打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like “rather than.”

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because my handwriting is neat and I can write quickly with pen and paper. Also, I find typing slow and error-prone since I haven’t practiced touch-typing, so handwriting is usually more efficient for me.

建議: Give a direct answer first, then provide two clear reasons with correct sentence structure and linking words. Fix repetition and awkward phrasing (e.g., “in daily basis”).

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I use a laptop because there is no desktop at home or at school, and students are allowed to bring laptops to university. Therefore, I rely on my laptop to complete assignments and study.

建議: Be clear and avoid hesitation fillers. Provide a concise time statement followed by specific details about the course or lessons, using correct grammar and linking words.

範例: I learned to type when I was in fourth grade. At that time, our school introduced a computer class with practical keyboard lessons, where we practiced typing exercises and learned proper finger placement.

建議: Answer directly, describe the method and its effect with specific details and correct grammar. Name the tool and explain how you practiced and improved, using linking words for clarity.

範例: I improved my typing by using an online program called Typesala. It gave me structured lessons and practice drills for finger placement and speed; as a result, I became faster and more accurate, especially when finding numbers and common symbols.

× I prefer handwriting rather than typing because I am really not much as good at typing rather than handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting rather than typing because I am really not very good at typing.

The phrase 'not much as good at' is ungrammatical; use 'not very good at'. Also 'rather than handwriting' is redundant after 'prefer handwriting rather than typing', so remove the repetition. Use correct preposition 'good at' followed by the gerund 'typing'.

× My handwriting is quite well, I can write very fast by pen and paper, but I'm very slow at typing keyword and searching the words.

✓ My handwriting is quite good; I can write very quickly with pen and paper, but I'm very slow at typing keywords and searching for words.

Use the adjective 'good' (not the adverb 'well') to describe 'handwriting'. Use the adverb 'quickly' to modify 'write'. Use the preposition 'with' for instrument 'pen and paper'. 'Keyword' should be plural 'keywords' and use 'searching for words' for correct preposition. These are adjective/adverb and preposition errors.

× So I will prefer handwriting.

✓ So I prefer handwriting.

Using 'will' with 'prefer' here is unnecessary; prefer expresses a general preference so simple present is correct. This corrects inappropriate modal/future-like usage.

× I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I don't have any desktop or computer available in my home and at school.

✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every day because I don't have a desktop computer at home or at school.

Remove 'any' before 'desktop' for natural affirmative sentence. Use 'desktop computer' as a noun phrase. Use preposition 'at' for locations 'at home' and 'at school'. This fixes preposition and article usage.

× Also we are allowed to have our own laptop in college uni.

✓ Also, we are allowed to have our own laptops at university.

Use plural 'laptops' to match 'we' (pronoun agreement) and use 'at university' or 'at the university' instead of 'in college uni'. Also 'uni' is informal; 'university' is clearer.

× So I in daily basis I use my keyboard laptop keyboard to perform complete my assignment.

✓ So on a daily basis, I use my laptop keyboard to complete my assignments.

Correct the adverbial phrase to 'on a daily basis'. Remove duplicate words and reorder to 'use my laptop keyboard to complete my assignments'. Fixes sentence structure and word order.

× I learned to type on keyboard when I was in grade 4.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in grade 4.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard' for specificity. The past tense 'learned' is correct; this fixes article usage.

× Our school days taught us to write in keyword.

✓ During our school days, we were taught to type on the keyboard.

'show' incorrect prepositions and verbs: use 'during our school days' for time, 'we were taught' for passive teaching, and 'to type on the keyboard' for correct collocation. This fixes preposition and verb choice.

× Uh, basically our school allowed us to read computer subject when we were in graduate four and we they gave practical to use computer keywords.

✓ Basically, our school introduced a computer subject when we were in grade four and they gave us practical lessons to use computer keyboards.

Fix pronoun issues: remove duplicated 'we they' and add 'us' after 'gave'. Use 'grade four' not 'graduate four', and 'practical lessons' for clarity. Also 'keyboards' plural.

× So we learned there from there.

✓ So we learned from there.

Remove redundant 'there'; 'learned from there' is correct prepositional phrase. This fixes redundant preposition use.

× So before previously typing was really very hard for me.

✓ Previously, typing was really hard for me.

Use 'previously' alone (not 'so before previously'). Keep simple past 'was' for a past state. This corrects redundant temporal adverbs and tense usage.

× I I found it very struggle to find numbers in the keyboard.

✓ I found it very difficult to find the numbers on the keyboard.

Replace 'very struggle' with adjective 'very difficult' and use 'the numbers' and preposition 'on the keyboard'. Remove duplicated 'I'. Fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× But Typesala helped me a lot.

✓ But Typesala helped me a lot.

Sentence is correct; no change needed. 'A lot' is an adverbial phrase correctly modifying 'helped'. Included here to indicate it's acceptable.

× In Typesala we get able to learn every word in the keyboard.

✓ On Typesala, we are able to learn the position of every key on the keyboard.

Use preposition 'on' for a website/app, use passive 'are able to', and clarify 'position of every key' rather than 'every word in the keyboard'. Use 'on the keyboard' for correct preposition.

× So Typesala is one of the biggest improvement for me.

✓ So Typesala is one of the biggest improvements for me.

Use plural noun 'improvements' after 'one of the' and include 'for me' is fine. This corrects incorrect use of noun number.