打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb and article errors (e.g., "more faster" → "faster").

範例: I prefer handwriting because I write faster by hand than I do on a keyboard. For example, when I take notes in class I can keep up with the lecturer, whereas typing slows me down because I often mistype and have to correct errors.

建議: Answer directly and clearly. Begin with a short topic sentence stating which you use, then give one specific reason. Remove redundant phrases and correct tense and pronoun errors.

範例: I usually type on a desktop because my workplace provides desktop computers. As a result, I spend most of my typing time on a desktop rather than a laptop.

建議: Provide a clear time reference and concise supporting detail. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") correctly and avoid fillers like "I think" and repeated words.

範例: I learned to type just before high school, during a one-month course my parents enrolled me in. During that course I trained on a laptop and practiced basic typing skills, so I became comfortable with the keyboard before starting school.

建議: Give a clear method and a specific example. Use correct sentence structure and avoid repetition. Mention frequency or measurable practice to make the answer concrete.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my laptop, usually for 30 minutes a day. For example, I type articles or journal entries to build speed and accuracy, and I review my mistakes to avoid repeating them.

× I think I prefer handwriting and this is because with handwriting I tend to be more faster.

✓ I think I prefer handwriting, and this is because with handwriting I tend to be faster.

The phrase 'more faster' is redundant and incorrect; 'faster' already is the comparative form. Remove 'more' to use the correct comparative adverb. Also add a comma for clarity.

× Even though my handwriting is not clear, it's more faster for me, unlike typing.

✓ Even though my handwriting is not clear, it's faster for me than typing.

Again 'more faster' is incorrect; use 'faster'. Use 'than' to compare two things ('faster than typing') and remove 'unlike' which makes the sentence awkward.

× I'm not good in typing and before I identify the right of the kind of words in the keyboard becomes much more harder for me.

✓ I'm not good at typing, and identifying the right keys on the keyboard is much harder for me.

Use 'good at' (not 'good in'). 'Before I identify the right of the kind of words' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'identifying the right keys'. Use 'much harder'—do not use 'more' with 'harder'.

× I don't type on a keyboard and on most occasions I find myself using the desktop because where I work we have a desktop.

✓ I don't type often on a keyboard, and on most occasions I use a desktop because we have one at work.

The original is wordy and awkward. 'Don't type on a keyboard' is misleading; 'don't type often on a keyboard' clarifies frequency. 'We have a desktop at work' is a clearer, more natural prepositional phrase.

× So on account of my the times that I use a desktop or a laptop I spend most of the times on a desktop so they do type on a desktop.

✓ So, most of the time I use a desktop rather than a laptop.

The original sentence has redundant and confusing structure ('on account of my the times', 'they do type on a desktop'). Simplify to a clear subject and verb. Use 'most of the time' for frequency and 'rather than' for contrast.

× I think when I was almost to high school, because I I had like one month for myself before I joined high school.

✓ I think it was just before high school, because I had about one month for myself before I started high school.

Use 'before I started high school' rather than 'before I joined high school' for natural past tense. Remove extra filler 'like' and duplicate 'I'.

× And I remember that time my parents had enrolled me into an institution which I was trained on using the laptop.

✓ I remember that my parents enrolled me in an institution where I was trained to use a laptop.

Use 'enrolled me in' (not 'enrolled me into'). Use 'trained to use' rather than 'trained on using' for correct verb pattern and clarity.

× So that's when I got trained and I learned how to.

✓ So that's when I got trained and learned how to use it.

The original sentence ends abruptly ('learned how to.'). Complete the verb phrase with the object 'use it' to be grammatical.

× I consider just spending most of the times on the laptop because it's only it's only the practice that I put into it is when I do improve and develop more.

✓ I consider just spending most of my time on the laptop because practice is the only way I improve and develop.

Use 'most of my time' (not 'most of the times'). Remove duplicated phrases ('it's only it's only') and streamline to 'practice is the only way I improve' for clarity and correct quantifier use.

× I For example, I can spend time typing an article or journal in the laptop and that I find I find that to be more.

✓ For example, I can spend time typing an article or a journal on the laptop, and I find that helpful.

Fix capitalization and remove duplicated 'I find I find'. Use 'on the laptop' (not 'in'), and finish the idea by specifying what 'more' refers to; 'helpful' clarifies the benefit.