打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Говорите более естественно и грамматически правильно: используйте простые конструкции («I prefer handwriting»), избегайте повтора и ошибок (например, «more effective», «remember better», «prefer handwriting to typing»). Добавьте короткое пояснение с примером, связав идеи связками («because», «so»). Максимум 4–5 предложений.

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I remember things better when I write them by hand. For example, when I study English vocabulary, writing words helps me recall them later. Because I focus more on spelling and meaning, I retain information more effectively.

建議: Упростите и исправьте грамматику: используйте точные фразы («I usually use a laptop»), удалите лишние слова и повторения, добавьте причину и одно короткое уточнение с связкой (например, «because»). Следуйте пределу предложений (макс. 4–5).

範例: I usually use a laptop because my company provides one. I find it convenient for working on the go, although I can use a desktop when I'm at home. Overall, the laptop meets my daily needs.

建議: Сформулируйте ответ более компактно и корректно: начните с чёткого утверждения («I learned… at primary school when I was 6 or 7») и добавьте одно уточнение о впечатлениях. Избегайте разговорных вставок и повторов («and it's like the first time, yes»).

範例: I learned to type at primary school when I was around six or seven years old. It was my first experience with a keyboard and I found it very interesting, so I practiced a lot at home.

建議: Дайте более конкретные детали о методах улучшения: используйте последовательность и связки («by», «when», «so»), расскажите о регулярности практики или конкретных упражнениях (тайпинг-тесты, курсы). Избегайте расплывчатых выражений («Just using the road»).

範例: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice while doing homework at high school and university. I also used online typing tests and practiced touch-typing to increase my speed and accuracy. As a result, my typing became faster and more reliable.

× I prefer handler I think because when I study English or something to remember handwriting, it seems more effect effective for me.

✓ I prefer handwriting, I think, because when I study English or try to remember something, handwriting seems more effective for me.

The original sentence uses 'handler' instead of 'handwriting' (wrong word choice) and has awkward clause order. Also 'effect effective' is redundant. Correct by choosing the proper noun 'handwriting', placing clauses clearly, and using the adjective 'effective'. Use commas to separate parenthetical phrases. Grammar problem types: 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 27 (Subject-verb agreement issues) are not directly applicable here; the main issues are word choice and sentence structure (26). However, per the allowed list, treat this as subject-verb and sentence structure issues.

× After that I feel that I'm remembering more than when I'm typing words, so that's why I prefer handwriting than typing.

✓ After that I feel that I remember more than when I type, so that's why I prefer handwriting to typing.

Use the simple present 'I remember' and 'I type' for habitual actions instead of present continuous. For comparisons, use 'prefer A to B', not 'prefer A than B'. Replace 'typing words' with 'type' for conciseness. Grammar problem types: 6 (Present tense issue) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× I usually type on laptop because my company handled laptop and that's why I use it.

✓ I usually type on a laptop because my company provided me with one, and that's why I use it.

Use the article 'a' with singular countable nouns: 'a laptop'. 'Handled laptop' is incorrect; use 'provided me with one' or 'gave me a laptop'. Keep verb tense consistent: 'provided' (past) explains reason for current use. Grammar problem types: 22 (Article errors) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× It's all OK if I use desktop or laptop, but maybe I used to use laptop because of the company.

✓ It's fine to use either a desktop or a laptop, but I used to use a laptop because of the company.

Use 'either... or' for choices and include articles before singular nouns. 'It's all OK' is informal; 'It's fine' is better. 'I used to use laptop' needs 'a' and correct past habit 'used to use a laptop'. Grammar problem types: 22 (Article errors) and 6 (Present tense issue/common tense usage).

× I think it was on my primary school, so when I was maybe 6 or 7 years old, I was taught how to use it in school.

✓ I think it was in primary school, so when I was maybe 6 or 7 years old, I was taught how to use it at school.

Use the preposition 'in' with 'school' when referring to attendance. 'On my primary school' is incorrect. Also prefer 'at school' for where the teaching happened. Tense 'was taught' is correct for past passive. Grammar problem types: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 6 (Present tense issue references past correctly).

× And for me it was very interesting to use it.

✓ For me, it was very interesting to use.

Avoid redundant 'and' at the start and unnecessary pronoun 'it' at the end if context is clear. Use commas for clarity. The sentence can also be 'I found it very interesting.' for a more natural phrasing. Grammar problem types: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× And it's like the first time, yes.

✓ Yes, it was the first time I used one.

'It's like the first time' is informal and vague. Use past simple 'it was the first time I used one' to match prior past context. Place 'yes' appropriately. Grammar problem types: 6 (Present tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× Just using the road.

✓ Just by practicing regularly.

'Using the road' is not an appropriate idiom here. The student means practising; use 'by practicing regularly' or 'just practice'. Grammar problem types: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× So I was improving my typing through the university or high school when I write some homework.

✓ So I improved my typing in university and high school when I wrote homework assignments.

Match past tense: 'improved' and 'wrote' for past habits. Use 'in university and high school' not 'through'. Use 'homework assignments' for clarity. Keep tense consistent. Grammar problem types: 5 (Past tense issue) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions).

× So just practice. Practice makes perfect. I think that's it. And this is the most.

✓ So, just practice. Practice makes perfect. I think that's all; that's the most important thing.

'That's it' is fine but 'and this is the most' is unclear; replace with 'that's the most important thing'. Add commas and combine sentences for natural flow. Grammar problem types: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs).