打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Correct basic grammar (e.g., use full clauses and correct word order). Avoid filler sounds. For example, say you prefer typing, explain why (speed, neatness) and give a brief example or result.

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and produces neater text. For example, when I type emails or reports at work, my messages look professional and are easier to edit, so I save time and reduce mistakes.

建議: Start with a direct answer, then give two specific activities and use linking words to connect them. Fix word order and plural/singular forms. Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

範例: Yes, I type every day on a desktop keyboard because my job requires me to write reports and send emails. I also use the keyboard to chat with colleagues and to write meeting summaries, which helps me stay organized.

建議: Give a clear time reference and use correct tense. Organize the answer: state when you started, how you learned, and add a brief comment if relevant. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases like 'great grade 3'.

範例: I started learning to type when I was about nine years old, in third grade, and I have been practicing ever since. I learned mostly at school but didn’t enjoy the formal typing lessons, so I improved more by practicing on the computer.

建議: Offer a clear, practical method with specific actions and use linking words to show sequence or reason. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'write summaries' not 'riot summary'). Limit to two sentences.

範例: To improve my typing, I practice every day by writing chat messages and typing meeting summaries, which increases my speed and accuracy. In addition, I use online typing exercises for 15 minutes daily to focus on accuracy and reduce errors.

× I prefer typing rather than handwriting because handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is not good.

Original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Prefer A to B' is the correct pattern (Grammar ID 26). Also the clause 'handwriting' alone lacks a verb or complement; add 'my handwriting is not good' to explain the reason.

× When I write my I'm, I'm not beautiful about handwriting.

✓ When I write, my handwriting is not neat.

Sentence uses incorrect pronoun and word order. 'My I'm' is ungrammatical and 'I'm not beautiful about handwriting' misuses 'beautiful' and pronoun. Replace with 'my handwriting is not neat' to describe writing quality (Grammar ID 12). Also remove redundant 'when I write' placement.

× The typing, uh, more faster than handwriting.

✓ Typing is faster than handwriting.

Comparative with 'more faster' is incorrect because 'faster' already is the comparative form; do not add 'more' (Grammar ID 13). Also remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary article 'The'.

× Yes, because my job I work in front of desktop so I'm typing on keyboard every every day to work, to chat or to get summary after meeting.

✓ Yes, because at my job I work at a desktop, so I type on the keyboard every day to work, chat, or prepare summaries after meetings.

Multiple issues: verb forms and articles. 'I work in front of desktop' needs article 'a' or 'the' and preposition 'at a desktop' (Grammar ID 11). 'I'm typing' present simple 'I type' suits habitual action (Grammar ID 2/6). 'Every every day' is redundant. 'Get summary' should be 'prepare summaries'; plural and article corrected.

× I learned that type on the keyboard when I'm work.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was working.

Use 'learned to + base verb' not 'learned that type' (Grammar ID 5). Tense consistency: 'when I'm work' is incorrect; use past progressive 'I was working' to indicate time context.

× Great grade 3 umm 9 years old until now.

✓ I started in grade 3, when I was about nine years old, and have used it since then.

Original is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Clarify starting point and use correct clauses to show duration (Grammar ID 26).

× Yes. But the the lecture of type on the keyboard, I don't like it.

✓ Yes, but I did not like the typing lessons on the keyboard.

Duplicate 'the the' and awkward noun phrase. Use 'typing lessons' and past tense 'did not like' to reflect past classes (Grammar ID 22).

× I think you must to take time on your keyboard when you are chat or when you are riot summary after meeting.

✓ I think you must spend time on the keyboard when you chat or when you write summaries after meetings.

'Must to' is wrong; use 'must' + base verb (Grammar ID 4). 'Take time on your keyboard' is awkward; use 'spend time on the keyboard'. 'Chat' should be base form without 'are'. 'Riot summary' is incorrect; intended 'write summaries'. Also pluralize 'meetings'.

× When you do that every day I think it was better than now.

✓ If you do that every day, I think it will be better than now.

Conditional meaning requires 'If you do that every day' and future 'will be' to express expected improvement; 'it was better' mixes past tense incorrectly (Grammar ID 6). Use comma after conditional clause.