打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more concise and natural, correct small grammar issues, and add one specific example to support your preference. Use a clear topic sentence, a linking word, and a specific detail. Avoid redundancy such as repeating "if I need" and awkward phrase "submit to my work."

範例: I prefer typing because it’s faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays for university I can rearrange paragraphs quickly and track changes, which saves time. Also, I can easily share my files with classmates and my teacher via email or cloud storage.

建議: Reduce hesitation sounds and repetition, and make the answer more fluent by combining sentences and adding a brief reason. Start with a clear topic sentence and follow with one concise supporting detail linked with a word like "because."

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I’m a student and most of my assignments and emails are done on my laptop. Therefore, I type daily for coursework and communication with my teachers.

建議: Correct verb tense and article usage, remove redundancy, and give a precise time reference plus one detail about what you learned. Use linking words like "when" and "since then" to show sequence.

範例: I learned to type in high school when our teacher taught us proper typing technique and how to format documents for assignments. Since then, I’ve practiced those skills when writing reports and homework.

建議: Fix word choice errors (e.g., "lawyers" → "ways"), avoid hesitations, and provide specific methods and frequency. Give two concrete techniques and link them with words like "for example" or "also."

範例: I improve my typing in several ways. For example, I practice with online typing tests twice a week to increase speed and accuracy, and I type essays and messages daily, which helps maintain my skills.

× I learn to type on keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard.

The speaker refers to a past event (when they were in high school), so the verb should be past tense. Use 'learned' for past tense and include the article 'the' before 'keyboard'. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past actions and include definite article for a specific keyboard.

× When I was in high school our teacher showed how to type properly and prepare documents for assignments.

✓ When I was in high school, our teacher showed us how to type properly and prepare documents for assignments.

Missing object 'us' after 'showed' makes the sentence unclear. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Use past tense 'showed' is correct; add the object to complete the verb's meaning. Suggestion: include the indirect object and punctuation for clarity.

× So most of the those skills comes those lessons.

✓ So most of those skills came from those lessons.

'Most of those skills' is plural, so the verb should be plural past tense 'came' rather than 'comes'. Also use 'from' to show source. Remove the extra article 'the' before 'those'. Suggestion: ensure noun-verb agreement and correct preposition for origin.

× I type on laptop keyboard every single day.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every single day.

Before 'laptop keyboard' an indefinite article 'a' is needed when referring to one of many keyboards. Also consider adding 'the' if referring to a specific keyboard. Suggestion: use appropriate article ('a' or 'the') based on specificity.

× I need to submit my documents to my teacher.

✓ I need to submit my documents to my teacher.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. 'Submit to' is correct when indicating the recipient. No change needed.

× So uh, I need to uh, type in in my keyboard every single day.

✓ So, I need to type on my keyboard every single day.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'keyboard', not 'in'. Remove the duplicated 'in' and filler words for clarity; add a comma after 'So' for flow. Suggestion: use 'type on the keyboard' and avoid unnecessary fillers.

× I improve my typing, uh, in several lawyers.

✓ I improve my typing in several ways.

'Lawyers' is a wrong word here; the intended word is 'ways'. The comma and filler 'uh' should be minimized. Correct the noun and keep preposition 'in' with 'ways'. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and reduce fillers.

× Everyday I am typing for my uh, studies or work and uh, I send a message to my friends by typing so in this way.

✓ Every day I type for my studies or work, and I send messages to my friends by typing.

Use simple present 'type' for habitual actions rather than present continuous 'am typing'. 'Every day' should be two words. 'Messages' plural is more natural. Remove extra fillers and the vague ending. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and correct word spacing and plurality.

× Also, I share my documents with my friends and teacher if I need to submit to my work.

✓ Also, I share my documents with my friends and my teacher if I need to submit them for work.

Add 'my' before 'teacher' for parallel structure. Use object 'them' to refer back to 'documents'. Use 'for work' rather than 'to my work' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: maintain parallel possessive pronouns and clear pronoun references.

× Actually I prefer typing because it's more convenient for longer documents.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing because it's more convenient for longer documents.

Sentence is grammatically correct regarding third person singular, but add a comma after 'Actually' for natural speech flow. No verb change needed. Suggestion: include proper punctuation for clarity.