打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons and a short example. Avoid filler words (uh) and unclear phrases like "technological advices". Use linking words such as "because" and "so" to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and less tiring. For example, when I take notes on my laptop I can type quickly and edit easily, so I can study more efficiently.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence and correct small grammar issues (e.g. "I type on a laptop every day"). Keep it compact and add a brief reason or consequence to enrich the answer.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I don't have a desktop computer. As I use my laptop for work and study, it has become my main device for typing.

建議: Provide a clear timeline and fix tense and article errors (e.g. "my mum bought a computer"). Use linking words like "when" and "since" to make the sequence clear, and add one specific detail about early practice.

範例: I learned to type when I was about seven or eight, after my mum bought a computer. Since then I used the computer every day, so my typing gradually improved through regular practice.

建議: Give a more specific method and avoid vague phrases such as "you know". Mention concrete activities (practice, online exercises, typing software) and use linking words like "by" or "through" to explain how improvement happens.

範例: I improve my typing through regular practice and exercises. For instance, I practise typing for 20 minutes each day and use online typing tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because handwriting is very boring and you can get tired with handwriting and typing is more uh, modern way to of communication I think and uh, in the in the technological advices has a general typing.

✓ I prefer typing because handwriting is very boring and you can get tired of handwriting, and typing is a more modern way of communicating, I think, and with technological advances most people use typing.

Several preposition mistakes: use 'tired of' not 'tired with'; 'way of communicating' is correct rather than 'way to of communication'; use 'with technological advances' instead of 'in the in the technological advices'; also 'advances' (not 'advices') is the correct noun. The sentence was also long and needed minor restructuring for clarity. Suggestion: replace incorrect prepositions and break the sentence into clearer clauses.

× I don't have desktop, that's why I typing on laptop every day and I use laptop every day, so that means I'm generally using my laptop.

✓ I don't have a desktop, that's why I type on my laptop every day, and I use my laptop every day, so generally I'm using my laptop.

Missing articles: 'a desktop' and 'my laptop' are needed. Also verb form and pronoun corrections: 'that's why I typing' should be 'that's why I type' (present simple). Use 'my laptop' to show possession. Suggestion: add 'a' before countable singular nouns and use possessive pronouns where appropriate; use correct verb form after the subject.

× My mom bought computer when I was 7 or 8 years old in the in our home and it was the first time I type on a keyboard and after that I have improved myself because I used everyday computer.

✓ My mum bought a computer when I was seven or eight years old for our home, and it was the first time I typed on a keyboard. After that I improved because I used the computer every day.

Missing article 'a computer' and 'the computer'. Tense errors corrected: 'type' should be past simple 'typed' because narrating past events; 'have improved myself' is awkward — use 'I improved' or 'I have improved' depending on context; 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb phrase). Also 'mum' is British spelling but 'mom' is acceptable; kept 'mum' for UK. Suggestion: include articles before singular countable nouns, use past simple when describing completed past actions, and use 'every day' to mean each day.

× As much as I am writing, I improve myself because, you know, the more practice you do, you improve more. It's easy.

✓ The more I write, the more I improve, because, you know, the more you practise, the more you improve. It's easy.

Awkward and incorrect verb forms: use the standard comparative correlative 'The more I write, the more I improve' rather than 'As much as I am writing'. Also 'practise' (verb) is the British spelling; 'practice' is the noun. Avoid 'you improve more' redundancy — use 'the more you improve'. Suggestion: use correct comparative correlative structure and correct verb/noun forms; use British spelling 'practise' for verbs.