

建議: Speak in full, grammatical sentences and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise reasons using linking words like "because" or "so." Correct phrasing (e.g. "I don't have a desktop") and finish the thought.

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop at home and my job requires me to move around a lot, so a laptop is more convenient. For instance, I often take my laptop to different sites for work.

建議: Give a clear time reference and a concise explanation. Avoid repetition and incorrect articles (say "elementary school" not "a elementary school"). Use a linking word to connect your time reference and reason or context.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school because typing was part of the curriculum. I remember taking a dedicated class where we practiced keyboard drills every week.

建議: Use present tense if you still practice, or past tense if you no longer do. Provide a specific method or routine and a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid unnecessary repetition and improve grammar (e.g. "I practiced every day" or "I practice daily").

範例: I improved my typing by practicing daily with online exercises and timed tests. For example, I spent 20 minutes each day on a typing website and tracked my words-per-minute progress, which helped me get faster and more accurate.

× I prefer prefer handwriting because when I writing some notes or some Diaries, uh handwriting is more emotional and touching because while typing is useful but I like hard handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I write some notes or keep a diary, handwriting is more emotional and touching; typing is useful, but I prefer handwriting.

Errors: repeated word 'prefer prefer' (typo), wrong verb form 'when I writing' should be 'when I write' (present simple for habitual action) and 'Diaries' should be 'a diary' or 'diaries' without capitalization and with appropriate article. Sentence structure was run-on and needed punctuation and clearer conjunctions. Suggestion: remove duplicate word, use present simple for habitual actions, use correct noun forms and articles, and split into clearer clauses using punctuation.

× I type on laptop keyboard every day because in my house I have no I I don't have desktops so I always use a laptop and also my job is more more activity active labor, so I always.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because there are no desktop computers in my house, so I always use a laptop. Also, my job involves a lot of physical activity, so I always use it.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' and awkward negation 'I have no I I don't have desktops' (repetition). 'desktops' needs 'desktop computers' and 'there are' is more natural. 'my job is more more activity active labor' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'my job involves a lot of physical activity.' Suggestion: include necessary articles, remove repetitions, use 'there is/are' for existence, and rephrase unclear noun phrases.

× When I was when I was a elementary school, I learned about long type of keyboard because it was the subject of on one of the subject of the school. So I learned in my child.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I learned typing on a full-size keyboard because it was one of the school's subjects. So I learned it as a child.

Errors: 'a elementary school' should be 'in elementary school' (preposition and article). 'long type of keyboard' is unclear; 'full-size keyboard' is appropriate. 'the subject of on one of the subject of the school' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'one of the school's subjects.' 'So I learned in my child' is incorrect; use 'as a child.' Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('in'), appropriate articles, concise phrasing, and standard noun phrases.

× When I was a elementary school student, I always practice every day and repeat and repeat. I think only repeat and practice is the only way to improve your improve someone's typing skill.

✓ When I was an elementary school student, I always practiced every day and repeated the exercises. I think repetition and practice are the only ways to improve someone's typing skills.

Errors: 'a elementary' should be 'an elementary' (article before vowel sound). Tense mismatch: describing past habit requires past simple 'practiced' and 'repeated.' Awkward phrase 'repeat and repeat' and 'only repeat and practice is the only way' is redundant; corrected to 'repetition and practice are the only ways.' 'typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills.' Suggestion: use correct articles ('a' vs 'an'), match past tense for past habits, avoid redundancy, and use plural nouns where general.