打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitation fillers (um, uh), correct verb forms (it depends), and give one specific reason with a linking word (for example or because). Keep within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer whichever method suits the situation. For example, I like handwriting postcards and letters because a personal handwritten note feels more thoughtful and makes a nicer keepsake.

建議: Avoid repetition and filler words, and correct grammatical errors (use 'easier' without 'very' or better 'more convenient'). Start with a direct topic sentence and follow with a concise reason using a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because my workplace provides only a laptop, and it is more convenient to carry when I travel.

建議: Use correct past tense and clearer chronology. Remove hesitation and clarify the role of the game. Provide one concise supporting detail and use linking words like 'when' or 'because'.

範例: I learned to type in high school when I took a computer class. At that time I practised typing using a game called Super Mario, which helped me get familiar with the keyboard.

建議: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use a clear topic sentence and add a specific detail about frequency or measurable progress (e.g., speed or accuracy). Use linking words such as 'by' or 'which' to connect ideas.

範例: I improve my typing by practising on a typing game called Super Mario for about 30 minutes every evening, which has helped increase both my speed and accuracy.

× Umm, it's depend on the situation, but when it comes to, uh, postcard or letter, of course we need to, uh, write by our hand because it's very great to have a handwriting and give it to somebody else as a gift.

✓ Umm, it depends on the situation, but when it comes to a postcard or letter, of course we need to write by hand because it is very nice to have handwriting and give it to somebody else as a gift.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it' (subject-verb agreement / present tense). 'Postcard or letter' needs an article before 'postcard' and 'write by our hand' is awkward; the common phrase is 'write by hand'. 'It's very great' is unnatural; use 'it is very nice'. Also 'a handwriting' is incorrect because 'handwriting' is an uncountable noun here, so use 'handwriting' without an article. Suggestions: use 'it depends', add appropriate articles ('a postcard or letter' or better 'a postcard or a letter'), use 'write by hand', and use natural adjectives like 'nice' or 'meaningful'.

× Uh, I type on the laptop every day because at work I have only laptop because it's uh, very easier for me to carry with me everywhere when I go.

✓ Uh, I type on a laptop every day because at work I only have a laptop and it is much easier for me to carry it with me everywhere I go.

Multiple issues: 'have only laptop' lacks article; use 'a laptop'. 'It's very easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is comparative and should be modified by 'much' or 'far', not 'very'. Also use 'carry it with me' and 'everywhere I go' instead of 'when I go'. The subject-verb forms are fine but articles and modifier choice needed correction. Suggestions: include articles ('a laptop'), use 'much easier' or 'far easier', and place pronouns correctly ('carry it with me').

× Umm, I learn how to type the keyboard. When I was in high school I joined the computer class and Super Mario was the very first time typing ever for me.

✓ Umm, I learned how to type on the keyboard. When I was in high school I joined a computer class, and Super Mario was the first typing game I ever played.

'Learn' should be in past tense 'learned' because the action happened in the past. 'Type the keyboard' should be 'type on the keyboard' (preposition error). 'Joined the computer class' is better as 'joined a computer class' (article). The phrase 'Super Mario was the very first time typing ever for me' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'Super Mario was the first typing game I ever played' to express the idea clearly. Suggestions: use past tense for past events, correct prepositions ('type on'), include appropriate articles, and rephrase awkward expressions into standard English.

× As I mentioned above, I practice a lot on a typing game, Super Mario. So I improve my typing by playing Super Mario most of the time in my free time by my personal computer.

✓ As I mentioned above, I practice a lot on a typing game, Super Mario. So I improve my typing by playing Super Mario most of the time in my free time on my personal computer.

The original is mostly understandable but 'by my personal computer' is incorrect preposition use; use 'on my personal computer'. Repetition 'most of the time in my free time' is redundant; consider 'most of the time in my free time' -> better 'in my free time' or 'most of the time'. Also ensure 'playing' (verb + -ing) correctly follows 'by' to indicate method. Suggestions: use 'on my personal computer', remove redundancy, and keep 'playing' as the gerund indicating how you improve typing.