打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting reason using a linking word. Avoid repeating ideas and reduce hesitation. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., use "search and modify" or "retrieve").

範例: I prefer typing. Mainly because digital notes are easy to search and edit, which saves me time when I need to retrieve or update code snippets and technical notes.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence and avoid filler words like "yeah." Use a linking phrase to add a specific detail about frequency and devices. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I type every day on both a desktop and a laptop. Because I develop software and write documentation daily, I have used keyboards in my work for the past seven years.

建議: Give a clear timeline and one concrete detail about how work improved your skills. Remove hesitation and correct grammar (e.g., "working with coding improved them"). Use a linking word to connect the timeline and improvement.

範例: I learned basic typing in high school, but I really improved my speed and accuracy after I became a software engineer, because writing code every day forced me to type much more efficiently.

建議: Provide a clear, fluent description: state the method, the purpose, and a specific example. Avoid repetition and fix grammar. Use a linking word to explain the result of practicing on platforms.

範例: I improved my typing by using online practice platforms that focus on speed and accuracy. For example, I spent 15–20 minutes a day on typing tests, which noticeably reduced my mistakes when coding.

× I often edit and search the information.

✓ I often edit and search for information.

Use 'search for' not 'search' when the object is a noun phrase meaning 'look for something'. The gerund/present participle form is fine; the issue is incorrect preposition. Suggestion: use 'search for information' in similar contexts.

× I need to write some code, emails and documentations.

✓ I need to write some code, emails, and documentation.

'Documentations' is uncountable in this context; use 'documentation' (singular uncountable). Also add Oxford comma for clarity. Suggestion: treat 'documentation' as uncountable and do not pluralize it.

× I've been doing this for the last seven years.

✓ I've been doing this for the last seven years.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present perfect continuous is appropriate to describe an action continuing up to now. No correction needed.

× I started to type on the keyboard when I was a high school student, but basically I improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer and, uh, working with coding improve.

✓ I started to type on the keyboard when I was a high school student, but I basically improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer, and working with code improved them.

Several issues: missing subject 'I' before 'basically', incorrect gerund/verb forms 'working with coding improve' should be 'working with code improved' (past tense to match 'after I became'). Use 'code' (uncountable) rather than 'coding' for this meaning, and refer back to 'typing skills' with 'them'. Suggestion: keep tenses consistent (past simple) and use correct verb forms and pronouns.

× When I became a software engineer, I started. Started to join the platform to practice typing and the website major typing speed and accuracy.

✓ When I became a software engineer, I started to use platforms and websites to practice typing and to improve my speed and accuracy.

Original has a fragment 'I started. Started to join...' and poor word order 'the website major typing speed and accuracy'. Correction merges fragments into one sentence, uses 'platforms and websites' (plural) and 'to practice typing and to improve my speed and accuracy' for clear parallel structure. Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and ensure parallel and logical phrasing.