打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and directly state your preference first, then give one or two clear reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Use correct pronouns and smoother phrasing.

範例: I prefer typing for long documents because it's faster and easier to edit. However, I enjoy handwriting when I want to take personal notes or remember things better, as writing by hand helps me focus.

建議: Provide a direct answer (yes/no) and specify which device you use. Add a brief reason or frequency with a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like “something” and unfinished sentences.

範例: Yes, I type on my laptop almost every day because I use it for homework and assignments. I rarely use a desktop, so the laptop is my main device for typing.

建議: Start with a clear time reference, then explain briefly who taught you and how. Use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “because” or “when” for clarity.

範例: I learned to type when I was a child. My younger brother showed me how he did his assignments, and by watching him and practicing myself I gradually improved my typing skills.

建議: Give a direct answer and then provide specific methods or activities you do to improve (e.g., timed exercises, lessons, posture). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid general statements only.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day with online typing tests to increase speed and accuracy. I also focus on correct finger placement and take short daily drills to build consistency.

× It it depends on the situation. Sometimes I like to type and sometimes I like to write some something with my with my by my own. So it depends on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation. Sometimes I like to type and sometimes I like to write by myself, so it depends on the situation.

Problems: repetition ('It it'), extra words ('some something', 'with my with my by my own'), and awkward phrasing. Type: sentence structure errors and word choice. Why: repeated and redundant words confuse meaning and 'by my own' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'by myself'. Suggestion: remove duplicates, use 'by myself' for doing something alone, and combine sentences for clarity.

× Yes, I am a student so whenever I make my assignment and like something my homework stuff, at that time I type and.

✓ Yes, I am a student, so whenever I do my assignments or homework, I type.

Problems: awkward phrasing ('make my assignment', 'like something my homework stuff'), unnecessary filler ('at that time'), and sentence ending incomplete ('I type and.'). Type: sentence structure errors. Why: 'do my assignments' or 'do my homework' are natural collocations; extra fillers make sentence unclear. Suggestion: use concise phrasing, remove 'at that time', and finish the clause without dangling conjunctions.

× Like when I was a child, my younger brother help me, my younger brother told me how to type because at that time he made their own assignments and I saw saw him how he how he did so.

✓ When I was a child, my younger brother helped me. He showed me how to type because at that time he did his own assignments and I saw how he did it.

Problems: wrong verb tense ('help' should be past 'helped'), pronoun agreement ('their' should be 'his'), repetition ('saw saw', 'how he how he'), and awkward clauses. Type: past tense issue and pronoun error and sentence structure. Why: the actions happened in the past, so use past simple; 'younger brother' is singular, so use 'his'; remove repetitions. Suggestion: use simple past consistently for past events, check pronoun agreement, and split long sentences into shorter clear sentences.

× I say practice is everything. If people type every day and try to increase their speed, so definitely they improve their typing.

✓ I would say practice is everything. If people type every day and try to increase their speed, they will definitely improve their typing.

Problems: unnatural present simple 'I say' (better 'I would say'), unnecessary 'so' after the if-clause, and tense/modal mismatch in the result clause. Type: present tense issue and modal verb usage. Why: 'If' conditional with general truth can use present -> will; adding 'would' in opinion softens it. Suggestion: use 'I would say' for opinions, avoid adding 'so' after an if-clause, and use 'will' in the result clause for likely outcomes.