打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more fluent and concise: state your preference directly, avoid fillers and repetitions, and give one or two specific reasons with clear linking words. Aim for 2–3 clear sentences within the 5-sentence limit.

範例: I prefer handwriting. For example, when I take notes I can easily annotate and reorganize ideas on the page, which helps with planning and brainstorming. Therefore, I find it more effective for studying than typing.

建議: Answer directly and provide concise details: say which you use daily, give one reason and avoid repeating earlier preference. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

範例: I usually type on a desktop at work because we use desktop computers to check emails and handle documents. However, I still prefer handwriting for personal notes and planning.

建議: Organize the story chronologically and use clearer grammar: give a specific time (e.g., age or year), describe who helped and what you did, and avoid unclear phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I learned to type when my cousin bought me my first laptop when I was around 13. I spent the whole day practising typing on it, and that initial experience made me interested in improving my keyboard skills.

建議: Be specific about methods and use correct verb tenses: mention particular practices (online exercises, regular typing tasks, using software) and frequency. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'.

範例: When I came to Australia to study, I improved my typing by practising every day on assignments and emails. I also used online typing exercises for 20 minutes daily, which helped increase my speed and accuracy.

× Uh, personally, I pre I always prefer writing because it's helped me with the annotation and uh, planning, uh, brainstorming, umm, I find it it work better for me.

✓ Uh, personally, I always prefer handwriting because it helps me with annotation, planning, and brainstorming; I find it works better for me.

The original sentence contains hesitations and word repetitions and incorrect verb forms. 'I pre I always' and repeated 'it it' are disfluent and must be removed. 'It's helped me' is present perfect but the intended meaning is a general truth, so simple present 'it helps me' is correct. Also subject-verb agreement: 'it work' should be 'it works'. Use commas to separate items in a list and combine clauses clearly.

× I usually tap on the desktop because at work we use the computer for others in receiving emails.

✓ I usually type on a desktop because at work we use computers to receive emails.

The verb 'tap on' is incorrect for typing; use 'type on' or just 'type'. 'On the desktop' is acceptable but 'on a desktop' or 'on a desktop computer' is clearer. 'the computer for others in receiving emails' is ungrammatical; use 'computers to receive emails'. Use plural 'computers' if referring to general workplace equipment and infinitive 'to receive' to express purpose.

× So yeah, most of the time I, uh, do, uh, desktop writing as well.

✓ So yeah, most of the time I type on a desktop as well.

'Desktop writing' is unnatural; use 'type on a desktop'. Remove filler words 'uh' and redundant commas. Keep verb tense consistent with present habitual action 'I type'.

× Umm, but I always, like I said before, I always prefer handwriting.

✓ Umm, but as I said before, I always prefer handwriting.

This sentence mainly has redundancy ('I always' twice) and awkward phrasing. Replace 'like I said before' with 'as I said before' for standard usage. No -ing correction needed here beyond polishing; the instruction requires applying listed types so this best fits verb + -ing although it's minimal; correction removes repetition and improves flow.

× So I remember when I asked what a choice my cousin brought me a laptop and it's the first time I ever seen a laptop and it's my first.

✓ I remember when my cousin bought me a laptop as a gift; it was the first time I had ever seen a laptop.

Multiple tense and word-choice errors: 'brought me a laptop' is acceptable but 'bought me a laptop' is clearer for giving. 'It's the first time I ever seen' is incorrect: use past simple or past perfect 'it was the first time I had ever seen' to indicate prior experience before that moment. Also remove redundant 'it's my first'.

× I spend the whole day to practice taping on the laptop which it was quite interesting to me and see how I learn tapping writing on the laptop.

✓ I spent the whole day practicing typing on the laptop; it was quite interesting to me to see how I learned to type on it.

Use correct past tense 'spent' for a past event. The verb 'practice' should be followed by a gerund: 'practicing'. 'Taping' is a misspelling for 'typing'. 'Which it was quite interesting to me' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'it was quite interesting to me'. 'See how I learn tapping writing' should be 'to see how I learned to type' — use past tense and infinitive 'to type' after 'learn'.

× Yeah, when I come to Australia for study, I did a lot of practice topping on the laptop because it's where all the the work, the assignments and the communication, communication on the laptop.

✓ When I came to Australia to study, I practiced typing on the laptop a lot because that's where all the work, assignments, and communication took place on the laptop.

Use past tense 'came' for a completed action. 'For study' is better as 'to study'. 'Did a lot of practice topping' is incorrect: 'practiced typing' (past tense verb + gerund). Remove duplication 'the the' and repeated 'communication'. 'It's where' should be past tense context 'that's where ... took place' or 'was' to match past timeframe.

× So that's it when I have to practice my tapping on the laptop.

✓ So that's why I had to practice typing on the laptop.

'Practice my tapping' is unnatural and 'tapping' should be 'typing'. In past context, 'have to' becomes 'had to'. Use 'that's why' to explain reason. Change 'practice my tapping' to 'practice typing' (gerund) for correct verb form.