打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 반복이 있습니다. 핵심 문장을 먼저 말하고 그 이유를 간단히 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 반복을 피하고 동사 시제와 표현을 정확히 사용하세요. 예: 주제문 → 이유 → 간단한 추가 설명 순으로 2~3문장으로 말하세요. 또한 'prepare handwriting' 같은 어색한 표현 대신 'I prefer handwriting'를 사용하세요.

範例: I prefer handwriting because my typing speed is quite slow. I find I can write notes more quickly and clearly by hand, especially during exams.

建議: 문장이 장황하고 중복됩니다. 한 번만 명확히 말하고 이유를 구체적으로 제시하세요. 관사와 복수/단수, 어순 오류를 고치세요('a graduate student', 'a theory paper' 보다는 'research papers' 등). 연결 표현(one reason, so that 등)을 자연스럽게 쓰세요.

範例: Yes, I use a desktop keyboard every day because I'm a graduate student and I often write research papers. The full-size desktop keyboard is more comfortable for long typing sessions.

建議: 시제와 표현 사용에 오류가 있습니다. 'when I was eight' 또는 'eight years ago' 중 하나만 쓰고, 동사의 과거형을 정확히 사용하세요. 또한 세부 정보를 하나 더 추가해 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예: 'I learned to type when I was eight, at school, and my teacher also showed me basic computer skills.'

範例: I learned to type when I was eight at primary school. My teacher showed us the basics of typing and also taught us how to use a computer.

建議: 의미 전달이 불명확하고 많은 문법/단어 선택 오류가 있습니다. 먼저 방법을 간단히 말한 뒤 구체적인 방법(프로그램 이름, 연습 빈도 등)을 제공하세요. 불분명한 단어('kiss','Uncomfortable')를 정정하고 정확한 표현을 사용하세요. 예: 'I practice typing every day using a typing program designed for Korean learners.'

範例: I practice typing every day using a typing tutor program designed for Korean users. I usually spend 20–30 minutes on exercises that focus on accuracy first, then speed.

× I prepare handwriting because my typing speed is very slow, but my handwriting speed is good, so I prepare handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because my typing speed is very slow, but my handwriting is neat, so I prefer handwriting.

The student used 'I prepare handwriting' which is incorrect collocation and article use. 'Prefer handwriting' is the correct verb phrase; 'handwriting' does not need an article here. Also 'handwriting speed is good' is better expressed as 'handwriting is neat' or 'my handwriting is good' to mean quality. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for choice and omit unnecessary articles.

× Yes, I use desktop keyboard every day because I am graduate student so I need to write theory paper. So I use desktop keyboard every day.

✓ Yes, I use a desktop keyboard every day because I am a graduate student and I need to write theory papers. So I use a desktop keyboard every day.

Missing articles cause incorrect noun phrases: 'desktop keyboard' needs the indefinite article 'a'. 'I am graduate student' requires 'a graduate student'. 'theory paper' should be plural 'theory papers' if referring generally. Also use 'and' instead of 'so' to combine clauses; repetition of the final sentence is unnecessary but preserved. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and match singular/plural nouns to meaning.

× I learned about that when I was eight years ago.

✓ I learned that when I was eight years old.

The phrase 'when I was eight years ago' mixes 'when' time clause with 'ago'; use either 'when I was eight' or 'eight years ago'. Also include 'old' after an age. Suggestion: say 'when I was eight years old' or 'about eight years ago'.

× My teacher taught me that and she teach also how to use computer.

✓ My teacher taught me that and she also taught me how to use a computer.

Tense inconsistency and third person singular form: 'she teach' should be past tense 'she taught'. Also include object 'me' after 'taught' and the article 'a' before 'computer'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use correct verb forms and articles.

× For my improve typing skill, I. I kiss every day.

✓ To improve my typing skills, I practice every day.

Fragment and wrong word choice: 'For my improve typing skill' is ungrammatical; use 'To improve my typing skills'. 'I. I kiss every day' is likely a typo: 'kiss' should be 'practice'. Also use plural 'skills'. Suggestion: use infinitive phrase to state purpose and the verb 'practice'.

× Usually I use computer program called Uncomfortable is practice program for Korean.

✓ Usually I use a computer program called 'Uncomfortable' which is a practice program for Korean.

Missing articles and incorrect clause structure: 'use computer program' needs 'a computer program'. The relative clause should be 'which is a practice program for Korean'. Also program title should be marked; keep consistent noun phrases. Suggestion: include articles and connect noun with its description using 'which is' or 'that is'.