打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more grammatical, concise, and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two brief, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, so). Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like “has it require” or “It's take your last time.”

範例: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can save and edit documents easily on my laptop, so I don’t need paper or a pen and I can share files quickly.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with concise, natural details. Replace informal idioms incorrectly used (e.g., “it's like I am it's cup of tea”) with clear wording. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep sentences short (max 4–5).

範例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I work for a digital company and take my laptop to the office. As a result, I type quickly and comfortably, which helps me finish tasks faster.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and concise supporting detail. Correct grammar (past tense for past events) and avoid filler words like “uh” and repeated words. Use a linking word to show sequence (e.g., then, since then).

範例: I learned to type when I was a child after my father gave me a laptop. Since then, I practiced regularly and gradually became confident and comfortable typing.

建議: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give specific, realistic methods and use correct verb forms. Replace vague or awkward expressions (e.g., “2-3 sheets on Ms. words”) with clearer descriptions (e.g., timed typing exercises, practice documents). Use linking words (first, then, finally).

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day. First, I do 10–15 minutes of timed exercises on a typing website, then I type 2–3 short documents in MS Word to build speed and accuracy, and finally I review my mistakes to avoid repeating them.

× 'Typing and handwriting has their own pros and cons, but I prefer typing because it has it require no equipment like pencil or sheet and it's easier than handwriting.'

✓ 'Typing and handwriting have their own pros and cons, but I prefer typing because it requires no equipment like a pencil or paper and it's easier than handwriting.'

'has their' is incorrect because the plural subject 'Typing and handwriting' requires the plural verb 'have' (subject-verb agreement). 'it has it require' is ungrammatical and redundant; use the singular verb 'requires' to agree with the singular noun phrase 'typing' (or 'it' referring to typing). Also use 'a pencil or paper' (countable noun with article and correct noun for sheets). Suggestion: identify the true subject (typing) and use the correct verb form, and avoid redundant pronouns.'

× 'It's take your last time.'

✓ 'It takes less time.'

'take' is incorrect for third person singular subject 'it'; use 'takes'. 'your last time' is unclear and incorrect; likely intended 'less time' meaning shorter time. Suggestion: for third person singular subjects use verb+s (takes); choose correct comparative phrase.'

× 'Well I work in digital company so I often use laptop keyboard everyday and it's like I am it's cup of tea for me.'

✓ 'Well, I work in a digital company so I often use a laptop keyboard every day and it's like second nature to me.'

'work' in present simple is acceptable but missing article 'a' before 'digital company'. 'laptop keyboard' needs article 'a'. 'everyday' as adjective is wrong; adverb form 'every day' is required. 'it's like I am it's cup of tea for me' is ungrammatical; idiom 'it's my cup of tea' or 'second nature to me' is appropriate. Suggestion: add articles where needed, use 'every day' for frequency, and use correct idiomatic expressions.'

× 'My keyboard typing is very fast and I am mastering in it.'

✓ 'My typing on the keyboard is very fast and I am getting better at it.'

'keyboard typing' phrase is awkward; better 'typing on the keyboard' or simply 'my typing'. 'I am mastering in it' is ungrammatical: 'mastering' as a verb requires an object (mastering it) or use 'getting better at it'. Suggestion: use natural collocations and correct verb patterns ('get better at', 'master something').'

× 'I remember when I was kid then my dad gifted me a lap dot and uh it's as a kid I am very excited for typing.'

✓ 'I remember when I was a kid my dad gave me a laptop, and as a child I was very excited to type.'

'was kid' needs article 'a kid'. 'gifted me' is passable but 'gave me' is more natural; 'lap dot' is incorrect word choice—use 'laptop'. 'it's as a kid I am very excited for typing' mixes tenses and pronouns; use past tense 'I was very excited to type' to match the remembered event. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and keep past tense consistent when describing past memories.'

× 'Since then I I master in typing and it's I am very comfortable in typing.'

✓ 'Since then I have mastered typing and I am very comfortable with it.'

'Since then' requires present perfect for continuing states: 'have mastered'. Repeating 'I' is typo. 'master in typing' is incorrect collocation; use 'mastered typing'. 'comfortable in typing' should be 'comfortable with it' or 'comfortable typing'. Suggestion: use present perfect after 'since then' and correct preposition 'comfortable with'.'

× 'So firstly I am very bad in typing so I just have my mindset to improve my typing because it's a daily usage and it's a very useful in contemporary era.'

✓ 'At first I was very bad at typing, so I decided to make up my mind to improve because I use it every day and it is very useful in the modern era.'

'firstly' is acceptable but 'At first' fits better. 'I am very bad in typing' should be 'I was very bad at typing' (preposition and past tense). 'I just have my mindset' is unnatural; use 'I decided to make up my mind' or 'I was determined'. 'daily usage' should be 'I use it every day'. 'a very useful in contemporary era' has article and preposition errors; use 'very useful in the modern era' or 'useful today'. Suggestion: choose correct prepositions, tense consistency, and natural verb phrases for decisions.'

× 'So I just improve my typing by daily 2-3 sheets on Ms. words.'

✓ 'So I improved my typing by practicing two or three pages on MS Word every day.'

'improve my typing by daily 2-3 sheets on Ms. words' has multiple preposition and word choice issues: use 'improved' or 'improve' depending on tense; 'by practicing' explains the method. 'daily 2-3 sheets' should be 'two or three pages every day'. 'Ms. words' is incorrect; correct name is 'MS Word'. Suggestion: use 'practicing', spell out numbers for clarity, and use correct names and prepositions.'