打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then provide two clear reasons (efficiency for work; personal preference for handwriting) using linking words. Fix grammar (use 'when I have official work' -> 'for official work', 'share to other people' -> 'share with others') and remove filler words.

範例: It depends on the situation. For official work at the hospital I prefer typing because it’s faster and easier to share documents with colleagues. However, for personal notes or letters I usually write by hand because it feels more personal and helps me remember things better.

建議: Give a clear, direct topic sentence naming both devices, then add brief timing details with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'in daily life' or 'day-to-day' and 'a PC' not 'an PC') and avoid repetition ('use the computer, so I try on the keyboard' is unclear).

範例: I use both a desktop (PC) at work and a laptop at home. During the day at the office I work on a desktop computer because it has a full keyboard and larger screen, but in the evening I usually use my laptop for convenience.

建議: Provide a concise past-time topic sentence and explain reason with linking words. Remove hesitations and refine tense consistency (e.g., 'was an essential skill' not 'is'). Add a brief example of how you practiced to show specificity.

範例: I learned to type when I was a medical student because I had to write reports and patient notes. At that time typing was an essential skill, so I practiced daily using online typing programs and by transcribing clinical notes to improve my speed and accuracy.

建議: Answer directly and describe a clear routine or method with specific details and linking words. Remove filler words and use present tense for habitual actions ('I improve' not 'I enhanced'). Mention measurable goals or tools (timed tests, accuracy targets, online courses) to show improvement strategy.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day with timed typing tests and accuracy drills. For example, I spend 15 minutes on an online typing program to increase speed and then review my frequent mistakes so I can focus on those keys and reduce errors.

× Honestly it depends on the situation.

✓ Honestly, it depends on the situation.

Missing comma after introductory adverb honestly. Add the comma to improve clarity and natural punctuation.

× If I have an official work at the hospital, I usually type on the keyboard is much more efficient to use and share to other people.

✓ If I have official work at the hospital, I usually type on the keyboard because it is much more efficient to use and to share with other people.

Several issues: unnecessary article 'an' before uncountable 'work' (Article errors), run-on sentence and missing conjunctions (Sentence structure errors), and incorrect preposition 'to other people' should be 'with other people' (Incorrect use of prepositions). Split and add 'because' and 'to' for infinitive, and change preposition to 'with'.

× But if I have personal issue I usually write by hand.

✓ But if I have a personal issue, I usually write by hand.

Missing article 'a' before 'personal issue' (Article errors) and missing comma after conditional clause. Add 'a' and a comma for correct grammar and natural rhythm.

× Is my.

✓ I mean, it's my preference.

Fragment 'Is my.' is not a complete sentence (Sentence without a verb / Sentence structure errors). Provide a complete clarification such as 'I mean, it's my preference' to convey intended meaning.

× In the day life I type on both the laptop and also a keyboard of an PC at the workplace.

✓ In daily life I type on both my laptop and a PC keyboard at the workplace.

'In the day life' is incorrect; use 'In daily life' or 'In day-to-day life' (Sentence structure). 'the laptop' should be 'my laptop' or just 'a laptop' for clarity. 'a keyboard of an PC' has article and noun order problems; use 'a PC keyboard'. Also change 'an PC' to 'a PC' because 'PC' begins with a consonant sound.

× In the morning I when I work at the office I use the computer, so I try on the keyboard.

✓ In the morning when I work at the office I use the computer, so I use the keyboard.

Extra word 'I' after 'morning' creates incorrect structure (Sentence structure errors). 'try on the keyboard' is unnatural; use 'use the keyboard'. Remove the extra pronoun and correct the verb.

× But in the evening at home I usually use my laptop.

✓ In the evening at home I usually use my laptop.

Starting with 'But' is unnecessary here; grammatically the sentence is fine otherwise. Removing 'But' makes the answer smoother. Tense is appropriate (present habitual).

× I started to learn about how to type on the keyboard when I was a medical student.

✓ I started to learn how to type on the keyboard when I was a medical student.

Unnecessary preposition 'about' after 'learn' (Sentence structure errors). 'Learn how to' is the correct construction; tense is past and appropriate.

× That time I needed to practice in the hospital, so typing on the computer keyboard is an essential, umm, skill.

✓ At that time I needed to practice in the hospital, so typing on the computer keyboard was an essential skill.

Use 'At that time' rather than 'That time' for clarity. Because the context is past, change 'is' to 'was' (Past tense issue). Remove filler 'umm' and the extra comma. 'an essential' before consonant sound is correct, but maintain past tense consistency.

× So I studied by myself a lot of that time.

✓ So I studied by myself a lot during that time.

Phrase 'a lot of that time' is awkward; use 'during that time' or 'a lot during that time' for natural expression (Preposition usage and sentence structure).

× I enhanced my typing skill by practicing every day because, uh, I need to do a lot at the workplace and also when I type, uh, many mistakes, I will notice that and, uh, change in the next time.

✓ I improved my typing skill by practicing every day because I need to do a lot of work at the workplace, and when I make many mistakes while typing, I notice them and correct them next time.

Multiple issues: 'enhanced' is acceptable but 'improved' is more natural (word choice). 'Need to do a lot' requires 'a lot of work' (Incorrect use of quantifiers/objects). 'When I type, many mistakes, I will notice that' is ungrammatical; use 'when I make many mistakes while typing, I notice them' (Verb forms and sentence structure). Use present simple for habitual actions (Present tense issue) and change 'change in the next time' to 'correct them next time' for clarity.