打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer handwriting."), then give one or two specific, well-formed reasons. Use correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid repetition. Add a linking word for coherence (e.g., "because").

範例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me express my feelings more naturally. For example, writing in a notebook makes me feel calmer and more positive, which improves my focus.

建議: Answer directly and give one clear reason. Use simpler, grammatical sentences and avoid filler words and repetitions. Mention practical benefits concisely and use a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so").

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I don't have a desktop. It is convenient to charge and carry, so I can work anywhere I need to be.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and one or two concise supporting details. Use correct tenses and smoother linking (e.g., "When I started college, I practiced on a desktop, and later I used a laptop"). Avoid repetition and keep within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I learned to type when I started college. At first I practiced on a desktop computer, and later I transferred those skills to a laptop. With regular practice, my typing speed improved.

建議: Give a clear method with specific steps and avoid unrelated tools (Grammarly helps writing not typing). Explain practical exercises and use linking words (e.g., "First..., then..., finally..."). Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

範例: To improve my typing, I practice regularly using online typing tests to increase speed and accuracy. I also do daily drills in a word processor, focusing on common words and correct finger placement.

× I prefer handwritten because when I write my feelings what I'm feel actually in actual time, I use handwriting. So this is will this is can be improve my my positive energy.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I write my feelings as I feel them in the moment, I use handwriting. It can improve my positive energy.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement and word choice (Grammar problem type ID 27 and 13). 'I prefer handwritten' incorrectly uses an adjective form; use the noun 'handwriting' (adjective/adverb error). 'what I'm feel' is incorrect pronoun and verb form; should be 'as I feel' or 'what I feel' (pronoun/verb form error, mapped to incorrect use of pronouns and verb forms). 'actually in actual time' is redundant and unnatural; 'in the moment' is clearer (word choice). 'So this is will this is can be improve my my positive energy' has auxiliary/modal errors and passive/infinitive problems: use 'It can improve my positive energy.' Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct noun forms, correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy.

× I use the laptop because I don't have the desktop and I think the laptop is is good because I have time to charge the laptop and go anywhere I want to be there and type in laptop but the disk.

✓ I use a laptop because I don't have a desktop, and I think the laptop is good because I can charge it and take it anywhere to type.

Article errors and sentence structure (Grammar problem type ID 22 and 26). 'I use the laptop' should be 'I use a laptop' when speaking generally. 'the desktop' similarly should be 'a desktop'. Repetition ('the laptop is is good') and awkward phrasing ('I have time to charge the laptop and go anywhere I want to be there and type in laptop but the disk') are sentence structure issues; rewrite to 'I can charge it and take it anywhere to type.' Remove 'but the disk' which is unclear. Suggestion: use indefinite articles for general statements, remove repetitions, and simplify clauses.

× When I start the study in the college, I start to get some practice in the desktop.

✓ When I started studying at college, I began to practice on the desktop.

Present tense issue (Grammar problem type ID 6) and preposition/article use (ID 11/22). The event is past, so use past tense 'started' and 'began.' Use 'studying at college' rather than 'start the study in the college.' Use 'on the desktop' to indicate the device and 'the desktop' is acceptable if referring to a desktop computer; consider 'a desktop' if general. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame and use natural prepositions.

× How I write in the desktop and it's the same things in the laptop because there is a there is a keyboard.

✓ How I write on the desktop is the same on the laptop because both have keyboards.

Subject-verb agreement and article/preposition issues (Grammar problem type ID 27 and 11/22). Use 'on the desktop' rather than 'in.' 'How I write on the desktop is the same on the laptop' fixes sentence structure and agreement. 'there is a there is a keyboard' is redundant; 'both have keyboards' is concise. Suggestion: use correct prepositions for devices ('on' for computer), ensure subject and verb agree, and avoid repetition.

× So by practicing I get speed.

✓ So by practicing I gained speed.

Past tense issue (Grammar problem type ID 5). The context describes improvement from past practice, so use past tense 'gained' rather than present 'get.' Suggestion: match tense to the narrative; use 'improved' or 'gained speed' to sound natural.

× I used to think first I use the Grammarly application to improve my grammar and vocabulary, then I I use the article I writing in the Word document that the alphabet in English, then the word, then.

✓ I used to first use the Grammarly application to improve my grammar and vocabulary, then I practiced writing articles in Word to work on English alphabet and words.

Modal/verb usage and sentence structure errors (Grammar problem type ID 4 and 26). 'I used to think first I use' mixes past habit 'used to' with present 'use'; correct to 'I used to first use' or 'I would first use.' 'I use the article I writing' is ungrammatical; rewrite to 'I practiced writing articles in Word.' The final fragments are incomplete; combine ideas into a clear sequence. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense for habits, use proper verb forms such as 'use' or 'used to use,' and avoid fragments by completing thoughts.