打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap doğal fakat tekrarlanan dolgu kelimelerinden (uh, umm) ve gereksiz tekrarlarından kaçınmalısınız. Ayrıca doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, kısa nedenler vererek cevabı 2–4 cümle arasında tutun. Bağlaçlar (for personal notes / however / because) kullanarak cümleler arasında akıcılık sağlayın.

範例: I usually choose handwriting for personal notes because it feels more personal and thoughtful. However, for everyday tasks and forms I prefer typing since it’s quicker and easier to edit.

建議: Cümlelerinizi daha doğrudan ve doğru zaman kullanımıyla (present/past) kurmalısınız. Dolgu kelimelerini azaltın ve 'job tasks' gibi spesifik kelimeler kullanın. İki kısa cümleyle nedenini açıklayın: şu an değil, ama geçmişte günlük olarak kullandım.

範例: Not at the moment because I’m not working, but when I had a job I used a desktop or laptop every day for tasks such as emails and reports.

建議: Daha kesin ve akıcı bir anlatım kullanın; belirsizlikleri kısa ve net ifade edin. Tekrarlardan (I, I) kaçının ve bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun. Yaşı verirken 'around' kelimesiyle doğal ifade edebilirsiniz.

範例: I don’t remember exactly, but I learned to type around the age of 10 or 11 because school projects required online research and typing homework.

建議: Cevabınızı planlı bir gelişim yöntemi şeklinde verin: hangi aktiviteleri, ne sıklıkta yapacağınızı söyleyin. Dolgu sözcüklerini atın ve bağlantı ifadeleri (for example, by doing, regularly) kullanın. Belirli aktiviteler ve sıklık gerçekçilik katar.

範例: To improve my typing I would practice regularly by doing short typing exercises and writing a short essay on the computer every day. For example, I use online typing tests and timed practice to increase speed and accuracy.

× It depends on situation actually.

✓ It depends on the situation, actually.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'situation'. In English, when referring to a specific situation in general terms, use 'the'. Suggestion: include 'the' to make the noun phrase grammatically complete.

× If I uh, write notes for my uh family or friends, I prefer uh writing notes by hand.

✓ If I write notes for my family or friends, I prefer writing them by hand.

The sentence redundantly repeats 'notes' and uses fillers. Also pronoun 'them' is preferred after 'writing' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: remove fillers and use 'them' to refer back to 'notes'.

× But if I uh, do form, if I do uh, daily routine chores, I prefer typing because it is easier.

✓ But if I do daily routine chores, I prefer typing because it is easier.

Remove the repetition 'do form' and extra hesitations. The phrase 'daily routine chores' is acceptable but 'do' only needs to appear once. Suggestion: simplify to one conditional clause without fillers.

× At this moment, no, actually because I am not working right now, but uh, in the past, uh, when I was working, I use, uh, I use desktop or laptop keyboard everyday for umm, you know, job, uh, task or something like that.

✓ Not at the moment, because I am not working right now, but in the past when I was working, I used a desktop or laptop keyboard every day for job tasks.

Mixes present tense 'use' with past context 'when I was working'. Change 'use' to past tense 'used'. Also 'everyday' should be 'every day' (adverb). Remove fillers and pluralize 'task' to 'tasks' or use 'job tasks'. Suggestion: match verb tense to time frame and correct 'everyday' vs 'every day'.

× Actually I don't remember clearly, but I think it might be when I was 10 or 11 because of my uh, school homework.

✓ Actually I don't remember clearly, but I think it might have been when I was 10 or 11 because of my school homework.

Referring to a past time with 'might' requires perfect infinitive 'might have been' to indicate speculation about past events. Suggestion: use 'might have been' for past speculation and remove filler.

× Umm, I, I remembered my teachers gave me some uh project and I have to research on laptop so.

✓ I remember my teachers gave me some projects and I had to do research on a laptop.

Use simple present 'remember' for current memory, not 'remembered'. 'Gave me some project' should pluralize 'projects' or use 'a project'. 'Have to' should match past 'had to' because the giving happened in the past. Also add article 'a' before 'laptop'. Suggestion: match tense consistently and include articles where needed.

× That's an interesting question. I, I never talk too much about it, but maybe I can, uh, practice, I can, uh, do writing practice on computer or you know, uh, I can, uh, write essays, like short essays, uh, daily on computer.

✓ That's an interesting question. I don't usually talk about it much, but maybe I can practice by doing writing exercises on the computer, or I can write short essays daily on the computer.

Use 'don't usually' instead of 'never talk too much'. 'Do writing practice' is awkward; use 'doing writing exercises' or 'practice by writing'. Include articles 'the' before 'computer'. Remove fillers and improve word order for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'writing exercises' and include necessary articles.