打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ปรับความชัดเจนของประโยคหลักและลดคำฟุ่มเฟือย ใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ tense และคำเชื่อมให้เหมาะสม รวมถึงคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง (something, try → write, people cannot read). ฝึกพูดให้สั้นไม่เกิน 3–4 ประโยค โดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลสั้น ๆ และตัวอย่างถ้าจำเป็น

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and my handwriting is hard to read. For example, when I write quickly my letters become messy, so typing helps me produce clear documents.

建議: ตอบตรงคำถามโดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อว่าใช้เครื่องไหนเป็นหลัก และอธิบายเหตุผลโดยใช้คำศัพท์และสำนวนที่ถูกต้อง (driving→typing, open→use). หลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำและคำไม่ชัด เช่น "not good" ควรกล่าวว่า "No, I usually..." และเชื่อมประโยคด้วย because/so/therefore

範例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I usually type on my phone because I travel a lot, so it is more convenient to use my mobile device for quick messages and notes.

建議: ใช้รูปแบบ tense ให้ถูกต้องและพูดให้ชัดเจน เริ่มด้วยประโยคตรง ๆ เช่น "I learned to type..." แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดเวลาอย่างชัดเจน (secondary school) และหลีกเลี่ยงเสียงรบกวนหรือคำที่ไม่จำเป็น (UMM, lead)

範例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in secondary school. I practiced with online typing lessons and school assignments, so I gradually became faster.

建議: ตอบให้เป็นระบบ: เริ่มด้วยวิธีหลักที่ใช้ปรับปรุง (practice, courses, games), ตามด้วยตัวอย่างเฉพาะและผลลัพธ์ ใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง (driving→typing, document word→Word document) และเชื่อมประโยคด้วย linking words เช่น when, so, therefore

範例: I improve my typing by practicing whenever I have homework that requires a Word document. For example, I type essays and assignments regularly, which helps me increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing more than handwriting because sometime that is quite fast to try thing and uh my my writing is not look good anymore.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because sometimes it is much faster, and my handwriting does not look good anymore.

The sentence has several issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency), 'prefer X more than Y' is awkward when comparing preferences — use 'prefer X to Y', 'that is quite fast to try thing' is unclear and ungrammatical — corrected to 'it is much faster', and 'my my writing is not look good anymore' should be 'my handwriting does not look good anymore' (use present simple and correct noun form). Suggestion: use correct adverbs, compare with 'prefer A to B', and use subject + auxiliary + base verb for negative present simple.

× Sometime the people cannot lead is the clear clearly what I write.

✓ Sometimes people cannot clearly read what I write.

Errors: 'Sometime' -> 'Sometimes'; 'the people' is unnecessary article usage, better 'people'; 'cannot lead is the clear clearly' is ungrammatical — intended meaning is 'cannot clearly read' (adverb placement: 'clearly' before verb); 'what I write' is correct. Suggestion: place adverb before main verb or after auxiliary, and avoid unnecessary articles.

× Actually not good. I like to driving on my phone and working on my phone, mostly because I like to travel everywhere.

✓ Actually, I don't use a desktop or laptop much. I like to type and work on my phone because I travel a lot.

'Actually not good' is a fragment lacking a subject and verb; use a full sentence. 'I like to driving' should be 'I like driving' or 'I like to type' (gerund vs infinitive choice) and 'on my phone' repeated is redundant. 'mostly because I like to travel everywhere' -> 'because I travel a lot' is more natural. Suggestion: use complete sentences, correct verb forms (gerund after 'like' or infinitive), and avoid repetition.

× It's quite convenient for me to open the laptop or desktop computer like that.

✓ It's quite convenient for me to use a laptop or desktop computer when needed.

The original is understandable but 'to open the laptop or desktop computer like that' is informal and awkward. Use 'to use' and specify context 'when needed'. No major tense error but clarity and collocation improved. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs ('use' rather than 'open') and clearer phrases.

× I have been learning UMM driving the lead keyboard when I was young, maybe when I study in the secondary school.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was young, maybe when I was in secondary school.

Mixing present perfect continuous ('I have been learning') with a past time marker ('when I was young') is incorrect; use simple past 'I learned'. 'UMM driving the lead keyboard' is garbled — intended 'typing on the keyboard'. 'when I study' should be past 'when I was studying' or 'when I was in'. Suggestion: match tense to time expression (use past tense for past events) and use correct verbs ('learned to type').

× I improve my driving when I have to do my homework from my school that the teacher like to give the homework that have to send document that have to work from the document word.

✓ I improved my typing when I had to do homework for school because the teacher used to give assignments that had to be submitted as Word documents.

Major problems: 'I improve my driving' likely means 'I improved my typing' (word choice). Tense should match past context if referring to past habit: 'improved' or 'I improve' with present habitual meaning; original mixes tenses. 'that the teacher like to give the homework' should be 'that the teacher used to give' or 'that the teacher gave', and 'have to send document that have to work from the document word' should be 'had to submit Word documents'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (gerund vs base), match tense to context, and use standard collocations ('submit Word documents').