打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Reduce hesitations and filler words, start with a clear topic sentence, and provide one concise reason with a specific example. Use linking words (for example, however) to make it coherent. Keep the answer under five sentences.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to correct mistakes. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can edit sentences quickly, which saves time. However, I still sometimes handwrite notes when I study because it helps me remember information better.

建議: Give a direct, grammatical statement about your daily habit, then add a specific detail or frequency. Avoid repetition and fillers; use linking words like "usually" or "sometimes" to clarify frequency.

範例: I usually use a laptop rather than a desktop for my daily tasks. For instance, I use it several times a day to search information and complete study assignments, but I don't sit at the keyboard all day.

建議: Answer with a clear time reference and concise description of how you learned. Use past tense for completed events (e.g., "I learned"), include a brief example of an early activity that helped you improve, and keep to two or three sentences.

範例: I learned to type naturally a few years ago when I started using a laptop for my studies. At first I typed slowly while searching for information, but day by day I improved by practicing and writing assignments online.

建議: Provide a clear method of improvement with specific actions (e.g., practice regularly, use typing tutors, set goals). Use linking words like "for example" or "by" to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and typing documents for my classes. For example, I set aside 20 minutes each day to type essays and I sometimes use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Thing, well, uh, I prefer typing because, uh, when, uh, we type, if, uh, we made a mistake, we easily, uh, can remove these or edit, uh, those mistake.

✓ Well, I prefer typing because when we type and make a mistake, we can easily remove or edit it.

The original sentence has awkward filler words and incorrect tense and plural agreement: 'we made a mistake' mixes past with general present meaning, and 'those mistake' uses plural demonstrative with a singular noun. This is a sentence structure and tense problem. Suggestion: remove fillers, use present simple for general habits ('we type and make a mistake'), use 'it' for a singular mistake or 'them' for mistakes, and keep word order concise. Suggested practice: rewrite similar sentences without fillers and check subject-verb and singular/plural consistency.

× But, uh, when we hand, uh, write on a paper, it's, uh, quite difficult, you know, So I didn't prefer, uh, handwriting.

✓ But when we handwrite on paper, it is quite difficult, so I do not prefer handwriting.

Errors include incorrect verb form spacing ('hand, write' should be 'handwrite'), wrong article usage ('on a paper' -> 'on paper'), and wrong tense ('I didn't prefer' should be present 'I do not prefer' for a general preference). This is sentence structure and article/tense usage. Suggestion: use 'handwrite' as one word, 'on paper' for the medium, and present simple to state preferences. Practice: state preferences in present simple and avoid unnecessary fillers.

× Keyboard every day well uh no, I didn't uh do this uh uh I usually use my laptop uh when I need for my study I just uh watch I just search information on it umm I just uh do when I need.

✓ No, I do not use a desktop keyboard every day. I usually use my laptop when I need it for my studies; I search for information on it.

Multiple issues: missing auxiliary for negation ('I didn't do this' is past but context is habitual), incorrect word order and missing pronouns ('when I need for my study' -> 'when I need it for my studies'), and repetition. This is sentence structure and tense usage. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, include the object 'it' for 'use the laptop', and use 'studies' plural. Remove fillers. Practice: form clear short sentences for each idea.

× Actually, uh, I learn naturally, uh, uh, when I uh, use my laptop uh, for study purpose and that time I umm, type umm, to inform uh, search information and uh, day by day, I naturally improve my umm, keyboard, uh, my typing.

✓ Actually, I learned naturally when I used my laptop for study purposes, and at that time I typed to look for information; day by day, my typing naturally improved.

Tense inconsistency: the speaker refers to a past learning period so past simple ('learn' -> 'learned', 'use' -> 'used', 'type' -> 'typed') is appropriate. Also 'for study purpose' should be 'for study purposes' and 'search information' -> 'look for information' or 'search for information'. The clause 'my keyboard, my typing' is redundant; use 'my typing improved'. Suggestion: choose past tense for past events and correct collocations ('study purposes', 'search for information'). Practice: identify time references to pick correct tense and use standard verb patterns like 'search for'.

× I already, uh, told you, uh, I just, uh, uh, naturally, uh, improve my typing.

✓ I already told you I just naturally improve my typing.

The phrase 'improve my typing' describes an ongoing habit or gradual change; simple present 'improve' is acceptable for habitual action, but the filler words disrupt clarity. If referring to a past point, 'I have improved' could be used. This is a tense and sentence structure issue. Suggestion: remove fillers and choose tense based on intended meaning: present simple for habits, present perfect for progress up to now. Practice: decide if you mean a habit or completed improvement and use present simple or present perfect accordingly.

× I uh, I didn't learn this uh, professionally.

✓ I did not learn this professionally.

Use of contractions and fillers aside, 'didn't learn' is correct if referring to past learning. This sentence largely only needs filler removal and contraction expansion for clarity. It's a past tense usage; keep past simple for a completed action in the past. Suggestion: avoid fillers and use full forms in formal answers. Practice: respond with concise sentences: 'I did not learn this professionally.'

× Whenever I need uh, laptop or computer, I just, umm, uh, type and uh, day by day I improve myself.

✓ Whenever I need a laptop or a computer, I just type, and day by day I improve.

Missing articles ('a laptop or computer' should be 'a laptop or a computer'), awkward reflexive 'improve myself' is unnecessary when 'improve' suffices. This is sentence structure and article use. Suggestion: include indefinite articles before singular countable nouns and omit unnecessary reflexive pronouns when the verb is intransitive. Practice: learn when to use 'a' before singular countable nouns and use 'improve' without 'myself' in this context.