打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., tense and article use).

範例: I prefer handwriting. For example, when I write by hand I feel more connected to my thoughts, and my notes often look more personal and memorable. Therefore, I usually handwrite personal letters and journal entries rather than type them.

建議: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Mention frequency and context, using linking words to connect ideas. Keep it to one or two sentences for clarity.

範例: I mainly use a desktop keyboard at work because I work at the front desk, so I type on it every day. At home I sometimes use my laptop for personal tasks and emails.

建議: Be specific about timing and improve grammar and coherence. Use past tense consistently and give one clear detail about what you learned or how often you practiced.

範例: I learned to type in primary school during our weekly computer classes. We went to the computer lab and practiced typing exercises and basic programs, which helped me build my skills over a few months.

建議: Answer directly and describe current or past methods for improvement. Use linking words and correct tense; mention specific activities or resources you used to practice.

範例: I improved my typing mainly by practicing on the desktop my dad bought me: I chatted with friends and wrote school reports regularly. Later, I used online typing exercises and timed drills to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Honestly, I would say I would prefer handwriting because it kept the essence of our true feelings rather than the words we use on computer or laptop.

✓ Honestly, I would say I prefer handwriting because it keeps the essence of our true feelings better than the words we use on a computer or laptop.

The original mixes conditional/past wording with present preference. Use present simple 'prefer' and 'keeps' for habitual truths. Also use article 'a' before computer or laptop and add 'better' for clear comparison. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (present simple) for general preferences and general truths.

× I would really prefer handwriting.

✓ I really prefer handwriting.

This sentence uses unnecessary conditional 'would' when stating a straightforward personal preference. Use present simple 'prefer' for habitual or general preferences. Suggestion: remove 'would' to make the statement direct and grammatically consistent.

× So as I working on front desk so I had to use desktop more often than laptop and at home I would use laptop.

✓ Because I work at the front desk, I have to use a desktop more often than a laptop, and at home I use a laptop.

Problems: missing auxiliary 'am' in 'I am working' and inconsistent tenses. Use present simple 'work' or present continuous with correct auxiliary. Use 'have to' for habitual obligation and include articles 'a' before desktop/laptop. Also avoid repeating 'so'. Suggestion: restructure sentence for clarity and correct auxiliaries and articles.

× At school we had a computer class, so we actually go to the computer lab for lessons.

✓ At school we had a computer class, so we actually went to the computer lab for lessons.

The first clause is past tense 'had', so the second clause should match past tense: 'went' not 'go'. Maintain consistent tense within the same time frame. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same past tense when describing past events.

× We learn on the books to gain practical knowledge.

✓ We learned from the books to gain practical knowledge.

Use 'learned' to match past tense, and the correct preposition is 'from' (learn from books) not 'on'. Also change 'learn' to 'learned' for tense consistency. Suggestion: use 'learned from the books' when describing past study methods.

× So after that my dad bought me a desktop where I used to chat with my friends sometimes, do my research.

✓ So after that my dad bought me a desktop where I would sometimes chat with my friends and do my research.

Original mixes 'used to' and present-like infinitives. Use 'would sometimes' for habitual past actions or 'used to' consistently. Here 'would sometimes chat' and 'do' should be parallel: 'would sometimes chat ... and do my research' or 'used to chat ... and do my research'. Suggestion: keep parallel structure and consistent past habitual form.

× So that's how I learned my typing skills I would say.

✓ So that's how I learned my typing skills, I would say.

Run-on: missing comma before the parenthetical 'I would say'. Also 'learned my typing skills' is acceptable; 'learned to type' is an alternative. Suggestion: add comma or rephrase: 'So that's how I learned to type, I would say.'