打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer handwriting.”), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect words (e.g., “nurse” likely meant “notebook” or “pen”), and correct grammar (use present simple and articles).

範例: I prefer handwriting. Firstly, I find it faster for taking quick notes during class, so I can capture ideas without stopping to format them. Secondly, writing by hand helps me remember information better. For these reasons, I usually bring a notebook to lectures.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence, then support with a specific example and a linking phrase. Fix small grammar issues (use articles: “a laptop keyboard,” “the teacher”) and use natural expressions (e.g., “take notes” instead of “type it”).

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is portable and convenient. For example, I take my laptop to lectures so I can type notes quickly when the teacher emphasizes key points.

建議: Give a clear time reference (e.g., “in high school” or “during a summer course”) and use correct verbs (“learn to type”). Keep to one or two supporting details and correct grammar (tense, articles, word choice). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “less summer vacation” or “summer location.”

範例: I learned to type properly during a summer course in high school. At that time I practiced every day using typing exercises, and later in college I improved further by typing lecture notes on my laptop.

建議: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give specific methods and a short explanation of results. Use correct grammar (conditional/simple present), clearer vocabulary (“accuracy” not “accurate”), and avoid filler words. Mention one or two concrete resources or practices.

範例: I improve my typing by using free online typing websites and practice software. For instance, I use typing drills and transcribe short articles to increase my speed and accuracy, practicing for 20 minutes most days.

× I prefer handwriting because most of the time I'm not good at typing on the keyboard and moreover computer applications.

✓ I prefer handwriting because most of the time I'm not good at typing on a keyboard or using computer applications.

The original sentence misuses 'on the keyboard' and 'moreover computer applications'. Use 'on a keyboard' (article and preposition) and 'using computer applications' to show the action. Also replace 'moreover' with 'or' to present an alternative. This improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× All most of the time I mean confusing.

✓ Almost all of the time I find it confusing.

'All most' is incorrect; the correct word is 'almost'. Also the sentence lacked a clear subject and verb; add 'I find it' to express the speaker's opinion. This fixes word choice and sentence structure.

× And I usually will bring my nurse to school, so it's very convenient to write everything on my notes.

✓ I usually bring my notebook to school, so it's very convenient to write everything in my notes.

'Bring my nurse' is likely a lexical error for 'notebook'. 'Will' is unnecessary for habitual actions; use simple present 'bring'. Use 'in my notes' (writing inside notes) rather than 'on my notes'. This corrects the pronoun/word usage and tense for habit.

× Well, I prefer to type on laptop keyboard every day because it is more convenient and more portable than desktop.

✓ Well, I prefer to type on a laptop keyboard every day because it is more convenient and more portable than a desktop.

Missing indefinite articles: use 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a desktop'. Articles are required with countable singular nouns. Adding them makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× For example, I usually bring into school to follow lecture, so when teacher sits on key points, I would type it in my laptop.

✓ For example, I usually bring my laptop to school to follow lectures, so when the teacher emphasizes key points, I type them on my laptop.

Original has missing objects and incorrect verb forms. Use 'bring my laptop', 'follow lectures' (plural), 'the teacher', 'emphasizes' (present simple for habitual action), 'type them' (match plural 'key points'), and 'on my laptop' (preposition). Also replace 'would' with simple present for habitual behavior.

× Well, I learned how to tie on the keyboard.

✓ Well, I learned how to type on the keyboard.

'Tie' is a wrong verb; correct verb is 'type'. The past tense 'learned' is fine, so only the lexical error is corrected.

× It's less summer vacation because I'm now is college student and I spend more time to type use laptop in school.

✓ It was during summer vacation because I am now a college student and I spend more time typing on a laptop at school.

The original mixes tenses and has word-order errors. Use 'It was during summer vacation' (past reference), 'I am now a college student' (simple present), 'spend more time typing' (verb + -ing), and 'on a laptop at school' (article and preposition). This corrects tense consistency and structure.

× So in that summer location I I learned how to tie on the keyboard more quickly and learn how to use ebook.

✓ So that summer I learned how to type on the keyboard more quickly and how to use an e-book.

Remove repeated 'I', use 'that summer' (natural phrase), correct 'tie' to 'type', keep parallel verbs 'learned' and 'learned how' (or use 'and how to use') and add article 'an' before 'e-book'. This fixes verb form and article usage.

× Well I you I will search some typing website that is free and so I will use it to type to learn how to type or and I also download some software that have some article that I can type the words in the article then to improve my accurate and my speed of typing.

✓ Well, I search free typing websites and use them to practice typing, and I also download software that has articles I can type from to improve my accuracy and typing speed.

The original contains repeated pronouns and incorrect verb forms. For habitual actions use simple present 'I search' and 'use'. Change 'website that is free' to 'free typing websites'. Use 'software that has articles' (singular 'software' with singular verb 'has'), 'type from' or 'type the text', and 'accuracy and typing speed' for correct noun forms. This clarifies meaning and corrects pronoun and verb agreement.