打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Correct small grammar errors (e.g., “depends on,” avoid repetition like “for for,” and choose one clear preference or explain the situations more smoothly). Keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

範例: I prefer typing for most work-related tasks because it’s faster and easier to edit. However, I like handwriting for personal things, such as my diary, because it feels more personal and helps me reflect.

建議: Remove fillers (umm, uh) and avoid repeating phrases. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain past and present situation using linking words (e.g., 'before' or 'now'). Add one specific reason why you prefer the laptop. Keep responses fluent and within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I type on my laptop every day now because I don't own a desktop. Previously, at my office I used a desktop, but now the laptop is more convenient and portable for my work.

建議: Give a clear time frame in the topic sentence (e.g., 'when I was a child') and then add a brief, specific supporting detail. Avoid trailing off and fix grammar (e.g., 'I was used to playing' or 'my brother used it a lot'). Keep to 2–3 sentences and finish your thought.

範例: I learned to type when I was a child because we had a desktop at home. I remember learning gradually while watching my brother use the computer a lot, which made it fun and familiar.

建議: State the method clearly in the topic sentence (e.g., 'I improved mostly through practice'), then give a specific example with correct tense and linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'improved my typing,' 'when I started working'). Limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

範例: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice. When I started working at a university in an administrative team, I typed every day, which greatly increased my speed and accuracy.

× I think that depends of the situation.

✓ I think that depends on the situation.

Use the correct preposition: the verb phrase 'depend on' requires the preposition 'on', not 'of'. Replace 'of' with 'on' to form the correct collocation.

× because it's easier and it's more and more, you know you can do it every day.

✓ because it's easier and more convenient; you can do it every day.

'more and more' is awkward here as a comparison; use an adjective or adverb that compares suitability (easier and more convenient). Also split into two clauses for clarity and natural flow.

× So I like handwriting.

✓ So I like handwriting for personal use.

The original sentence is short but vague in context; adding 'for personal use' clarifies contrast with typing. This is a structural clarity improvement rather than strict grammar fix.

× When I write something in my diary for for a personal project, for example, it's OK.

✓ When I write something in my diary for a personal project, for example, it's OK.

There is a repeated word 'for for'. Remove the duplicate to correct the preposition usage and make the sentence grammatical.

× I usually type in my laptop every day and I don't have any, umm, desktop, umm, computer.

✓ I usually type on my laptop every day and I don't have a desktop computer.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'laptop' (type on a laptop). Also 'any desktop computer' is unnatural here; 'a desktop computer' is appropriate when stating non-possession of a single item.

× So when I was working in an office, I usually use my, uh, desktop computer.

✓ So when I was working in an office, I usually used my desktop computer.

Past time marker 'when I was working' requires past tense 'used' rather than present 'use'. Maintain consistent past tense in the clause.

× And for me, it's very comfortable using, umm, I, I can do many things.

✓ And for me, it's very comfortable to use; I can do many things.

Use the infinitive 'to use' after 'comfortable' rather than the gerund 'using' in this context. Remove filler repetition 'I, I' and restructure into two clear clauses.

× I don't remember very well, but I think I learned that when I was probably a child because at home we had a desktop, a computer.

✓ I don't remember very well, but I think I probably learned it when I was a child because we had a desktop computer at home.

Reorder elements for natural English: place 'probably' before 'learned' or 'I probably learned it'. Remove the unnecessary comma in 'desktop, a computer' and use 'desktop computer' as a single noun; place 'at home' at the end for normal word order.

× And I, I remember that like a funny time because my brother was like used to play there very much and I was.

✓ And I remember it as a funny time because my brother used to play there a lot, and so did I.

Replace 'that like a funny time' with 'it as a funny time' for correct reporting. 'Used to play' is the correct habitual past expression; remove extra 'like' and change 'very much' to 'a lot'. Use 'so did I' to indicate shared past habit concisely.

× I think I have improved my type in very natural just with practice.

✓ I think I have improved my typing very naturally just with practice.

Use the noun/gerund 'typing' rather than 'type'. Use the adverb 'naturally' to modify 'improved'. Remove unnecessary 'in' which makes the phrase ungrammatical.

× I think I practiced more when I start working in a university.

✓ I think I practiced more when I started working at a university.

The time clause refers to the past, so 'start' should be past 'started'. Use 'at a university' (or 'in a university' is possible but 'at' is more common for workplace).

× I was part of an administrative team, so I I was practicing there very much.

✓ I was part of an administrative team, so I practiced there a lot.

Use simple past 'practiced' to match 'I was'. Remove duplicated 'I' and replace 'very much' with the natural adverb phrase 'a lot'.