打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm, yeah), and use correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., “grew up,” “typing”). Add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep answers under five sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting. I grew up writing by hand and find it helps me remember information better. Moreover, handwriting feels more personal and creative, whereas typing is more convenient for speed and editing.

建議: Give a direct, grammatical response and remove irrelevant or confusing phrases. Use linking words to explain reason and be specific about frequency and purpose. Avoid exaggeration unless justified and avoid filler words.

範例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. As a computer science student I code for several hours daily, often writing hundreds of lines of code, so I use the laptop keyboard for study and projects.

建議: Correct grammar and choose clear vocabulary. Start with a simple time reference, give a reason, and describe improvement concisely. Replace vague or incorrect words (e.g., “skill mystique”) with precise terms like “skills” or “ability.”

範例: I learned to type when I was a child because I played computer games a lot. Over the years my typing skills improved through regular practice and school assignments.

建議: Be specific and use correct terms (e.g., “ten-finger typing” not “10/10/10 fingers handwriting”). Provide clear steps or resources and use linking words. Keep sentences short and grammatical.

範例: I improve typing by following online tutorials that teach ten-finger typing and by doing daily practice exercises. For example, I use typing websites to practice for 20 minutes a day and track my speed and accuracy improvements.

× I grow up with handwriting.

✓ I grew up with handwriting.

The speaker refers to a past habitual background (growing up), so past tense is required. Use simple past 'grew up' instead of present 'grow up'. Suggestion: Use 'I grew up...' when describing your childhood background.

× I love to write on the paper.

✓ I love to write on paper.

English typically uses 'on paper' without the definite article when speaking generally. 'On the paper' suggests a specific sheet. Use 'on paper' for general activity. Suggestion: Say 'write on paper' for general statements.

× And yeah, although I think that tapping is more convenient in this day of age, but I still prefer handwriting.

✓ Although I think that typing is more convenient these days, I still prefer handwriting.

Using both 'although' and 'but' is redundant; choose one. 'Tapping' is the wrong word for typing; 'typing' is correct. 'In this day of age' is wordy; 'these days' is natural. Remove the initial 'And yeah' for formality. Suggestion: Use either 'Although...' or '...but...' and prefer 'typing' and 'these days'.

× As a computer science student, I always have to work on my laptop, I have to tap, I have 1000 lines of code every day.

✓ As a computer science student, I always have to work on my laptop; I have to type about 1,000 lines of code every day.

Run-on sentence: two independent clauses need separation (semicolon or conjunction). 'Tap' is incorrect for typing; use 'type'. Numbers over 999 are better written with commas. Add 'about' if approximate. Suggestion: Split clauses or use connectors; use 'type' and write numbers clearly.

× And then, yeah, keep all this, my close friends, I have to say that.

✓ Also, I keep in touch with my close friends this way, I have to say.

Original is fragmented and unclear. 'Keep all this, my close friends' is ungrammatical. Clarify meaning: if intent is maintaining contact via laptop/typing, state 'keep in touch with my close friends this way.' Suggestion: Make the clause clear and complete: subject + verb + object.

× My first experience typing keyboard was when I was a kid.

✓ My first experience typing on a keyboard was when I was a kid.

Missing preposition 'on' after 'typing' and noun 'keyboard' needs article 'a'. Suggestion: Use 'typing on a keyboard' for correct collocation.

× I love to play computer games and that's why I learned to to use the keyboard very soon.

✓ I loved to play computer games, and that's why I learned to use the keyboard very early.

Tense consistency: describing childhood should use past tense 'loved' and 'learned'. Remove duplicate 'to'. 'Very soon' is unnatural for skill acquisition; 'very early' or 'at an early age' is better. Suggestion: Keep past tense for past events and avoid repeated words.

× However, as growing up my skill mystique was enhanced so much.

✓ However, as I grew up, my typing skills improved a lot.

'As growing up' is ungrammatical; use 'as I grew up'. 'Skill mystique' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'typing skills'. 'Was enhanced so much' is wordy and passive; 'improved a lot' is natural. Suggestion: Use active voice, correct noun phrase 'typing skills', and proper past tense expression.

× I think the most effective ways to learn from a tutorial like there are so many videos about like 10/10/10 fingers handwriting and also just practice more and then you will come more faster and efficiency.

✓ I think the most effective way is to learn from tutorials; there are many videos about the ten-finger typing method, and just practice more so you will become faster and more efficient.

Multiple issues: 'ways to learn from a tutorial like' is awkward—use 'way is to learn from tutorials'. '10/10/10 fingers handwriting' is incorrect phrase; likely 'ten-finger typing method'. 'Come more faster' is ungrammatical; use 'become faster'. 'Efficiency' is a noun; need adjective 'efficient' or adverb 'more efficiently'. Suggestion: Break into clearer clauses, use 'ten-finger typing method', 'become faster', and 'more efficient'.