打字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct small errors (e.g., 'much more faster' → 'much faster'; 'inifi inefficiently' unclear → 'less efficient').

範例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s much faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit documents quickly and use cloud storage to access them anywhere, which makes my work more efficient.

建議: Remove hesitation and redundant phrases, and correct grammar. Give one clear topic sentence then add a specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Replace vague phrases ('work on a coffee') with accurate ones.

範例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it’s portable. For instance, I often take my laptop to a café or the library so I can work in a quieter, more comfortable environment.

建議: Use a clear past-time topic sentence and tighten the supporting details. Fix grammar (use articles and plural forms) and add a linking word for coherence. Be specific about the age or grade and the practice tool.

範例: I learned to type in primary school when I took a weekly computer class. The teacher showed us typing techniques, and we used a typing program that helped me practice accuracy and speed.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct tense and articles. Replace informal phrasing ('I don't even attempt') with more natural expressions. Mention a concrete habit or method and use a linking word to explain the result.

範例: I haven’t practiced typing deliberately, but I type on my phone and laptop daily, so my speed has improved over time. For example, writing emails and essays regularly has helped me become more accurate and faster.

× I prefer typing because I think it is much more faster and convenient than handwriting, and I think handwriting may be more inifi inefficiently.

✓ I prefer typing because I think it is much faster and more convenient than handwriting, and I think handwriting may be more inefficient.

The word 'more faster' is incorrect because 'faster' is the comparative form and does not take 'more'; use 'much faster' or 'more fast' (but 'faster' is correct). 'Much more' should modify an adjective without -er. Also 'inifi inefficiently' appears to be a typo: 'inefficient' (adjective) fits after 'more' or use 'more inefficiently' if describing the manner; here we compare the state, so 'more inefficient' or simply 'inefficient' is correct. Suggestion: use 'much faster and more convenient' and 'more inefficient' or 'inefficient'.

× I I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is very easy to carry it, so I can carry it to anywhere and I can work on a coffee or library which is more quiet and healthy.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is very easy to carry, so I can take it anywhere and I can work in a café or a library, which are quieter and better for my health.

There was a duplicated 'I I'. 'Carry it' is redundant after saying 'easy to carry' so omit the second 'it'. Use 'take it anywhere' not 'carry it to anywhere'. Use 'work in a café or a library' (preposition 'in' and article 'a'). 'Which are quieter and better for my health' corrects agreement: 'café or a library' is plural in reference so use 'are quieter' and 'better for my health' is clearer than 'healthy'.

× When I was in primary school, I had a computer class every week and teacher taught us how to type on a keyboard and at that time we had application which helped us to practice type work.

✓ When I was in primary school, I had a computer class every week and the teacher taught us how to type on a keyboard, and at that time we had an application that helped us practice typing.

Missing article 'the' before 'teacher'. Use past tense 'taught' is correct but add 'the'. 'We had application' needs the indefinite article 'an application'. Use 'that' as relative pronoun. 'Practice type work' is awkward; use the gerund 'practice typing'.

× I don't even attempt to improve it deliberately, but I type on phones or laptop every day, so my speed increased and I become more familiar with it.

✓ I don't even attempt to improve it deliberately, but I type on my phone or laptop every day, so my speed has increased and I have become more familiar with it.

Tense mismatch: the first clause is present simple, so results continuing to present should use present perfect: 'has increased' and 'have become' to show change up to now. Also use possessive 'my phone or laptop'.