打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然、语法正确并去掉多余重复。开头先直接给出观点，然后用一两句简洁理由支持，注意时态和词序，例如“it won't makes your hand feel. Tired”应改为“it doesn't make your hand tired”。避免使用过多停顿和重复词语。

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and less tiring for my hands. For example, when I take notes in lectures I can keep up with the speaker by typing.

建議: 回答要直接且具体，说明是使用台式机还是笔记本并提供简单原因或情境。避免含糊不清或词汇错误（如“dashboard”“tie my words”）。保持句子简短并使用连接词使表达连贯。

範例: I usually type on my laptop every day because it's portable and convenient for studying. For example, I take my laptop to the library to write essays and do research.

建議: 回答结构可以更清晰：先给出时间点，再补充细节。注意动词时态和单复数（we have → we had；try to type the word → typed words）。补充具体活动或记忆可以增加说服力。

範例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had computer classes where we practised typing both Chinese and English words, and sometimes we played educational typing games to improve speed.

建議: 回答要具体说明方法并使用连贯的逻辑连接词。避免重复和语法错误（例如“when have a lot of times of typing”）。可以给出具体练习方式、频率或使用的软件来提高可信度。

範例: I improve my typing by practising for at least 20 minutes every day, using online typing tutors to learn proper finger placement and doing timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing more and I think typing is faster than handwriting and it won't makes your hand feel. Tired.

✓ I prefer typing and I think typing is faster than handwriting and it won't make your hand feel tired.

句子中“prefer typing more”中“more”多余，使用“prefer typing”更自然；“won't makes”是动词形式错误，情态动词后应接动词原形“make”；“feel. Tired.”断句不当，应合并为“feel tired”。建议：去掉多余副词，情态动词后用动词原形，注意句子连贯。

× Yes, I type on the dashboard or a network keyboard area. I always tie my, uh, words in my thinking of today's in life theory to write on the dashboard, desktop and letter.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard. I always type my words from my thoughts about today's life on the desktop or on paper.

原句中“on the dashboard”用词错误，应为“on a desktop”；“network keyboard area”不自然，应改为“laptop keyboard”或“keyboard”；另外“tie my words in my thinking of today's in life theory to write”语序和介词使用混乱，需改为“type my words from my thoughts about today's life”。建议：使用正确的名词（desktop, laptop），简化表达，注意介词搭配（type on a keyboard / type on paper）。

× I learned how to type on my keyboard when I was in the primary school. We have the computer classes and we try to type the word in Chinese and English to like playing games in the computer.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school. We had computer classes and we tried to type words in Chinese and English and play games on the computer.

原句时态不一致：第一句使用过去时“learned”正确，但后句用现在时“have / try”应与过去时间点一致，应改为“had / tried”。另外“in the primary school”中“in”可省或改为“at”，并且“type the word”应为“type words”，“playing games in the computer”应改为“play games on the computer”。建议：保持叙述的时态一致，常用搭配为“play games on the computer”。

× I improve my typing with more and more times in typing because I think, uh, when have a lot of times of typing can help you to, uh, remember the pattern of each.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing more and more because I think that having a lot of practice helps you remember each pattern.

原句中时态和表达不自然：“I improve my typing with more and more times in typing”应使用习惯表达“improve...by practicing more”；“when have a lot of times of typing can help you”缺主语和连接词，应为“that having a lot of practice helps you”；“remember the pattern of each”不完整，改为“remember each pattern”。建议：用常见搭配“improve by practicing / have a lot of practice / helps you...”并补全主语和连词。