打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct small errors (e.g. "can be it's easy" → "is easier to"; "there are a lot of opportunity" → "there are many opportunities").

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier to locate and edit text. For example, as a software engineer I often search for specific strings in documents or code, which is much quicker on a computer.

建議: Combine sentences to avoid redundancy and improve fluency. Use a clear topic sentence followed by a brief supporting detail with a linking word. Fix word choice ("documentations" → "documentation").

範例: Yes, I use a keyboard every day. As a software engineer I regularly write code, emails and documentation, so I have been using keyboards daily for the past five years.

建議: Give a clear time and avoid unclear phrasing. Use one topic sentence stating when you learned, then add a concise supporting detail about improvement. Remove awkward grammar ("1 keyboard", "I've been being improved").

範例: I first learned to type on a keyboard in high school. However, I significantly improved my speed and accuracy after becoming a software engineer, especially over the last seven years.

建議: Answer directly and use present tense for current habits. Provide one or two specific details and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

範例: I improve my typing by using an online typing platform that measures speed and accuracy and allows me to compare my scores with other users. As a result, I can track progress and focus on weak areas like accuracy.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because the typed information can be it's easy to locate and edit.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because the typed information is easy to locate and edit.

The phrase 'can be it's easy' mixes modal 'can be' with a contracted pronoun 'it's' incorrectly. The intended meaning is a simple state: 'is easy'. Remove 'can be it's' and use 'is' to make a grammatical, clear sentence.

× Since I'm a software engineer, there are a lot of opportunity to edit and find some strings.

✓ Since I'm a software engineer, there are a lot of opportunities to edit and find strings.

The noun 'opportunity' is countable and must be plural after 'a lot of' ('a lot of opportunities'). Also 'some strings' is acceptable but 'strings' without 'some' is more natural here. Use plural 'opportunities' to match 'a lot of'.

× Yes, of course. Because I'm a software engineer, there are a lot of tasks to write code, emails and documentations, so I use it every day and I've been doing this for the last five years.

✓ Yes, of course. Because I'm a software engineer, I have a lot of tasks writing code, emails, and documentation, so I use it every day and I've been doing this for the last five years.

Problems: 'there are a lot of tasks to write code' is awkward; use 'I have a lot of tasks writing code' or 'I have many tasks that involve writing code'. 'Documentations' is uncountable; use 'documentation'. Pronoun 'it' is vague—replace with 'it' referring to typing is acceptable but keeping 'I use it every day' is okay after clarifying tasks. The correction makes structure natural and fixes uncountable noun.

× I started to type 1 keyboard when I was a high school student, but basically I improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer and I've been doing this for the last seven years, so I've been being improved.

✓ I started to learn typing on a keyboard when I was a high school student, but I really improved my typing skills after I became a software engineer, and I've been doing this for the last seven years, so my skills have improved.

Multiple issues: '1 keyboard' is incorrect—likely meant 'on a keyboard' or 'using a keyboard'. 'I've been being improved' is ungrammatical; use present perfect passive rarely—better: 'my skills have improved' or 'I have improved'. Also streamline 'basically' and tense consistency. Correction fixes preposition, verb form, and plurality/tense.

× I used a website that can measure my typing speed and accuracy and which let me compare the result with other users, so it helps.

✓ I use a website that can measure my typing speed and accuracy and that lets me compare the results with other users, so it helps.

Tense mismatch and verb form: 'I used' (past) conflicts with 'so it helps' (present). Keep present 'I use' if the website still helps. 'Which let' should be 'that lets' to agree with singular 'website'. 'Result' should be plural 'results' to match multiple attempts. Use '-ing' form 'measuring' is optional, but here 'measure' as verb is fine when present.

× It helped me a lot.

✓ It has helped me a lot.

Context suggests ongoing relevance (the website still helps), so present perfect 'has helped' is more appropriate than simple past 'helped'. If the website only helped in the past and no longer does, the original is fine; otherwise use present perfect to show continued effect.