打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, typed information is much easier to locate and edit, which saves me time. Also, as a software engineer I often need to reuse and modify code or notes, so digital text is more practical.

建議: Provide a clear direct answer, fix grammar and be specific about time period. Use linking words to connect job and habit, and avoid vague words like "some" and incomplete numbers.

範例: Yes, I use a laptop every day because I write code and prepare documentation for my projects. In fact, I've been using a laptop daily for the last seven years.

建議: Give a concise timeline with correct tense and one specific detail about how you improved. Use a linking word to connect the two points.

範例: I learned to type when I was in high school. However, my speed and accuracy improved considerably after I became a software engineer, because I typed code and documentation every day.

建議: Use present tense for habitual actions, be specific about the website or practice method, and explain how the features help you improve. Keep it concise and coherent with linking words.

範例: I practice on an online typing platform that measures speed and accuracy and allows me to compare my scores with others. This competitive feedback motivates me to practice regularly and focus on accuracy improvements.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because the type the information is easy to locate and edit, and since I'm a software engineer there is a lot of opportunity to code it and edit something.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typed information is easy to locate and edit, and since I'm a software engineer there are many opportunities to write code and make edits.

Errors: 'the type the information' is incorrect word order and forms; 'type' should be past participle 'typed' used adjectivally (problem type 9: past participle form) and 'the' is unnecessary (problem type 22: article errors). 'there is a lot of opportunity' uses singular 'is' with countable 'opportunities' and awkward phrasing: change to 'there are many opportunities' to match plural (problem type 1 and 27: singular/plural and subject-verb agreement). 'to code it and edit something' is informal and unclear; use 'write code and make edits'. Suggestion: use 'typed' to describe information, remove unnecessary articles, use plural 'opportunities' with 'are', and prefer clear verb phrases like 'write code' and 'make edits'.

× Yes, of course, I'm a software engineer so I need to write some code, image and documentations. So yeah, I use a laptop every day and I've been doing this for last 7.

✓ Yes, of course. I'm a software engineer, so I need to write code, images, and documentation. I use a laptop every day and I've been doing this for the last seven years.

Errors: 'write some code, image and documentations' mixes singular/plural and uncountable nouns: 'image' should be plural 'images' if multiple files, and 'documentations' is usually uncountable 'documentation' (problem types 1 and 22). 'some' is unnecessary before 'code' but acceptable; streamlined to 'write code'. 'I've been doing this for last 7' lacks 'the' and the unit 'years' and should spell out number or include unit (problem types 17 and 7: article and future/time expression). Use 'the last seven years' and include 'years' to make time expression correct. Also added punctuation for clarity.

× I started to type on keyboard when I'm a high school student, but basically I improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer and my work helps me a lot.

✓ I started typing on the keyboard when I was a high school student, but I improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer because my work helps me a lot.

Errors: 'started to type' is acceptable but more natural 'started typing' (problem type 8: verb + -ing form). 'on keyboard' misses the article 'the' (problem type 17: article errors). 'when I'm a high school student' mixes present tense with past context; change to past 'when I was a high school student' (problem type 6: present tense issue vs past). 'but basically I improved' is okay; ensured sequence by keeping past 'improved' and 'after I became' is correct. Clarified reason with 'because' for smooth connection (problem type 16: conjunction).

× I used a website that can measure the typing speed and accuracy and the user can compare with other players result so it helps me improve my typing.

✓ I use a website that measures typing speed and accuracy, and users can compare their results with other players, so it helps me improve my typing.

Errors: 'used a website' suggests past; context indicates habitual present, so change to 'use' (problem type 6: present tense). 'that can measure' is acceptable but 'that measures' is more direct. 'the user can compare with other players result' has noun/pronoun agreement and article errors: use plural 'users' and 'their results' and plural 'results' (problem types 12 and 1). Add 'with other players' is fine; reorder to 'compare their results with other players' and add commas for clarity. This preserves meaning and corrects agreement and tense.