打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and coherent: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words and vague phrases like "I think" repeated and unclear comments such as "Later." Use specific vocabulary (e.g., "personal touch", "impersonal") and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer handwriting because it conveys a personal touch and emotion that typing often lacks. However, typing is faster and more convenient for formal documents, so I use it when speed and editing are important.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence and use linking words for contrast. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., "which helps keep the booking system easy and convenient"). Be specific about frequency or examples of tasks to strengthen your answer.

範例: I type on a desktop more often because I work at the front desk and use the booking system daily, which is more convenient on a desktop. At home, I prefer my laptop for personal tasks like emailing and browsing.

建議: Give a clear time reference and avoid fillers. Use one or two supporting details about how you learned (e.g., lessons, practice) and link them logically. Correct collocations ("at a very young age", "computer lab classes").

範例: I learned to type at a very young age when my school offered regular computer lab classes. Through those lessons and daily practice on the school computers, I developed a solid typing foundation.

建議: The answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a complete topic sentence explaining the methods you use to improve typing (practice, online exercises, typing software, daily use), then add one supporting detail and an example. Keep it concise and coherent.

範例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on typing websites and using typing software that tracks my speed and accuracy. For example, I spend 15 minutes each day on an online typing course and focus on reducing errors by practicing troublesome letter combinations.

× Honestly I would say I would prefer handwriting because I think it holds the personal emotions of the person who has written.

✓ Honestly, I would prefer handwriting because I think it holds the personal emotions of the person who wrote it.

The sentence uses an awkward relative clause 'who has written.' Using simple past 'wrote' or adding 'it' clarifies the object. Also remove the extra 'I would say' repetition and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'wrote' to match the simple past reference and include the pronoun 'it' to refer to the written piece.

× Later. Maybe say you can say typing.

✓ Later, maybe you could say typing.

The original contains sentence fragments and repetitive phrasing 'say you can say.' Combine into one sentence and use 'could' to suggest possibility. Also use a comma instead of a period to connect the thought.

× I think typing does feel like a AI.

✓ I think typing does feel like AI.

The article 'a' before 'AI' is unnecessary because 'AI' (artificial intelligence) is an uncountable concept here. Remove 'a' for correct usage. Also consider rephrasing to 'feels impersonal, like AI' for clarity.

× Uh, for that I would say I type on a desktop more often because I work at the front desk, uh, which helps keeping it booking system easy and convenient.

✓ Uh, I type on a desktop more often because I work at the front desk, which helps keep the booking system easy and convenient.

Two issues: 'helps keeping' is incorrect verb form; after 'helps' use the base form 'keep' (or 'to keep'). Also 'it booking system' is incorrect — remove 'it' and use 'the booking system' with the definite article. These changes fix verb form and article use.

× But at home I would prefer using laptop to do my personal tasks.

✓ But at home I would prefer using a laptop to do my personal tasks.

Countable singular noun 'laptop' requires the indefinite article 'a.' Add 'a' to make the noun grammatically correct. You could also say 'prefer to use a laptop.'

× I would say I learned on very quite young age because our school had a computer class in a computer lab for a practical knowledge of a computer, I guess I think, uh, so I got a pretty good knowledge on that.

✓ I would say I learned at a very young age because our school had a computer class in a computer lab for practical computer skills, so I gained pretty good knowledge of that.

Multiple problems: use preposition 'at' with 'a young age.' 'Very quite' is redundant; choose 'very' or 'quite.' 'A practical knowledge of a computer' is awkward; use 'practical computer skills.' 'I guess I think' is redundant — remove filler. Use past tense 'gained' instead of 'got' and 'knowledge of' rather than 'knowledge on.' These changes correct prepositions, redundancy, word choice, and tense consistency.

× Typing My dad bought me a desktop computer when I was.

✓ My dad bought me a desktop computer when I was young, which helped me practice typing.

The original is a fragment lacking completion after 'when I was.' Remove the stray 'Typing' at the start and complete the time clause with 'young.' Add a main clause describing how that purchase affected typing to answer the examiner's question. This fixes sentence fragment and clarifies meaning.