打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сократите повторения, исправьте грамматику и используйте связное предложение с ясной основной мыслью. Уберите тавтологию («it's my it's my type», «currently currently») и исправьте порядок слов (I am currently a computer science student). Добавьте одно-два конкретных объяснения, связанные с учёбой, и используйте связки (because, so) для логики.

範例: I prefer typing because I am currently a computer science student and I type every day for my classes. Because most of my assignments and notes are digital, typing is faster and more convenient for organizing information.

建議: Сформулируйте предложение чётко и завершённо; избегайте повторов («I use my laptop every day») и неоконченных фраз. Уточните причину (портативность, удобство клавиатуры) и добавьте одно связующее слово для плавности (so, therefore).

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I own a MacBook and I need to work on the go. Therefore, the laptop is more convenient and its keyboard suits my regular tasks.

建議: Упростите и структурируйте ответ: укажите конкретное время («at university») и объясните процесс обучения последовательно без запинок. Избегайте неясных фраз («after I didn't have, uh, had a laptop»). Используйте связки («so», «then») для последовательности действий.

範例: I learned to type at university when I got my first laptop. At first I typed slowly, but I practiced regularly and improved step by step.

建議: Сделайте ответ более ясным и структурированным: назовите конкретные методы (apps, practice, exercises), используйте правильные формы (apps which help me learn typing), и укажите результат (скорость, точность). Удалите лишние междометия (uh) и повторения.

範例: I improve my typing by using apps that teach touch typing and by practicing every day. After a few months of regular practice, my speed and accuracy improved significantly.

× Now I prefer typing because I'm a currently currently student in major computer science and I think it's my it's my type because I everyday typing.

✓ Now I prefer typing because I'm currently a computer science student and I think it's my type because I type every day.

The sentence has incorrect present tense forms and word order. 'I'm a currently currently student in major computer science' should be 'I'm currently a computer science student' (adverb placement and noun phrase order). 'I everyday typing' is incorrect: use simple present 'I type every day' for habitual action. Remove repeated words and redundant phrases. Suggestions: place adverbs (currently) before noun phrases, use simple present for routines, and avoid repetition.

× I use laptop keyboard every day because I have MacBook and I use my laptop every day and because it's easy and.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because I have a MacBook and I use my laptop every day because it's easy.

Missing articles: 'laptop keyboard' needs 'a' and 'MacBook' needs the article 'a' when referring to one device ('a MacBook'). The sentence also ends with an unfinished conjunction; replace with 'because' and complete the clause. Suggestions: include appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') and avoid trailing conjunctions.

× I learned to type at university because after I didn't have, uh, had a laptop and I don't use them after university, I, umm, typing every day. Umm, you step by step.

✓ I learned to type at university because before that I didn't have a laptop, and I didn't use one after university. I typed every day and improved step by step.

Tense inconsistencies and incorrect verb forms: 'after I didn't have, uh, had a laptop' is confusing; use 'before that I didn't have a laptop' for past reference. 'I don't use them after university' should be past 'I didn't use one after university.' 'I, umm, typing every day' should be past simple 'I typed every day.' Suggestions: keep past events in past simple, use singular pronouns for singular nouns, and clarify sequence words like 'before'/'after'.

× Fortunately, I use app who help uh, learn typing, but after then, uh, first, uh, it my first time I type it slowly, but after a few months I regular practice and then it helps for me. I think it's practice. It's good.

✓ Fortunately, I used an app that helped me learn to type. At first I typed slowly, but after a few months of regular practice it helped me. I think practice is good.

Multiple issues: wrong relative pronoun 'who' for apps (use 'that'), incorrect tense 'use' should be past 'used' if describing past learning, and missing object pronoun 'helped me.' 'Learn typing' should be 'learn to type' (infinitive). 'I regular practice' should be 'a few months of regular practice.' Suggestions: use correct relative pronouns, match tense to context, use 'learn to [verb]' and 'of' after time expressions ('months of practice').