打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (like, umm), remove repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking phrase. Use correct verb forms and articles.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit and correct my spelling quickly, which saves time when I’m doing assignments or work. Therefore, typing suits my study and job needs better.

建議: Clarify and correct the device names and reduce hesitation. Give a direct answer first, then a brief explanation using linking words. Avoid contradicting device names (desktop vs laptop).

範例: It depends: I use a desktop at home for most tasks, but I use a laptop at work and when I go out. For instance, I usually work on my laptop during office hours, and I switch to my desktop for longer sessions at home.

建議: Provide a clear time reference, remove fillers, and use correct tense and articles. Begin with a direct statement of when, then explain briefly how you learned and how you felt, using linking words for coherence.

範例: I learned to type in Year 5 when my school started assigning online homework. At first I felt uncomfortable because I wasn’t used to the keyboard, but after regular practice I gradually became much more confident.

建議: Avoid repetition and add specific methods. State a direct topic sentence, then give concrete strategies and a linking word to show progression. Mention measurable or varied practice to sound more natural.

範例: I improve my typing by practising every day and using typing websites to track my speed and accuracy. For example, I spend 20 minutes on exercises and then type emails or essays to apply what I learned, which helps me improve steadily.

× And most of my studies and job require a computer computer typing.

✓ Most of my studies and my job require computer typing.

The original repeats 'computer' and misuses articles. Use 'most of my studies and my job' to make parallel nouns clear and omit unnecessary article before 'computer typing'. Use 'require computer typing' or 'require using a computer to type' for clarity.

× So that's I prefer typing instead of handwriting.

✓ So I prefer typing instead of handwriting.

The phrase 'that's I prefer' is ungrammatical. Remove 'that's' to form a correct independent clause 'So I prefer...'. This keeps the sentence concise and clear.

× When I'm at work I type on the computer keyboard and when I'm just, umm, chatting with friends on my laptop, I type it on my desktop.

✓ When I'm at work, I type on the desktop keyboard, and when I'm chatting with friends on my laptop, I type on my laptop.

Pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'typing'. Also the devices were confused: if at work use desktop, while chatting on laptop use laptop. Ensure consistent noun references and remove unnecessary 'it'. Add commas for clarity.

× I think it's umm Year 5 'cause that's when my school require umm uh, online text to do for homework.

✓ I think it was Year 5 because that's when my school required online texts to do for homework.

Tense should be past ('was','required') because the learning happened in the past. 'Require' must agree with past context. Use 'texts' plural for countable noun and remove filler words. Replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because' in formal response.

× So that's how I Start learning how to type it on the computer.

✓ So that's how I started learning to type on the computer.

Verb 'Start' should be past tense 'started' to match past context. 'Type it' is incorrect; use 'type' without object. Use 'learning to type' (infinitive) not 'learning how to type it'.

× At first I feel kind of umm, uncomfortable of typing it, but at least I'm like, get used to it now.

✓ At first I felt kind of uncomfortable typing, but now I've gotten used to it.

'Feel' should be past 'felt' for past experience. Preposition 'of' is incorrect after 'uncomfortable'; remove it. 'Typing it' is unnecessary object; use 'typing'. Use present perfect 'I've gotten used to it' to indicate a change up to now.

× I just type on a keyboard every single day.

✓ I type on a keyboard every day.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but wordy. Removing 'just' and one 'single' makes it more natural. No grammatical error with -ing here; this suggestion is stylistic to improve clarity.

× I practice every single day. That's what they say. Practice makes perfect. And I practice typing. That's how I improve my typing daily.

✓ I practice every day. As they say, practice makes perfect, so I practice typing daily to improve.

Original has repetitive short sentences. Combine into smoother, coherent sentence: 'As they say' rather than 'That's what they say', and 'practice typing daily to improve' is concise. This addresses sentence flow rather than strict grammatical error.