打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 用更自然和简洁的句子直接回答问题，减少重复和填充词（如 uh、the、when 重复）。可以在支持细节中用更具体的例子并加上连接词，使表达更连贯。

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and meaningful. For example, I often write a handwritten card for a friend on their birthday, and they always tell me how touched they are. This makes handwriting more memorable than a typed message.

建議: 回答要更直接并给出具体细节，避免重复词（如 to to to）。可使用连接词说明频率或原因，使句子结构更清晰并控制在最多五句内。

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day at work because I prepare presentations and take meeting notes. I usually use a laptop since it's portable and convenient for editing slides and documents during the day.

建議: 用更自然的时态和词汇表达时间点与经历，避免缩写或不清楚的词（COM）。可以用连接词说明学习过程和感受，并用更具体的细节丰富回答。

範例: I learned to type in high school when we had a compulsory computer course for all students. We practiced typing every day, and I found it really interesting because it introduced me to new technology and improved my speed quickly.

建議: 回答要更准确并修正拼写错误（curacy → accuracy）。不要重复词，说明具体练习方法并提到如何衡量进步（例如计时或使用练习软件）。

範例: I improve my typing by copying short articles from the internet and timing myself to increase speed and accuracy. I also use online typing tests and drills to track my progress and focus on reducing errors.

× It is more meaningful and warm when when I use handwriting.

✓ It is more meaningful and warmer when I use handwriting.

句中“meaningful”和“warm”都是形容词，用于比较时需要在“warm”后加比较级“warmer”来与“more meaningful”相对应，使比较结构一致。建议把“warm”改为“warmer”。另外删除重复的“when”。

× For example, I write a handwriting card to my friend, then my friend say yeah she.

✓ For example, I write a handwritten card to my friend, and then my friend says, "Yeah, she does."

原句有代词和动词形式错误：主语是第三人称单数“my friend”，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“says”（对应ID 2，但这里是代词与动词一起问题，归为代词使用问题）。此外“handwriting card”用法不自然，应为“handwritten card”。“say yeah she”缺少助动词，完整表达应为"says, 'Yeah, she does.'"。建议使用自然的句子并加上引号表示直接话语。

× Yes, of course. Especially I am working in a company right now in the office I need to prepare the presentation and I always use a laptop to to to note down all the notes.

✓ Yes, of course. I'm working at a company right now; in the office I need to prepare presentations and I always use a laptop to note down all the notes.

原句中时态和主谓一致问题："I am working in a company"可更自然为"I'm working at a company"（介词问题同时存在，但按题目只修正主谓一致与重复词）。另外“the presentation”若指一般任务可用复数"presentations"或保留单数但加冠词一致；并去掉重复的"to"。建议保证主语"I"与动词缩写一致并删除多余词。

× When I was studying in high school, we had a COM compulsory computer course for everybody to join and we learn how to use a new technology.

✓ When I was studying in high school, we had a compulsory computer course for everyone to join and we learned how to use a new technology.

原句中冠词与动词形式错误："COM"不明确且不需要大写缩写；"everybody to join"更自然为"everyone to join"（代词选择），并且动词时态需与过去时一致，"we learn"应为过去式"we learned"。此外"a new technology"若指某项技术可保留冠词。建议保持过去时一致并使用自然表达。

× At that time I felt it was so interesting and cool that we practice every day.

✓ At that time I felt it was so interesting and cool that we practiced every day.

句中描述过去的习惯动作，主句和从句应使用过去时态一致。"we practice every day"应改为过去式"we practiced every day"。建议将所有相关动词改为过去时以保持时态一致。

× I think the best way to improve typing is that you you you search an article on the Internet and then type down all the article from the paragraph.

✓ I think the best way to improve typing is to find an article on the Internet and then type the whole article paragraph by paragraph.

原句中不自然的时态和结构："is that you search"可用不定式结构"is to find"更地道；重复的"you"需去掉；"type down all the article from the paragraph"语序和用词不当，改为"type the whole article paragraph by paragraph"更清晰。建议使用不定式结构并调整词序。

× Then you can practice your typing speed and curacy.

✓ Then you can practice your typing speed and accuracy.

单词"curacy"是拼写错误，应为名词"accuracy"表示准确性，属于词类使用/拼写问题（归为形容词/副词使用类）。建议使用正确单词并注意拼写。