打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は簡潔ですが不自然さと説明不足があります。まず冒頭で明確なトピック文を作り、沈黙や不要なフィラー（uh）を避けましょう。また“can't write by hand”は誇張に聞こえるため、具体的な理由（速さ、読みやすさなど）を付け加えてください。接続詞を使って理由と結果をつなげると流暢に聞こえます。例：’I prefer typing because it’s faster and neater, so I can work more efficiently.’

範例: I prefer typing because it’s faster and neater than handwriting, so I can finish tasks more quickly and my notes are easier to read.

建議: 意思は伝わりますが文法と語順が不自然です。まず直接的に答え（Yes/No）を述べ、その後に理由を接続詞（because/so）で続けてください。また“use smartphone for work”は具体的に何をするか（emails, messaging, apps）を加えると説得力が増します。

範例: No, I don’t use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I usually do most of my work on my smartphone, like checking emails and messaging clients.

建議: 良い流れですが時制の不一致や語順の誤りが見られます。過去の出来事なので過去形を統一して使い、因果関係は接続詞（so/therefore）で自然に結びましょう。練習方法（computer games）を具体的に説明すると、内容が豊かになります。

範例: I learned to type when I was 22 because I needed to improve my typing speed for work. I practised a lot by playing fast-paced computer games, which helped me become quicker and more accurate.

建議: この答えは意味が不明瞭で構造が整っていません。質問には現在の練習方法を述べる必要があります。まず直接に答えを述べ、次に具体的な方法（daily practice, typing tests, lessons, games, accuracy drills）と頻度や効果を説明してください。接続語で理由と結果をつなぐと良いです。

範例: I improve my typing by practising for 20 minutes every day with online typing tests and accuracy drills. I also play typing-based games to build speed, which has steadily raised my game scores and reduced my errors.

× I like, uh, typing because. I can't write by hand.

✓ I like typing because I can't write neatly by hand.

The original contains a sentence fragment 'because.' followed by a separate clause; combine them into one sentence. Also 'write by hand' is acceptable but 'write neatly by hand' clarifies likely meaning; ensure the sentence has a subject and verb and the subordinating conjunction 'because' attaches to the main clause.

× I don't. Type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day, because I usually use smartphone for work so I don't need.

✓ I don't type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I usually use a smartphone for work, so I don't need to.

The original has a sentence fragment 'I don't.' and misplaced periods; combine into one sentence. Add the article 'a' before 'smartphone.' Place commas appropriately and keep verb forms consistent. Ensure clauses connect logically: 'because' explains why and 'so' indicates result.

× When I was 22, I need to improve my typing speed for work, so I learned to type.

✓ When I was 22, I needed to improve my typing speed for work, so I learned to type.

The time clause 'When I was 22' places the action in the past, so the verb should be past tense 'needed' rather than present 'need.' Maintain consistent past tense for past events.

× I practiced a lot of by playing computer games which help me become faster and more accurate.

✓ I practiced a lot by playing computer games, which helped me become faster and more accurate.

Use past tense 'helped' to match 'practiced' in the past. Remove the extra 'of' after 'a lot.' Add a comma before the non-restrictive 'which' clause. Ensure tense consistency across the sentence.

× What type and more type my typing score of a game improve?

✓ What types of practice improved my typing score in that game?

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Reword to a clear question: use 'what types of practice' and 'improved' for past tense. Use 'typing score in that game' for natural noun phrase order. Ensure proper word order for questions and subject-verb agreement.