打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more structured and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "I prefer typing because it is faster"), avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases ("run Japanese traditional choreography"). If you mean you practiced Japanese calligraphy, say so and explain the benefits briefly.

範例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for daily tasks. However, I also enjoy handwriting, especially Japanese calligraphy, because practicing it was calming and helped me focus. For example, doing calligraphy gives me a sense of mental fullness and satisfaction.

建議: Give a concise, clear answer naming which you use most and explain briefly why. Remove filler sounds and unclear words. If you sometimes use both, say that and give a specific reason for each (e.g., portability vs. power).

範例: I mainly use a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient for work. However, I sometimes use a desktop when I need more processing power for graphic design tasks.

建議: Answer directly with a clear time reference and a brief supporting detail about how you learned. Avoid unrelated or confusing phrases. Use past tense correctly and provide a specific example (e.g., practising games or lessons).

範例: I learned to type when I was a child after my parents bought our first home computer. I practised a lot by playing educational typing games and by typing school assignments, which helped me improve quickly.

建議: Give a clear method and specific activities you use to improve typing. Use linking words to structure the answer (first, also, finally). Avoid vague phrases like "feeling the reforms." Mention measurable or regular practices (daily practice, typing tests, use of specific tools).

範例: I improve my typing mainly by practising every day. For example, I set aside 20 minutes to do online typing exercises and take weekly speed tests to track progress. I also regularly write blog posts or web pages to build speed and accuracy in real tasks.

× I prefer the typing because really fast, but I really love the handwriting, especially calligraphy because I used to run Japanese traditional choreography, so that is so fun and so much beautiful and I got the mental fullness.

✓ I prefer typing because it's really fast, but I also love handwriting, especially calligraphy, because I used to practice traditional Japanese calligraphy; it was fun, very beautiful, and made me feel mentally fulfilled.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before uncountable noun 'typing' and awkward phrasing. Use 'typing' without 'the' (article error, ID 22). Omit 'the' and add appropriate verbs and connectors to form clear sentences. Replace 'run' with 'practice' because 'run' is incorrect for skill practice (word choice) and change 'Japanese traditional choreography' to 'traditional Japanese calligraphy' to match meaning. Add 'it's' for 'really fast' to form correct clause and use parallel structure 'fun, very beautiful, and made me feel mentally fulfilled' to improve clarity and grammar. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, use correct verbs ('practice'), and use connectors to join ideas.

× Uh, my daily use the R uh, computer is a laptop, but I have a boss. So when I uh, using a graphic quark, so I use the desktop, but I know using a a laptop, so wake up, it's more.

✓ My daily computer is a laptop, but at work I use a desktop for graphics work. At home I mostly use my laptop.

Multiple sentence structure and word choice errors (ID 26). Remove filler sounds and correct word order: 'my daily use the computer is a laptop' is ungrammatical; correct to 'My daily computer is a laptop.' 'I have a boss' is irrelevant; likely intended 'at work' so replace. 'Using a graphic quark' is incorrect—use 'graphics work' or 'graphic software.' 'I know using a a laptop, so wake up, it's more' is unclear; interpret as 'At home I mostly use my laptop.' Suggestion: simplify sentences, remove fillers, clarify context ('at work' vs 'at home'), and use standard phrases 'graphics work' and 'mostly use.'

× So don't worry, uh, when I was child, so my parents gave me a personal computer. So at the time to personal computer is really not popular, but I was leading into it. So, uh, it's not feeling running. So just praying.

✓ When I was a child, my parents gave me a personal computer. At that time personal computers were not very popular, but I became interested in it. I don't remember it being difficult; I was just practicing.

Errors: incorrect tense and missing articles (ID 5). 'When I was child' needs the article 'a' -> 'a child.' 'At the time to personal computer is really not popular' should be past tense: 'were not very popular.' 'I was leading into it' is incorrect verb choice; use 'became interested in it.' 'It's not feeling running' is unclear; interpret as 'I don't remember it being difficult' and use past tense for memories. Suggestion: use correct past tense forms for past events, include necessary articles, and choose verbs that reflect intention ('become interested', 'practice').

× Uh, my daily use the R uh, computer is a laptop, but I have a boss. So when I uh, using a graphic quark, so I use the desktop, but I know using a a laptop, so wake up, it's more.

✓ My daily computer is a laptop, but when I use graphic software I use a desktop; otherwise I use a laptop.

Original contains incorrect gerund/participle forms (ID 8). Phrases like 'when I uh, using' should be 'when I use' because a full finite verb is needed in the clause. 'I know using' is incorrect; use 'I usually use' or 'I often use.' Suggestion: use base verb with subject for temporal clauses ('when I use') and use adverbs like 'usually' for frequency.

× So most important things is feeling the reforms. So I, I have all the time create some content like homepage something. So it's have to do so not really focus on typing. So I need a more.

✓ The most important thing is practicing regularly. I often create content like web pages, so I have to write a lot; I don't focus solely on typing practice, so I need more focused practice.

Errors: wrong articles and pluralization (ID 22 and 1). 'Most important things is' should be singular 'The most important thing is' (singular/plural and agreement). 'Feeling the reforms' is unclear; likely 'practicing regularly' or 'building muscle memory.' 'I have all the time create' should be 'I often create' or 'I create all the time.' 'Homepage something' -> 'web pages.' 'It's have to do' incorrect; use 'I have to do a lot of writing.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct articles ('the most important thing'), and choose clear vocabulary for actions (practice, create web pages).