打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a brief example. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases (e.g. "give me more reaction"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

範例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me think more clearly. For example, when I solve math problems I can write formulas and draw diagrams, which makes it easier to arrive at the correct answer.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and streamline supporting details. Use clearer linking and correct small grammar errors. Mention one or two specific activities you do when typing to add content.

範例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I use it for studying. For example, I type lecture notes and draft essays, which helps me organize ideas before writing a final version.

建議: Start with a concise answer (timeframe) then add one clear reason or detail. Remove filler words and correct sentence structure. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

範例: I learned to type in primary school during computer science class. The teacher explained that computer skills open up future opportunities, so we practiced typing regularly to build that ability.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and one or two specific methods with brief explanations. Reduce hesitations and repetitive phrases. Use linking words such as "for example" or "also" to structure the answer.

範例: I improve my typing by practising online typing games and using timed exercises. For example, I play a typing-speed game that makes me type words under time pressure, which helps me increase accuracy and speed.

× For me, I prefer handwriting compared with typing.

✓ For me, I prefer handwriting to typing.

Use of prepositions: English uses 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A compared with B'. Replace 'compared with' with 'to' for idiomatic preference expression.

× As in handwriting can give me more reaction, like for example when you like calculate some math problems.

✓ Handwriting gives me a quicker response, for example when you are solving math problems.

Adjective/adverb and verb form errors: 'can give me more reaction' is unidiomatic; use 'gives me a quicker response'. Also tense and verb forms: 'when you like calculate' should be 'when you are solving' or 'when you calculate'. Use 'solving' for math problems.

× If you can do the handwriting, it's much better for you to get the final answer than the typing.

✓ If you can do the handwriting, it's much easier for you to get the final answer than with typing.

Singular/plural and preposition: 'the typing' is awkward; use 'typing' with preposition 'with'. Also 'better to get' is acceptable but 'easier to get' is more natural. Keep nouns consistent.

× Yes, I think I type on my laptop every day because I'm a student I always have so many either work need to work on.

✓ Yes, I think I type on my laptop every day because I'm a student and I always have so much work to do.

Third person singular/verb form and sentence structure: Missing conjunction 'and' to join clauses; 'either' is incorrect; 'so many work' should be 'so much work' (uncountable). Use 'to do' for purpose/need.

× So every day I try to type some material I gained from from the lessons so that I have a material to to write in the final essay.

✓ So every day I try to type some material I gained from the lessons so that I have material to use in the final essay.

Sentence structure and article errors: Duplicate words 'from from' and 'to to' should be removed. 'a material' is incorrect; 'material' is uncountable so omit the article. Add 'use' to clarify purpose.

× I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in the primary school in the computer science class.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school in computer science class.

Past tense is fine but articles are incorrect: 'the primary school' -> 'primary school' (general). 'the computer science class' -> 'computer science class' is more natural.

× At that class, people teach every people to type on the keyboard because the teacher said, uh, using computer means you can start more opportunities in the future.

✓ In that class, the teacher taught everyone to type on the keyboard because he said that using computers would open more opportunities in the future.

Pronoun and verb tense errors: 'people teach every people' is wrong; use 'the teacher taught everyone'. Backshift tense: past 'said' should be followed by 'would open' not 'means you can start'. Also 'using computer' -> 'using computers'.

× So that's why we learn computer and learn type on the keyboard.

✓ So that's why we learned about computers and how to type on the keyboard.

Sentence structure and verb tense: Maintain past tense 'learned'. Use 'learned about computers' and 'how to type' for clarity.

× I think there are so many ways to improve our typing.

✓ I think there are many ways to improve your typing.

Pronoun use: Context is the speaker giving personal methods; 'our' is acceptable but inconsistent with later 'for me'. Better to use 'your' when advising the listener, or 'my' for personal methods. Here 'your' fits instruction style; if speaker refers to themselves use 'my'.

× As for me, I usually try to play some, uh, casual games.

✓ For me, I usually try playing casual games.

Preposition/verb form: 'try to play' is acceptable but 'try playing' is more natural for experimenting. Remove filler comma and 'uh'.

× For example, they ask you to type which word like, uh, in a limited time, and it's like a really funny game.

✓ For example, they ask you to type words within a limited time, and it's a really fun game.

Verb+ing and word choice: 'which word like' is ungrammatical; use 'to type words within a limited time'. 'Funny' in this context should be 'fun'. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'it's like'.

× They can, you can beat yourself and then make a record for yourself.

✓ You can beat your own score and then set a record for yourself.

Pronoun and phrasing: Combine clauses and use 'your own score' instead of 'beat yourself'. 'Make a record' -> 'set a record' is idiomatic.