打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Focus on clarity: use accurate vocabulary (e.g. “store,” “share,” “more convenient”) and correct articles and verb forms.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can save documents on my laptop and share them easily with others, which helps when collaborating on school or work projects.

建議: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words. Use correct tenses and avoid filled pauses like “uh.” Be specific about tasks and frequency. Keep within 2–4 sentences to sound natural.

範例: Yes, I type on both a desktop and a laptop every day. I recently started working and preparing for tests, so I type essays, research information on Google, and practice typing exercises online.

建議: Give a clear time reference and one or two concise details about the learning process. Use correct phrasing for age/grade and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “at first” and “gradually” to show progression.

範例: I learned to type when I was in the sixth grade. At first it was difficult because I did not know the keys, but gradually I improved through regular practice over the next few years.

建議: Structure the answer: start with a topic sentence, then list specific methods using linking words (e.g. “first,” “also,” “finally”). Give precise details such as practice duration and names of tools. Remove filler words and correct grammar.

範例: I improve my typing with short daily practice sessions. First, I spend 10–20 minutes each day on typing exercises to increase speed, and I also use online apps like TypingClub and Keybr to track my progress and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it is easy and faster way to type by our hand and on the other side the typing is easily store and document notation not in the lab computer and laptop.

✓ I prefer typing because it is an easy and faster way to write by hand, and on the other hand, typed documents are easy to store on lab computers and laptops.

Multiple adjective/adverb and article errors: 'easy' needs an article 'an' before it when modifying 'way'; 'faster' should be paired properly with 'an' and compared to 'writing by hand' so rephrase to 'an easy and faster way to write by hand'. 'By our hand' is unnatural; use 'by hand'. 'On the other side' is corrected to 'on the other hand'. 'The typing is easily store' has incorrect adjective/adverb and verb forms; change to 'typed documents are easy to store'. Also clarified 'lab computer and laptop' to plural 'lab computers and laptops' for consistency. Suggestion: use correct articles and choose appropriate adjective/adverb forms and standard expressions like 'by hand' and 'on the other hand'.

× And I think typing is a easy way and understand and shareable document.

✓ And I think typing is an easy way to create understandable and shareable documents.

Article and adjective use: 'a easy' should be 'an easy' because 'easy' begins with a vowel sound. 'Understand' is a verb but needs adjective form 'understandable' to describe 'documents'. 'Shareable' is acceptable but 'shareable documents' fits better in plural. Suggestion: match word forms (use adjectives to modify nouns) and correct articles (a/an).

× Yes, I type on desktop and laptop keyboard everyday because I uh, recently start working and I'll test preparation.

✓ Yes, I type on desktop and laptop keyboards every day because I recently started working and preparing for tests.

Adverb placement and tense errors: 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'common'; use 'every day' for frequency. 'Desktop and laptop keyboard' should be plural 'keyboards'. 'Recently start working' mixes present with 'recently'—use past tense 'recently started working'. 'I'll test preparation' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is present continuous or gerund: 'preparing for tests'. Suggestion: separate 'every day', use correct plural forms, and keep tense consistent (use past tense for recent completed actions and use 'preparing' for ongoing activities).

× So I write a essay and as well as I search on the Google, uh, different kinds of tips and tricks by using this, uh, computer and my work is.

✓ So I write essays, and I also search on Google for different kinds of tips and tricks using this computer for my work.

Sentence structure and article errors: 'a essay' should be 'an essay' or plural 'essays' depending on meaning; plural 'essays' fits with general habit. 'As well as' awkwardly placed; use 'I also'. 'Search on the Google' should be 'search on Google for'. Remove filler 'uh' and clarify 'by using this computer and my work is' which is incomplete; change to 'using this computer for my work'. Suggestion: remove fillers, use correct prepositions ('on Google for'), and complete the clause to convey intended meaning clearly.

× I started keyboard learning at the at my 6th standard and it was very difficult for me how to write by keyboard and I don't know easily function function and day by day I learned from my uh every standard 7810 and I can now I can.

✓ I started learning to use the keyboard in my 6th grade, and it was very difficult for me to learn how to type. I did not understand the functions easily, but day by day I learned through every grade from 7 to 10, and now I can type well.

Multiple tense and structure errors: 'started keyboard learning at the at my 6th standard' should be 'started learning to use the keyboard in my 6th grade'. 'It was very difficult for me how to write by keyboard' needs rephrasing to 'it was very difficult for me to learn how to type'. 'I don't know easily function function' mixes present and wrong expressions—use past 'did not understand the functions easily'. 'Day by day I learned from my uh every standard 7810' unclear; likely 'from grades 7 to 10'. 'I can now I can' is redundant; 'now I can type well' is clear. Suggestion: use past tense for past actions, use correct infinitive 'to learn', and state grade ranges clearly.

× I improve my typing by using different kinds of technique.

✓ I improve my typing by using different kinds of techniques.

Count noun and pluralization: 'technique' should be plural 'techniques' because 'different kinds of' requires a plural noun. The gerund phrase 'by using' is correct. Suggestion: match plurality after 'different kinds of'.

× First of all, I uh, prefer my time uh, 10 to 20 minutes every day by typing and I focus on the uh, typing speed.

✓ First of all, I spend 10 to 20 minutes every day typing, and I focus on my typing speed.

Article and word choice errors: 'prefer my time 10 to 20 minutes every day by typing' is unidiomatic; better is 'I spend 10 to 20 minutes every day typing'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'typing speed' and use 'my typing speed' to show ownership. Suggestion: use 'spend' for time expressions and use possessive 'my' with 'speed'.

× Uh, However, there are uh, lots of uh, application are available on the Internet, so I can use by typing and check this.

✓ However, there are lots of applications available on the Internet, so I can use them to practice typing and check my progress.

There be and subject-verb agreement errors: 'lots of application are' mixes singular/plural—'applications' plural. The phrase 'so I can use by typing and check this' is ungrammatical; clarify intended meaning: 'use them to practice typing and check my progress'. Suggestion: ensure noun plurality matches verb and complete purpose clauses with clear objects ('use them to ...').