打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct repetition and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating words, and give one specific reason with a linking phrase. Use correct articles and word order.

範例: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the tactile feeling of pen on paper. For example, when I take notes by hand I remember information better, so I often write by hand during lectures.

建議: Correct grammar and remove hesitations. Begin with a direct statement, then give one brief reason and a linking word. Fix possessive and tense errors and avoid repeating words.

範例: I type on a laptop every day because I only own a laptop, not a desktop. Also, I prefer the laptop’s keyboard because it is compact and portable for my daily work.

建議: Use correct tense and smoother sentence structure. Start with the time reference, then explain briefly with specific details. Use linking words like “because” correctly and avoid unnecessary words.

範例: I learned to type when I was in elementary school because the school had computer classes. For example, we practiced typing regularly and sometimes took speed tests to measure our progress.

建議: Provide a clearer structure and more specific information. State your main point, then give a short reason or example. Avoid wordiness and use correct adverb forms (e.g. “especially”). Consider mentioning small strategies if any.

範例: I don’t practice typing especially because I use it daily and feel comfortable with my speed. However, I sometimes improve by typing emails and assignments quickly, which helps maintain and slightly increase my speed.

× It depends, but most of all I prefer handwriting Handwriting because I like the feeling of the hand to touch the paper.

✓ It depends, but I prefer handwriting most of all because I like the feeling of my hand touching the paper.

Original has article and word order issues: 'handwriting Handwriting' repeats and 'the feeling of the hand to touch the paper' is unnatural. Use 'my hand' (correct pronoun) and the gerund 'touching' to express sensation. Also place 'most of all' after the verb for natural order.

× I type on the laptop keyboard every day because my I only have a laptop.

✓ I type on the laptop keyboard every day because I only have a laptop.

Original has a misplaced 'my' before 'I', which is ungrammatical. Remove the extraneous pronoun so the clause correctly explains the reason.

× I I didn't have a desktop and I prefer the laptop's feeling.

✓ I don't have a desktop, and I prefer the laptop's feel.

Original shows tense inconsistency and repetition 'I I' and uses awkward noun 'feeling' after possessive. The question asks about daily habit, so present simple 'don't have' is appropriate. 'Feel' (noun) is more natural than 'feeling' here; remove duplicate 'I'.

× When I was elementary school student, the school will teach us how to type because we have a computer class and even they will test us the how fast we can type in the on the keyboard.

✓ When I was an elementary school student, the school taught us how to type because we had a computer class, and they even tested how fast we could type on the keyboard.

Original mixes past and future tenses and has article omission and word-order problems. Use past tense throughout ('was', 'taught', 'had', 'tested', 'could') because this refers to past events. Add indefinite article 'an' before 'elementary school student', remove extraneous words ('the', repeated 'the'), and place 'on the keyboard' correctly.

× I don't practice typing specially because I think it's just a normal skill because I type every day so I don't need to practice more.

✓ I don't practice typing specially because I think it's just a normal skill; I type every day, so I don't need to practice more.

Original uses 'specially' incorrectly; 'especially' would be closer but still odd. 'Specially' is rarely used here. The sentence needs better connector use and punctuation. Keep present simple tense for habitual action and use a semicolon or split into clauses for clarity. Optionally, use 'especially' if intended: 'I don't especially practice typing'.