打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and directly answer the question first (prefer handwriting or typing). Limit to max 4–5 sentences, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "took part in" not "took participation in").

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I enjoy the personal touch and neatness of written notes. For example, I won several awards at school for my handwriting, and I recently took part in a citywide handwriting competition where I finished first. Therefore, handwriting helps me organise my thoughts better than typing.

建議: Begin with a clear direct answer (Yes/No) and give one clear reason using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions, and correct vocabulary (e.g., "I am a doctor" not "being from a frig"). Mention frequency and device if relevant.

範例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I work as a doctor and most of my clinical tasks are hands-on. However, I do use a laptop occasionally to write blog posts and prepare reports, so I usually type a few times each week.

建議: Answer directly with a time reference, then give one concise supporting detail using a linking word. Remove fillers like "uh" and clarify the course purpose. Use correct phrases ("at school", "technology classes").

範例: I learned to type at school when I was around 12 years old. Specifically, I attended weekly technology classes on Saturdays where we practised typing and other basic computer skills.

建議: Use present tense to describe ongoing improvement and be concise. Start with a topic sentence (how you improve), then give one specific method and reason using linking words. Correct grammar ("every weekend", "clients", "for managing patient records").

範例: I improve my typing by attending weekend classes and practising regularly on typing websites. This was necessary for my job because I need to use systems like Microsoft Word and Excel for managing patient records and client details.

× Recently I took participation in handwriting competition and and I stood first in whole city.

✓ Recently I participated in a handwriting competition and I stood first in the whole city.

The phrase 'took participation in' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'participated' (simple past). Also 'and and' is duplicated. Add the article 'the' before 'whole city' to specify it. Suggestion: use 'participated in' and include appropriate articles.

× No, I don't type very often on desktop or laptop because being from a frig because I am a doctor by profession and I don't have work related to system or technology much.

✓ No, I don't type very often on a desktop or laptop because I am a doctor by profession and I don't have much work related to systems or technology.

The original sentence is awkward and contains a fragment 'being from a frig' (probably a mistaken fragment). Remove the fragment and restructure: use articles 'a desktop'/'a laptop', plural 'systems', and place 'much' before the uncountable noun phrase. Suggestion: simplify and remove irrelevant fragments to improve clarity.

× I for example I usually write blogs on laptop everywhere.

✓ For example, I usually write blogs on my laptop wherever I am.

Use 'on my laptop' (add possessive) and 'wherever I am' or 'everywhere' after rewording. Also remove duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: include the possessive and place adverbial phrase correctly.

× I learned to type on keyboard during my school.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard during my school years.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard' and use 'during my school years' to make the time expression natural. 'School' alone is vague; plural 'years' clarifies. Suggestion: use 'the keyboard' and 'school years'.

× Uh, for example, I was having a subject known as technology classes every Saturday.

✓ For example, I had a subject called 'Technology' with classes every Saturday.

Use simple past 'had' instead of 'was having' for habitual past events. 'A subject known as technology classes' is awkward; rephrase as 'a subject called Technology' and clarify that classes were every Saturday. Suggestion: use simple past for past routines and clearer noun phrasing.

× It was uh for teaching skills related to tech first.

✓ It was for teaching basic technology-related skills.

Rewrite to remove filler 'uh' and ordering 'tech first' is unclear. 'Basic technology-related skills' is clearer. Suggestion: keep concise and use adjective + noun structure.

× I improved my typing by taking classes every weekends because it was a requirement for my current job placement where I have to learn different systems or courses like Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Word for management of patient records and details in my client.

✓ I improved my typing by taking classes every weekend because it was a requirement for my current job, where I have to learn different systems and programs such as Microsoft Excel and Microsoft Word to manage patient records and details for my clients.

Use 'every weekend' (not 'every weekends'). 'Job placement' is awkward; 'current job' is better. Use 'systems and programs' (not 'or courses'), and 'to manage' instead of 'for management of'. 'My client' should be plural or rephrased to 'my clients'. Tense consistency: 'improved' (past) is fine because the action was completed, while 'have to learn' remains present. Suggestion: correct pluralization, word choice, and sentence flow for clarity.