打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly message friends or search information online, so I save time and stay organized.

建議: Give a direct answer first (yes/no or which device), then give one or two clear supporting details. Fix grammar (e.g., "other device would allow me to relax" is unclear) and avoid contradictions. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day; I usually type on my phone or tablet. I prefer these devices because they are portable and I can relax while browsing, but I use a computer when I need to do in-depth research.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and use correct verb tenses. Avoid pronunciation/spelling mistakes ("tie" should be "type"). Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one specific detail about how you learned, using linking words like "because" or "so".

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard in high school when I took a computer class. My father encouraged me to join the class because he wanted me to be good with computers, so I practiced regularly during lessons.

建議: Answer directly and give specific methods with correct vocabulary (e.g., "techniques" instead of "formula"). Use short coherent sentences and linking words. Mention one or two concrete practices and a result to show effectiveness.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and keeping my fingers on the home row. As a result, my speed and accuracy have improved and I make fewer mistakes.

× I definitely prefer typing because typing would allow me to text my friend quickly and easily.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because typing allows me to text my friends quickly and easily.

The modal 'would' implies hypothetical or conditional situations, but the context expresses a habitual preference, so simple present 'allows' is correct. Also 'friend' should be plural if unspecified; use 'friends' for generality. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and check noun number agreement.

× And additionally, I would say typing is quite popular in in the in the right now moment because yeah, because of technology have developed, typing is a good way.

✓ Additionally, I would say typing is quite popular right now because technology has developed, so typing is a good option.

Remove redundant fillers ('in in the in the right now moment') and use correct verb form 'technology has developed' (present perfect). 'So' connects clauses better than repeated 'because'. Suggestion: simplify and use present perfect for recent developments and avoid repetition.

× Well, actually I don't have a laptop or keyboard.

✓ Well, actually I don't have a laptop or a desktop keyboard.

The original 'laptop or keyboard' is unclear; desktop vs laptop distinction is intended. Adding 'a' before 'desktop keyboard' and specifying 'desktop' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use parallel structure and include articles.

× Every day I usually do something, spend time on my phone or my tablet because other device would allow me to relax and really stress.

✓ Every day I usually spend time on my phone or my tablet because these devices help me relax and relieve stress.

Use simple present 'spend' for habitual action. 'Other device would allow' is wrong: use 'these devices help' for routine and correct verb choice. 'Really stress' is incorrect; use 'relieve stress'. Suggestion: use plural 'devices' and appropriate verbs for meaning.

× And sometime when I want to study or research something I usually use it.

✓ And sometimes when I want to study or research something, I usually use it.

Spelling 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. Comma improves readability. Tense 'want' and 'use' are fine as habitual present. Suggestion: correct adverb form and punctuation.

× I learned how to tie on a keyboard when I was in my high school class.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in high school.

Typo 'tie' should be 'type'. 'My high school class' is wordy; 'in high school' is natural. Use simple past 'learned' for completed past action. Suggestion: fix spelling and simplify phrase.

× I would say at that time I have joined a computer class because my father want me to good at computer and I and he want me to get on it well.

✓ I would say at that time I had joined a computer class because my father wanted me to be good at computers and he wanted me to do well with them.

Use past perfect 'had joined' or simple past 'joined' depending on sequence; here 'had joined' is acceptable but simple past 'joined' also works. 'Have joined' is incorrect with 'at that time'. 'Want' should be past 'wanted'. 'to good at computer' must be 'to be good at computers'. 'Get on it well' is unnatural; use 'do well with them'. Suggestion: match past tense across verbs and use correct verb patterns ('be good at').

× So I try on them at that time.

✓ So I tried them at that time.

Tense should be past 'tried' to match context. 'Try on them' is incorrect preposition; use 'tried them'. Suggestion: use simple past and correct verb-object structure.

× Where I'm from my perspective, I usually improve my typing by typing on the keyboard every day.

✓ From my perspective, I usually improve my typing by practicing on the keyboard every day.

The phrase 'Where I'm from my perspective' is awkward; use 'From my perspective'. 'Typing on the keyboard' is acceptable but 'practicing on the keyboard' is more natural for improvement. Suggestion: simplify introductory phrase and use 'practicing' for clarity.

× I would say there are also some formula for typing as well.

✓ I would say there are also some rules or techniques for typing.

'Some formula' is incorrect; use 'some rules' or 'some techniques'. 'As well' is redundant with 'also'. Suggestion: choose the correct countable noun and avoid redundancy.

× So I try to remember them, use my finger in the correct position, make sure that I can get the right letter and get the correct position.

✓ So I try to remember them, use my fingers in the correct positions, and make sure that I hit the right keys and keep my hands in the correct position.

Consistency of verb forms and plurality: 'use my finger' should be 'use my fingers' and 'position' pluralized to 'positions'. 'Get the right letter' is unnatural for keyboard; use 'hit the right keys'. Parallel structure requires 'and' before final item. Suggestion: maintain parallelism, correct plural forms, and use appropriate collocations.