打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct self-contradictions and use clearer structure: state your preference with a topic sentence, give a reason, and finish with a brief supporting detail. Avoid filler words and incorrect phrases (e.g., “time consuming” used wrongly).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much faster. For example, as a college student with a heavy workload, typing lets me take notes and finish assignments quickly. Therefore, typing saves me time and helps me keep up with my studies.

建議: Use one clear, direct sentence to answer, then add a specific reason and an example. Reduce hesitation sounds and repetition. Use comparative phrasing correctly (e.g., “more useful than a laptop keyboard”).

範例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard every day because my computer science studies require long hours of coding. For instance, I find a desktop keyboard more comfortable and responsive for long programming sessions than a laptop keyboard.

建議: Start with a clear time reference, use correct tense and sentence structure, and give one concise supporting detail. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing.

範例: I learned to type when I was seven. My father, who is quite strict, taught me and pushed me to practice daily, so it was challenging at first but I improved quickly.

建議: Answer directly, use correct tense, and give a specific example of how the resource helped you. Finish your thought with a result. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

範例: I improved my typing by practicing on the website 10FastFingers. When I discovered it, I spent regular 15–20 minute sessions practising daily, and over a few months my speed and accuracy increased noticeably.

× Actually I consider myself as a lazy person so that's why I prefer typing over handwriting because handwriting takes more time and actually I don't have that time due to my college and my major.

✓ Actually I consider myself a lazy person, so I prefer typing over handwriting because handwriting takes more time and I don't have that time because of my college and my major.

The phrase 'consider myself as' is incorrect; use 'consider myself a ...' The clause 'that's why' is redundant after 'so'; use one connector. 'Due to' is better replaced by 'because of' when referring to a noun phrase (my college and my major). Remove repetitive 'actually'. These changes improve pronoun and article usage and clarity.

× So uh, typing is more time consuming than time consumer.

✓ So typing is less time-consuming than handwriting.

The original sentence incorrectly compares 'typing' to 'time consumer' which is not parallel; 'time-consuming' is a compound adjective and needs a hyphen. The correct comparison is 'less time-consuming than handwriting.' This fixes adjective form and comparison structure.

× Yeah, of course. I type on a desktop, uh, every day because, uh, my major is computer science and I always spend a lot of time with my computer.

✓ Yes, of course. I type on a desktop every day because my major is computer science and I spend a lot of time on my computer.

Replace informal fillers and 'with my computer' with the correct preposition 'on.' 'Yeah' to 'Yes' for formality. These changes correct pronoun/preposition use and improve register.

× So I, uh, actually more likely to type on a desktop and prefer uh, and find it more useful than laptop keyboard.

✓ I am actually more likely to type on a desktop and find it more useful than a laptop keyboard.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for 'more likely' is a sentence structure/verb issue. Remove extra 'and' and filler words. Include article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard.' This corrects the verb form and article usage.

× When when I was 7, my father teach me how to type on a keyboard and actually it was a challenging moment for me to be honest because and my father are like more strict.

✓ When I was seven, my father taught me how to type on a keyboard, and it was a challenging time for me because my father was quite strict.

Use past tense 'taught' not 'teach.' Remove repeated 'when.' 'Moment' is acceptable but 'time' is more natural. Replace 'are' with past 'was' to match timeframe and correct subject-verb agreement; rephrase 'like more strict' to 'quite strict.' These fixes address past tense, agreement, and clarity.

× So I used to learn it in a really short amount of time, which was so hard for me.

✓ So I learned it in a very short amount of time, which was very hard for me.

'Used to learn' suggests a habitual past action; here a single past action fits better with 'learned.' Replace informal 'so hard' with 'very hard' for formality and clarity. This corrects tense usage and improves adverb choice.

× So there there's a website called 10 Fast Fingers which actually improve my typing.

✓ There is a website called 10 Fast Fingers that actually improved my typing.

Use 'There is' (not 'there there's') for existence. 'Which' can be replaced by 'that' or kept; crucially, verb should be past 'improved' to match context ('when I first knew about it'). Also remove duplicate 'there.' This fixes 'there be' structure and verb tense.

× So when I first know about that website, I used to spend a lot of time inside it because it helps to become more fast and.

✓ When I first found out about that website, I used to spend a lot of time on it because it helped me become faster.

Use past tense 'found out' (not 'know') to match 'used to.' Preposition 'on' is correct for websites; 'inside it' is wrong. 'Helps to become more fast' is ungrammatical; use 'helped me become faster.' This addresses past tense, preposition, and adjective/adverb form.