打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Also correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “I prefer typing to handwriting,” “it is easier to type,” “you can edit quickly”).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is quicker and easier to edit. For example, when I study at school I can reorganize my notes instantly on a laptop, which saves time and helps me study more effectively.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repeating the same idea. Use correct phrasing (e.g., “I’m used to it,” “I can type quickly on a laptop”).

範例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I’m used to it and I can type quickly. For instance, I finish my homework and emails faster on my laptop than I would on a desktop.

建議: Provide a clear time reference in the topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Remove confusing fragments and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words (e.g., “I learned… when,” “because,” “as a result”).

範例: I learned to type in junior high school when we had regular practice sessions. Because of that practice, my speed and accuracy improved, which helped me complete school assignments more efficiently.

建議: Answer directly with one clear method and add a specific detail or result. Correct grammar and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to show effect (e.g., “so,” “as a result”).

範例: I improve my typing by taking lessons with a tutor who focuses on accuracy and technique. As a result, my error rate has decreased and my typing speed has increased, which makes schoolwork much faster.

× Well, I prefer.

✓ Well, I prefer typing.

The original sentence is incomplete; 'prefer' needs an object to be grammatical. Add the object 'typing' to clarify what is preferred.

× And I prefer typing then handwriting because first is easily is easily to type and you can edit it quickly.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier to type and you can edit it quickly.

Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A then B'. Remove duplicated phrase 'is easily is easily' and use the adjective 'easier' (comparative) to compare typing and handwriting. Also add pronoun 'it' to refer to typing.

× But for handwriting you can edit it and it's much slower.

✓ Handwriting is much slower to edit.

The original sentence is awkwardly phrased. Make the subject 'handwriting' and use 'is much slower to edit' for clarity and correct comparative structure.

× So I prefer typing more than handwriting.

✓ So I prefer typing to handwriting.

With 'prefer' the correct preposition is 'to' (prefer A to B), not 'more than'. Use 'prefer typing to handwriting' for standard usage.

× For example when I go to school or study I easily type 1 and write it.

✓ For example, when I go to school or study, I usually type notes instead of writing them.

The original 'type 1 and write it' is unclear and uses '1' incorrectly. Replace with 'type notes' and make pronoun agreement 'them' referring to notes. Add commas for sentence clarity and 'usually' for natural frequency adverb.

× I type on a laptop keyboard everyday because I'm adapted to it and I can actually type fast with laptop keyboard.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I'm used to it, and I can actually type quickly on a laptop keyboard.

Use 'every day' (two words) for frequency. 'Adapted to' is less natural here; use 'used to'. Use adverb 'quickly' to modify 'type'. Include article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' in the second clause and use 'on' instead of missing preposition.

× So I do type on laptop keyboard every day, every time and mostly.

✓ So I do type on a laptop keyboard every day, most of the time.

Include the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. 'Every time and mostly' is unidiomatic; use 'most of the time' to express frequency.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I don't have to type, I don't have to type on top on the keyboard.

✓ I didn't have to type on a keyboard then.

The question asks about past learning, so use past tense 'didn't have to'. The original repeats and uses present tense and awkward 'on top on the keyboard' phrase; simplify to 'on a keyboard'.

× When I was in junior high school when we practice in high city class and you know, regular exercise actually helped me to improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ When I was in junior high school, we practiced in a high-speed class, and regular exercises actually helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

Remove the repeated 'when' and correct verb tense 'practiced' (past). 'High city class' is unclear; likely 'high-speed class' or 'typing class'—I used 'high-speed class'. Use plural 'exercises' and omit 'to' after 'helped me' since 'helped me improve' is correct.

× So it was really helpful because typing is essential for school, school work a little for my studies and also for work.

✓ So it was really helpful because typing is essential for school, for schoolwork and for my studies and future work.

Use 'schoolwork' as one word and include prepositions 'for' consistently. Clarify 'a little' which was unclear; replace with 'for my studies and future work' for natural meaning.

× How I improve my type, How I improve my typing is through tutoring.

✓ How I improved my typing was through tutoring.

Match past-tense context by using 'improved' and avoid repeating the clause. Use 'was' for past explanation.

× I actually pay the teacher to help me increase my accuracy in typing of keyboard.

✓ I actually paid a teacher to help me increase my keyboard typing accuracy.

Use past tense 'paid' to match prior context. Reorder phrase to 'keyboard typing accuracy' for natural word order and use article 'a' before 'teacher'.

× Which are which have which have actually helped me.

✓ This helped me a lot.

The original fragment is ungrammatical and repetitive. Replace it with a clear, simple past-tense sentence 'This helped me a lot.'