打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct: start with a clear preference, avoid hedging and unnecessary uncertainty, and give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "however"). Keep it within 1–3 sentences and use varied vocabulary (prefer, comfortable, convenient, legible).

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, when I type notes on my phone I can quickly correct mistakes and organize them into folders.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific reason and a brief example. Remove filler words (actually, umm) and correct small grammar ("prefer typing" not "prefer to typing"). Use one linking word like "because" or "so".

範例: I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I prefer typing on my phone. It's convenient and portable, so I can reply to messages and take notes wherever I am.

建議: Give a clear time reference and combine the sentences into a smooth, natural reply. Use correct phrasing ("about ten years ago" not "before 10 years") and include a short detail about how you learned (self-taught, from family, practice).

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard about ten years ago when I bought my first smartphone, and I taught myself by practising daily and using messaging apps.

建議: Provide a concise, grammatically correct explanation with a topic sentence and supporting detail. Use correct verbs ("I train by writing articles"), add linking words ("for example", "also"), and specific practice frequency to show commitment (e.g., "daily", "a few times a week").

範例: I improve my typing by writing short articles and messages regularly; for example, I write one article every week and practise typing for 20 minutes each day to increase speed and accuracy.

× Actually I don't know the difference between typing and handwriting, but I think you mean typing online or by using electronic device and handwriting by using pencil or pen. Umm.

✓ Actually I don't know the difference between typing and handwriting, but I think you mean typing online or using an electronic device and handwriting with a pencil or pen. Umm.

The original sentence misuses articles and prepositions with nouns: 'electronic device' needs an article 'an', and 'by using' is wordy; use 'using'. Also 'handwriting by using pencil or pen' should be 'handwriting with a pencil or pen' because 'with' correctly indicates the instrument. Suggestion: use 'an electronic device' and 'with a pencil or pen' for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Actually, I don't use the desktop or laptop and the keyboard because I prefer to typing on my phone. Umm, it's very easy and I carry my phone wherever I go, so it's very convenient.

✓ Actually, I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard because I prefer typing on my phone. Umm, it's very easy and I carry my phone wherever I go, so it's very convenient.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'desktop or laptop' and 'the keyboard'; 'prefer to typing' is incorrect verb form: after 'prefer' use the gerund 'typing' or the infinitive 'to type' (prefer typing / prefer to type). Correction uses 'a desktop or laptop keyboard' and 'prefer typing'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles and use correct verb form after 'prefer'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I improve my typing by. A train on writing articles and I do that in consistently way.

✓ I improve my typing by training in writing articles, and I do that consistently.

Multiple issues: 'A train on writing articles' is incorrect word choice and structure; use the gerund 'training' to show the method ('by training in writing articles'). 'In consistently way' mixes adverb and noun incorrectly; use the adverb 'consistently' or the phrase 'in a consistent way'. Also remove the stray period after 'by.' Suggestion: use 'by training' plus 'consistently' for natural expression. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I learned how to tap on keyboard when I bought my smartphone. That was before 10 years.

✓ I learned how to tap on the keyboard when I bought my smartphone. That was ten years ago.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'keyboard'; 'before 10 years' is not correct English for expressing time elapsed—use 'ten years ago'. Also write numbers as words in formal speech; use 'ten'. Suggestion: include articles where needed and use '...years ago' to indicate past time. Grammar problem type ID: 11