打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và ngắn gọn hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp (ví dụ: "shoes" sai ngữ cảnh). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để kết nối. Sửa lỗi phát âm/ngữ pháp như "I'm not really a computer buff" -> có thể nói "I'm not very tech-savvy"; "write down on things on the book" -> "write notes in a book".

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I find writing notes in a notebook helps me remember information better. For example, when I study, writing by hand lets me organize ideas more clearly and recall them later.

建議: Cần câu trả lời trực tiếp và logic hơn; tránh mâu thuẫn như "I don't want and I need". Sử dụng cấu trúc rõ ràng: nêu chọn lựa, giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý. Chú ý sửa ngữ pháp: "I use my laptop more often because I need it for my studies; I only use a desktop at work."

範例: I use a laptop more often because I need a portable device for my studies and daily tasks. I usually use a desktop only at my company for office work.

建議: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng lặp từ và không cần quá dài. Hãy mở đầu trực tiếp rồi cung cấp mốc thời gian rõ ràng và chi tiết ngắn gọn. Tránh lặp như "I think" hai lần. Có thể bổ sung ngắn gọn cách bạn học.

範例: I learned to type when I was about 10 years old, so roughly 15 years ago. I started with basic typing lessons at school and practised regularly at home.

建議: Cần diễn đạt mạch lạc, tránh câu ngắt quãng và từ sai (ví dụ: "honour" không đúng chỗ; "how to fluent" sai ngữ pháp). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề, giải thích phương pháp cụ thể (thực hành hàng ngày, sử dụng phần mềm luyện gõ, theo dõi tốc độ và độ chính xác) và dùng liên từ. Viết gọn trong tối đa 5 câu.

範例: I improve my typing by practising every day and using typing tutor software to track my speed and accuracy. For example, I set aside 20 minutes daily for exercises and focus on reducing errors, which helps me become more fluent over time.

× To be honest, I'm not really a computer buff so and I like the feeling when I write down on things on the book.

✓ To be honest, I'm not really a computer buff, and I like the feeling of writing things down in a book.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'so' and 'and' together; choose one conjunction. Use a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses. Use the noun phrase 'the feeling of writing things down' rather than 'the feeling when I write down on things', and use 'in a book' instead of 'on the book'. Suggestion: remove 'so' and restructure to 'the feeling of writing things down in a book'.

× So if I have the shoes, I think I prefer handwriting to typing.

✓ So if I have the choice, I think I prefer handwriting to typing.

'the shoes' is an incorrect noun to express preference; likely meant 'choice'. This is a word choice/pronoun/noun error. Replace 'the shoes' with 'the choice' to convey intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'choice' when contrasting options like handwriting versus typing.

× I use laptop more often because I don't want and I need to use it to serve all my learning.

✓ I use a laptop more often because I want and need to use it for all my learning.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop' and the phrase 'don't want and I need' is contradictory and ungrammatical. Use parallel verbs 'want and need' and 'for' to indicate purpose: 'for all my learning'. Suggestion: add 'a' and use 'want and need' rather than 'don't want and I need'.

× So I use it very often compared to using desktop which I often use on my company.

✓ So I use it very often compared to using a desktop, which I often use at my company.

Missing article 'a' before 'desktop'. Use comma before relative clause. Preposition 'on' is incorrect for a workplace; use 'at my company'. Suggestion: write 'a desktop' and 'at my company'.

× I don't really remember, but if my memory serves me right, I think it was about 15 years ago when I was 10 years old.

✓ I don't really remember, but if my memory serves me right, I think it was about 15 years ago, when I was 10 years old.

This sentence is mostly correct; only minor punctuation needed: add a comma before the time clause for clarity. Tenses are consistent: present for 'don't really remember' and past for 'was'. Suggestion: add comma for readability.

× Do it day by day because honour.

✓ Practice it day by day because practice is important.

The original fragment 'Do it day by day because honour' is incomplete and unclear. 'Honour' is inappropriate here; likely meant 'it's important' or 'it matters'. Restructure to a full sentence with clear subject and object. Suggestion: use 'Practice it day by day because practice is important.' or 'Practice it daily because it matters.'

× It is really hard to learn.

✓ It is really hard to learn.

This sentence is correct grammatically and fits context; no change necessary. 'Learn' as a base verb after 'hard to' is correct. Suggestion: none.

× Typing is still a skill.

✓ Typing is still a skill.

This sentence is correct: 'Typing' is a gerund (present participle used as noun) and properly used. Suggestion: none.

× I can learn how to fluent, how to be fluent in using a skill by doing and practising it every day.

✓ I can learn how to become fluent in using a skill by doing and practicing it every day.

'How to fluent' is incorrect because 'fluent' is an adjective; we need the verb 'become' or the adverbial form 'speak fluently' depending on context. Use 'become fluent' and 'practicing' (American spelling 'practicing' or British 'practising') for consistency. Suggestion: change to 'learn how to become fluent' and use consistent spelling for 'practicing/practising'.