打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は短く直接的ですが、不自然な表現や意味の取り違えがあります。まず「I'm not good at typing because my job is a doctor so I don't offer you the PC.」は文法的に誤りで意味が不明瞭です。改善点：1) トピック文を明確にして（I prefer handwriting.）、2) 理由を簡潔に具体的に述べる（仕事で手書きのメモが多い、またはタイピングする機会が少ない等）、3) 冗長な部分や意味の通らないフレーズを避ける。つなぎ言葉（because, so, therefore）を適切に使い、文は最大5文以内にまとめる。

範例: I prefer handwriting because my job as a doctor requires me to write quick notes and prescriptions by hand. Therefore, I have fewer opportunities to practice typing and feel less confident using a keyboard.

建議: 回答は短いですが語法と語彙選択に問題があります。「inscription of protest」や「something medical thing」は不自然で意味が伝わりません。改善点：1) 明確な名詞を使う（medical records, patient notes, reports など）、2) 理由や頻度を具体的に述べる（how often, what kind of documents）、3) つなぎ語を使って文を流暢にする。

範例: Yes, I type on a desktop every day. I mainly use it to type patient records and medical reports, as well as emails to colleagues, so I rely on the desktop for most of my administrative tasks.

建議: この回答は文法と語順の混乱が大きく、伝えたい時制や時期が不明確です。改善点：1) 明確に時を示す表現を使う（When I was in high school / In high school）、2) シンプルな過去形で学んだことを述べる、3) 補足として流行してきた背景を短く付け加える場合は因果関係を示す接続詞を使う。

範例: I learned to type when I was in high school. At that time, personal computers were becoming more common, so typing classes were part of the curriculum.

建議: 回答は短く、語彙と文法の誤り（raining → practising/practice）があります。また、意図が疑問形になっており話し手の意思が不明瞭です。改善点：1) 正しい動詞を使う（practice, use typing software, take lessons）、2) 具体的な方法や頻度を述べる（every day for 15 minutes, using online exercisesなど）、3) 接続詞で理由を付け加える。

範例: I improve my typing by practicing every day for about 15 minutes, using online typing exercises and focusing on accuracy rather than speed. This routine has helped me reduce errors and build confidence.

× I'm not good at typing because my job is a doctor so I don't offer you the PC.

✓ I'm not good at typing because my job is being a doctor, so I don't offer you my PC.

The sentence has article and noun phrase issues: 'my job is a doctor' is unnatural; use 'my job is being a doctor' or 'I am a doctor'. 'the PC' is odd when referring to a personal computer; use 'my PC'. Also add a comma before the second clause. Suggestion: say 'I'm not good at typing because I am a doctor, so I don't offer you my PC.' In Japanese: 'この文は不自然な名詞句と冠詞の使い方が含まれています。「my job is a doctor」は自然ではなく「I am a doctor」や「my job is being a doctor」の方が適切です。また「the PC」は個人所有を示す場合不適切なので「my PC」にします。'

× Yes I do. I type on a desktop. I usually use the desktop writing the inscription of protest or something medical thing.

✓ Yes, I do. I type on a desktop. I usually use the desktop to write medical notes or inscriptions for protests.

Errors include incorrect verb form after 'use' and awkward noun phrases. After 'use' we need 'to' + base verb ('to write') or 'for writing'. 'the inscription of protest' is awkward; use 'inscriptions for protests' or 'protest inscriptions'. 'something medical thing' is ungrammatical; use 'medical notes' or 'medical documents'. Suggestion: 'I usually use the desktop to write medical notes or protest inscriptions.' In Japanese: '「use」の後には動詞の原形を導く不定詞や動名詞が必要です（例: "to write" または "for writing"）。また "the inscription of protest" や "something medical thing" は不自然な表現なので、"protest inscriptions" や "medical notes" など具体的な名詞に置き換えてください。'

× Around it when I was in high school it will PO it getting it was very getting popular to use to all my computer.

✓ It was around when I was in high school that typing became popular and many people started using computers.

Original has multiple tense and structure errors. Use past tense 'became' and 'started' for past events. Avoid extraneous words like 'it', 'PO', and repeated 'getting'. Use cleft sentence 'It was ... that ...' or simple past statement. Suggestion: 'When I was in high school, typing became popular and many people began using computers.' In Japanese: '元の文は時制と語順の誤りが多く含まれています。過去の出来事なので過去形（became, started/began）を使い、余分な語（it, PO, getting）を取り除いて自然な語順に直してください。'

× Just raining so I should do it every day?

✓ Just practicing, so I should do it every day.

The student used 'raining' incorrectly; likely intended 'practicing' or 'training'. After 'just' a gerund can work ('just practicing'), and the question mark is unnecessary if statement. Suggestion: 'I just practice, so I should do it every day.' or 'I should practice every day.' In Japanese: '"raining" は文脈に合わない単語です。おそらく "practicing" または "training" が意図です。"Just practicing" のように動名詞を用いるか、"I should practice every day." と平叙文にしてください。'